很多同學對于能在托??谡Z中拿到高分的學霸都很佩服,有時候可能也會覺得納悶,為什么同樣的一道題,人家就能說得比我更好想得比我更全面深刻呢?今天小編給大家?guī)砹送懈?谡Z高分學霸答題思路實例對比講解,希望能夠幫助到大家,下面小編就和大家分享,來欣賞一下吧。
托福口語高分學霸答題思路實例對比講解
托??谡Z高分學霸答題思路對比分析
例題:
If a foreign friend of yours is visiting your city. Which part of town would you recommend him or her to see? And why?
普通考生答案:
If a foreign friend is visiting my city, I would recommend him or her to visit the YU Garden because of the following reasons. First, there are many charming buildings. Some of them were even designed and built like a 100 years ago. Second, there are many local restaurants around and my friend can taste different kinds of delicious food. Last but not least, the place in the center of my town and the transportation to get there is very convenient. To sum up, If a foreign friend is visiting my city, I would recommend him or her to visit the YU Garden.
為什么這個答案得不了高分?
1. 開頭重復原題的句子是一個安全但是比較被動的做法。學霸的答案是要體現(xiàn)出主動而自然的表達;
2. 中間的三個理由貌似比較充分但實際上每個理由都存在擴展不充分的問題,結(jié)果變成了理由的羅列。學霸的答案重點不是在理由的數(shù)量(很多題目在15秒職能想到一個理由),而是在理由的細節(jié)擴展上;
3. 結(jié)尾的總結(jié)貌似讓整個答案更加完整,但實際上只是對主題句的完全重復,沒有任何意義上的功能。學霸的答案一般會把寶貴的時間花在陳述真正有意義的內(nèi)容上,即使是總結(jié)也需要用更多樣化的語言;
4. First/second/lastnot not least/to sum up這些過渡語表面上讓整個答案有邏輯,實際上會讓評分者認為答題者在使用準備好的答題模板,導致被壓分。學霸的答案是采用更佳自然的過渡。
所以,學霸的答案應(yīng)該是這樣的:
I’ll be happy to show my foreign friend the YU Garden which is a beautiful old community loaded with local culture.
For one, the architecture there is amazing. I mean some of the buildings were designed and constructed like more than 100 years ago and those can give you a really good sense of history and ancient local culture, the gigantic stone gate decorated with nice-looking patterns,the delicate wooden roof painted with colorful pictures. You name it .
Also,tons of local restaurants brings another reason to be there. You can find almost all kinds of local snacks which can never be found anywhere else.
Isn't that the perfect place for a foreign friend?
托福口語中的語法錯誤如何避免
我們一起來看下面的例子:
My teacher gave interesting assignments andmotivating the students.
很顯然,這屬于混用語法結(jié)構(gòu)的一個典型錯誤。這會使句子產(chǎn)生歧義:難道是說My teacher gave interesting andmotivating assignments to the students? 因為本句中interesting和motivating 是平行結(jié)構(gòu). 或者是My teachergave interesting assignments and motivated thestudents? 因為亦可以理解成gave和 motivated是平行結(jié)構(gòu).所以錯誤使用語法會帶來許多意想不到的麻煩。
當我們重復使用一個短語或單詞的時候,不僅會給人以詞匯量過小的感覺,有時甚至也會造成誤解。我們來看一個例子:
My teacher wrote the assignment on the chalkboard. The assignment was on thechalkboard until the teacher erased the assignment after we had all done the assignment.事實上這句話的觀點會更加清晰,如果我們將重復的詞替換為其他表達的話。我們再來看看改進后的表達:
My teacher wrote the assignment on the chalkboard. She erased the board after we had allcompleted the task.
其中 assignment 被替換為 task; teacher 變?yōu)榱藄he; chalkboard 被改為了board. 不但句子顯得更加生動活潑不刻板,信息量也比原來要多了。
避免托福口語語法的典型錯誤,能夠做到舉一反三,靈活應(yīng)用,相信托??谡Z考試中的其他問題就能迎刃而解了。
好習慣注定托福口語高分
1. 每天堅持練習口語一兩個小時,鍛煉你說英文的肌肉習慣
2. 養(yǎng)成大聲讀英文的習慣,再嘗試著用腹式一口氣練習,這樣使你說出的英文更有底氣,更流暢。
3.每天早晨起床后,張大嘴,啊五分鐘,這樣有利于練好你的腹式一口氣。
4. 養(yǎng)成每天去運用的習慣,學過了很多東西,要經(jīng)常拿出來曬太陽,要學會賣弄英文,你可以找Partner ,也可以對著天空,大樹,小鳥對話,只要把這些語言運用自如了,變成你自己的了,什么都好!
