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劍15‘拍了拍’你：官方真題做了嗎

在之前的文章系列中，KK老師從趨勢預測的角度，給大家詳解了劍15的小作文和大作文，以及書后范文給到我們的備考方向。今天我就要帶大家來再往下走一層，看看面對具體題目我們需要注意些什么。

廣告還有影響力嗎?

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

這是劍15 Test 3的大作文考題。

廣告/媒體是雅思考試中的一個常規(guī)話題，歷年考過的考察角度包括：廣告的利弊，針對孩子的廣告，應該怎么約束廣告等。

所以很多同學在看到“Advertising”這個關(guān)鍵詞的時候，嘴角會揚起一絲微笑，然后條件反射似的，將自己背過的答案——廣告操控人們，廣告顯示的不真實，廣告創(chuàng)造一種消費文化等等，堆砌在紙上。

然而如果這樣去展開，這篇文章就妥妥地陷入“偏題”。因為人家問的是“廣告是否對人有影響力”，而你答的全是“廣告為什么不好”。

其實觀察最近出題趨勢，無論是劍15還是真題回憶，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)，在大家熟悉的話題之下(還是那些教育、工作、社會、媒體、環(huán)境等等)，常?？疾煲恍┍容^不那么“熟悉”的角度。

這些角度非常刁鉆，先給大家喂一勺蜜糖：啊呀，這個話題我準備過!殊不知其實是一劑毒藥：等到你迫不及待把prepared answer寫滿一張紙才發(fā)現(xiàn)，誒，好像哪里不對，好像隱約覺得，題目問的其實不是這個。

所以拿到題目之后，我們來做的第一件事，先弄清楚在問什么。比如拿到一個discussion討論題型，不要只是讀一遍“有的人這樣想，有的人那樣想”，一定要將題目中雙方爭論的問題概括出來。

例如前面的廣告題目，我們可以試著這樣去概括“他們爭論的是廣告對人到底有沒有影響力”。

那么我們可以圍繞著這幾個問題去展開brainstorming：

1.廣告的影響力很大嗎，體現(xiàn)在哪里，廣告通過什么策略實現(xiàn)這種影響力的?

2.廣告沒什么影響力，對誰來說，這是一個最新的變化嗎，為什么會這樣呢?

現(xiàn)在去構(gòu)思以上問題的答案，再組織起來寫在自己的文章里，就不會產(chǎn)生方向性的錯誤了。

其實在議論文中，有三種基本的問題，在回答這些問題并給出自己觀點的時候，也相應會形成三種不一樣的claim觀點。

第一種是Claim of fact，這一種觀點是在回答“是不是”的問題。比如“你覺得現(xiàn)在的廣告對人有影響嗎”，回答是或者不是。

第二種是Claim of Value，這一種觀點是在回答“好不好”的問題，價值判斷，比如“你覺得廣告對人是積極還是消極影響”。

最后一種是Claim of policy，這一種觀點是在回答“該不該”的問題，評估怎么做，怎么解決問題，比如“該不該禁止針對兒童的廣告”。

雅思寫作的話題眾多，然后千變?nèi)f化，核心的觀點類型無非就是這三種：討論事實，討論價值，討論方法。

學會了嗎?來練習一下：

Nowadays, people can shop, work and communicate with others via the Internet. They do not need to do these face-to-face. Is this a positive or negative development?

要回答這個題目，我們的思考方向是“人們依賴網(wǎng)絡(luò)的利和弊”

More people are using mobile phones and computers to communicate. Therefore people are losing the ability to communicate with each other face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

再來看這個問題，乍一看和上面那個是不是很像?但注意題目中的結(jié)論是“因為網(wǎng)絡(luò)，人們正在失去面對面交流的能力”，這顯然是一個事實fact，因此思考的方向是“人們有沒有失去這種能力，為什么”。

所以呀，同學們現(xiàn)在明白了嗎，哪怕在題目中看到很熟悉的關(guān)鍵字，也要多思考一分鐘，用老師教的方法想一想，它到底想問什么。

在寫作中，語法、詞匯、句型缺一不可，但邏輯和思路才是根本～

2017年11月25日雅思寫作真題大作文7分范文

題目為：As major cities around the world are growing fast and many problems occur. What are the problems that young people live in cities are caused by continued growth? What solutions do you suggest?城市擴張給城市里的年輕人帶來了哪些問題，如何解決這些問題?范文來自唐老雅。下文范文自?。?/p>

解析：本周雅思作文問的是城市擴張給城市里的年輕人帶來了哪些問題，如何解決這些問題?