5. 學會正確使用復讀機,先精聽,然后去讀,去聽自己的發(fā)音,找出與磁帶錄音的不同,直到自己的發(fā)音與磁帶的發(fā)音一樣了,再接著聽下一個。
6. 要有專一的精神,不要兩天學美式的,兩天學英式的,我們說這兩種發(fā)音都挺好的,所以,你喜歡哪種就模仿哪種,而且要保證你所模仿的材料從始到終幾乎是那一種發(fā)音。
7. 要敢說英文,不要怕犯錯。記?。涸谀阌谜_的方法練習之后,你犯的錯越多,憑著語感糾正的錯誤也越多,進步也就越大!學習外語的好習慣。
8. 老師,我每天都模仿了一個小時,可以已經(jīng)十天了,還是讀不好。
做得很好,習慣是養(yǎng)成的,只要你用正確的方法去模仿,每天堅持去模仿就是一種好習慣,當然,并不是說我模仿一個小時,發(fā)音就能跟磁帶一模一樣,而是每模仿一次就會進步一點點,這只是時間的問題,也許第十一天,第十二天,就讀好了呢?最重要的是你堅持每天去模仿,養(yǎng)成一天不模仿就渾身難受的好習慣!
9. 每天找人去運用,學一句用一句的好習慣,語言的學習是邊模仿邊練習,邊運用。不能說等我學好了會說了才去說,而是能說幾句就說幾句,幾天說一句比十年說不出幾句要強得多 。
10. 每天堅持復習的好習慣,學過的東西不能丟了,要每天都復習,把練習過的句子拿出來做口譯。
同學們除了堅持執(zhí)行好以上10大習慣,還應(yīng)該時刻關(guān)注自己的學習進度,充分了解自己的英語口語水平,在一段時間的學習后給自己做測試,如果有所進步就該保持現(xiàn)在的學習方式,反之就應(yīng)該檢討一下自己還有哪些不足之處,考慮是否應(yīng)該改變學習方式。
托??谡Z之“生病”的表達方式
(1)一般病情:
He feels headache, nausea and vomiting. (他覺得頭痛、惡心和想吐。)
He is under the weather. (他不舒服,生病了。)
He began to feel unusually tired. (他感到反常的疲倦。)
He feels light-headed. (他覺得頭暈。)
She has been shut-in for a few days. (她生病在家?guī)滋炝恕?
Her head is pounding. (她頭痛。)
His symptoms include loss of appetite, weight loss, excessive fatigue, fever and chills. (他的癥狀包括沒有食欲、體重減輕、非常疲倦、發(fā)燒和發(fā)冷。)
He feels exhausted or fatigued most of the time. (他大部份時間都覺得非常疲倦。)
He has been lacking in energy for some time. (他感到虛弱有段時間了。)
He feels drowsy, dizzy and nauseated. (他覺得昏昏欲睡,頭暈?zāi)垦:拖胪隆?
He feels as though everything around him is spinning. (他感到周圍的東西都在打轉(zhuǎn)。)
He has noticed some loss of hearing. (他發(fā)覺聽力差些。)
She has some pains and itching around her eyes. (她眼睛四周又痛又癢。)
(2) 傷風感冒:
He has been coughing up rusty or greenish-yellow phlegm. (他咳嗽帶有綠黃色的痰。)
His eyes feel itchy and he has been sneezing. (他眼睛發(fā)癢,而且一直在打噴嚏。)
He has a fever, aching muscles and hacking cough. (他有發(fā)燒,筋骨酸痛和常??人?。) (hacking = constant)
He coughed with sputum and feeling of malaise. (他咳嗽有濃痰,而且覺得很虛弱。) (malaise = debility)
He gets a cold with a deep hacking cough. (他傷風咳嗽。)
He has a headache, aching bones and joints. (他頭痛,骨頭、關(guān)節(jié)也痛。)
He has a persistent cough. (他不停地在咳。) 或
He has bouts of uncontrollable coughing. (他一陣陣的咳嗽,難以控制。)
He has hoarse and has lost his voice sometimes. (他聲音嘶啞,有時失聲。)
He has a sore throat and a stuffy nose. (他嗓子疼痛而且鼻子不通。)
His breathing is harsh and wheezy. (他呼吸時,有氣喘似的呼哧呼哧作響。)
He has a stabbing pain that comes on suddenly in one or both temples. (有時突然間太陽穴刺痛。)
He has a runny nose, sneezing or a scratchy throat. (他流鼻水,打噴嚏和喉嚨沙啞。)
(3) 手腳毛?。?/p>
His both hands and feet ache all over. (他兩手兩腳都很酸痛。)
He has pain on the sole of his feet. (他腳底很痛。)
There is a wart-like lump on the sole of right foot. (我右腳底有個像肉疣般的硬塊。)
His ankles look puffy and they pit when he presses them with his finger. (他的足踝好像腫了,用手按,就有小坑痕。) (pit = small dent form)(句里的 they 和 them 都是指 ankles)
The pain in his left foot is accompanied by redness and swelling. (左腳酸痛,并有紅腫。)
The joints near his fingernails and knuckles look swollen. (指頭和指節(jié)旁邊的關(guān)節(jié),似乎有腫大。)
He has numbness and tingling in his hands and fingers. (他的手和指頭感到麻木和刺痛。)
His legs become painful following strenuous exercise. (激烈運動后,他的腿就痛。)
His knee is misshapen or unable to move. (他的膝蓋有點畸形,也不能動。)
There are some swellings in his armpit. (他的腋窩腫大。)
He is troubled with painful muscles and joints. (他的筋骨和關(guān)節(jié)都痛。)
She is troubled by the pains in the back and shoulders. (她的后背和肩膀都痛。)