城市擴張，意味著越來越多的年輕人涌入城市，這會帶來什么樣的問題?其實，稍微想一下，我們就能發(fā)現(xiàn)各種可能的問題，比如就業(yè)壓力，住房壓力，交通擁堵，城市安全，子女教育等等。至于解決辦法，無非是政府擴大就業(yè)機會，重視年輕人再教育問題，甚至限制年輕人進入大城市等等?？傮w來說，本周題目的難度并不大，這類問題也是我們平時都經(jīng)常討論和思考的，因此，本周作文比拼的可能還是在語言表達方面。

7分雅思寫作真題大作文范文：

Now it seems that all the big cities around the world are still endlessly expanding. The population of Shanghai, for example, was just 10 million in 1990s, yet today the figure has soared up to 30 million. The cosmopolitan expansion means that more people, young people in particular, are rushing into the big cities and this may cause a host of problems.

The first problem that faces the young people in big cities is that a good job will become increasingly difficult to come by since the competition in the job market will surely intensify as young people, most of whom are well educated, decide to pursue their dreams in the big cities. It is now not uncommon that a university position may attract more than 100 applicants. Secondly, as these young people settle down in the big cities, they will soon have their own family, which will impose great pressure on the city’s housing. In fact, this is exactly one of the major reasons why housing in the big cities today is so expensive. Then, when their children reach the school age, they will find it hard to get them into school, because the educational resources are very limited. Finally, a large number of young people living under great pressure in the big cities may bring about such social problems as unemployment and crimes.

To solve these problems, I would suggest that the government take measures to limit the number of people migrating into the big cities. In fact, cities like New York and Beijing have already set standards for those who want to come in. Meanwhile, it is highly advisable that the government offer practical programs so that the young people living in the big cities can receive further education to make them more competitive in the job market. The most essential thing that the government should do, of course, is develop a strong economy, which is the most effective cure for the diseases in the big cities.(332 words)

本范文可借鑒的表達

Soar up 飆升

A host of 許多 (=many)

Come by 獲得;得到

Not uncommon 不罕見

Impose...on... 強加......在......身上

Set standards 制定標準

2017年11月25日雅思真題寫作大作文高分范文

題目是：As major cities around the world are growing fast and many problems occur. What are the problems that young people five in cities are caused by continued growth? What solutions do you suggest?

雅思寫作大作文范文：

As major cities around the world are growing fast and many problems occur. What are the problems that young people five in cities are caused by continued growth? What solutions do you suggest?

There seems to be many problems to young people today in fast growing cities such as Beijing, London and Sydney etc. This essay will analyse some typical problems and offer possible solutions.

One evident problem is the poor behaviours of the young. Nowadays, young people are easily influenced by the questionable contents such as those violent images in the mass media and on the internet etc. For example, the youth have easy access to social networking websites on which they might come across inappropriate language and behaviours of adults without any expectation. Young people who crave attention may imitate these as a way to distinguish themselves.

I think the key factor to alleviating the situation is for teachers and parents to pay more attention to the development of young people's personality and morality instead of focusing on the academic performance only. In this way, students are more likely to become active and able members of the society another obvious problem is the increasing rate of youth unemployment. One of the most immediate effects of the problem is that those jobless graduates cannot find a way to earn a living; thus, being unable to support themselves and their families or to cover the loans which they might have for their expensive education, creating much pressure on themselves and their families, both financially and psychologically. This is far from a personal or private problem but also an issue for society as a whole. When the rate of youth unemployment uses, it may increase the chance of social instability, for the jobless young people with resentment and disappointment may easily form gangs or groups to commit robbery or other more serious crimes.

An important thing concerning young graduates themselves should be taken into consideration to address this problem. They should be advised to adjust their expectations and embark on some seemingly more fundamental work, for example, jobs in the communities or rural areas. This may work efficiently to reduce the current unemployment rates.

2017年11月25日雅思寫作Task1原創(chuàng)小作文范文

題目為：The diagram below describes how to change organic waste into garden fertilizers. Describe the process.以下為范文及范文解析

The flow chart illustrates the process by which organic waste are converted into garden manure.

It is noticeable that five stages are shown on the diagram. The processes begin with preparing equipment and end at spreading compost materials.

At the initial stage, a plastic container which is about two cubic meters can be used and the cover on the top of it should be kept sealed. Meanwhile, drilling some holes enables air to pass through the device. After that, waste materials including food, grass and newspaper are put into the container layer by layer, of which the depth is the same with 15 centimeters.

At the third stage in the process, the materials are mixed with moderate nitrogen and water is added to keep sufficient moisture before placing the container on hot weather condition. Then, gases escape from the holes after the device is heated by hot weather. Finally, six months later, compost ingredients and worms are produced into high-quality fertilizers which could be spread on gardens.字數(shù) 167 words

范文原創(chuàng)自小站葉瑜琪老師

3.高分表達

be converted into 轉(zhuǎn)換成為

garden manure 花園肥料

It is noticeable that…… 顯著的是..

At the initial stage 最開始階段

After that 之后

layer by layer, 逐層

At the third stage in the process 第三階段

are mixed with 被混合

high-quality fertilizers 優(yōu)質(zhì)肥料

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