His knee has been bothering him for some time. (他的膝蓋不舒服,已有一段時間了。)
(4) 睡眠不好:
He is sleeping poorly.(他睡不好)
He has difficulty in sleeping, inability to concentrate.(他不易入睡,也難集中精神。)
It is usually hard for her to fall asleep when she goes to bed at night.(她晚上就寢,很難入睡。)
He wakes during the night or early morning and finds it difficult to fall asleep again.(他晚間或清早醒來后,再也不能入睡。)
He has nightmares occasionally.(他有時做噩夢。)
5) 呼吸方面:
His breathing has become increasingly difficult.(他呼吸越來越困難。)
He has to breathe through his mouth.(他要用口呼吸。)
He is short of breath, even when he has not been exercising, he is breathless.(他喘氣;即使不運動,他也是上氣不接下氣。)
His cough is more like wheezing.(他的咳嗽有呼哧呼哧的響聲。)
His cough is dry, producing no phlegm.(他是干咳,沒有痰。)
He has coughed up blood.(他咳嗽有血。)
His nose stuffed up when he had a cold.(他感冒時鼻子就不通。)
He coughs up a lot of phlegm (thick spit) on most days.(他多半時間咳出濃濃的痰。)
He has a feeling of tightness in the chest or a feeling that he is suffocating.(他胸部覺得悶悶的,好像透不過氣來。)
(6)口腔毛?。?/p>
He has pain in his teeth or jaw. (他的牙齒和下巴疼痛。)
He has some problems with his teeth. (他牙齒有問題。)
The tooth hurts only when he bites down on it. (他咬東西時,牙齒就痛。)
His gums are red and swollen. (他的牙床紅腫。)
His tongue is red and sore all over. (他的舌頭到處紅和痛。)
His breath smells bad and he has a foul taste in his mouth. (他口里有怪味。)
His gums do bleed. (他牙床有出血。)
He has some sore swellings on his gum or jaw. (他的牙床和下巴腫痛。)
He has sore places on or around the lip. (他的嘴唇和周圍都很痛。)
There are cracks at the corners of his mouth. (他的嘴巴角落破了。)
There are some discolored areas inside on his tongue. (他舌頭里邊有些地方顏色怪怪的。)
(7) 腸胃毛?。?/p>
He has a bloated, uncomfortable feeling after meal. (他飯后肚子覺得脹脹的,很不舒服。) 或
He feels bloated after eating.
He has bouts of abdominal pain. (他有一陣陣的肚痛。)
He feels bloated in his abdominal area. (他感到肚子脹脹的。)
The pain is mainly in the lower (upper) right part of the abdomen. (痛是在肚子下半部。)
He has nausea and vomiting. (他有惡心和嘔吐。)
It is difficult or painful for him to swallow. (他吞下食物時會痛。)
He has passed more gas than usual. (他放…比平常多。)
He has been constipated for a few days. (他便秘了好幾天。)
He suffers pains when he moves his bowels. (他大便時很痛。)
He has some bleeding from his rectum. (他的肛門出血。)
He has noticed some blood in his bowel movements. (他發(fā)覺大便時有些血。)
His bowel movements are pale, greasy and foul smelling.
or
His bowel movements are grey (or black) in color. (他的大便呈灰白色。)
He has trouble with diarrhea. (他拉肚子。)
(8) 血壓等等:
His blood pressure is really up. (他的血壓很高。)
High blood pressure is creeping up on him.
He has noticed frequent urination, increased thirst and unexpected tireness. (他發(fā)覺常常小便,非??诳屎透悠>?。)
It is a chest pain that gets worse when he bends over or lies down. (他彎腰或躺下時,胸部更痛。)
He has noticed excessive sweating and unexplained tireness. (他體會到過度的出汗和難以解釋的疲倦。)
He has a sharp pain in one area of his spine. (他的脊椎某部位刺痛。)
He has pain in other joints including hip, knee and ankle. (其它關(guān)節(jié)疼痛包括臀部、膝蓋和腳踝。)
His eyes seem to be bulging. (他的眼睛覺得有點腫脹。)
He has double vision. (他的視線有雙重影子。)
He feels there is a film over his eyes. (他覺得眼里有種薄膜似的東西,擋住視線。)
His vision in the right eye blurred. (他右眼視線模糊不清。)
He has had some earaches lately. (他近來耳朵有點痛。)
He has a repeated buzzing or other noises in his ears. (他耳朵常有嗡嗡的聲音)
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