托福寫作中無論是獨立寫作還是綜合寫作都和大家平時接觸過的英文作文有一定區(qū)別。今天小編給大家?guī)砹送懈＞C合獨立寫作考試7大特點分析,希望能夠幫助到大家，一起來學(xué)習(xí)吧。
【基礎(chǔ)常識】托福綜合獨立寫作考試7大特點分析
托福獨立寫作特點分析
對于獨立寫作來講，從早期托福考試一直延續(xù)下來的形式大家比較熟悉，包括思路和寫作材料，需要我們關(guān)注的有幾點：
Well Organized & Well Developed
怎么樣讓文章結(jié)構(gòu)寫的完整，而且把你的觀點闡述清楚。大家在寫的過程中可能Developed過程是特別重要的，你平時閱讀的時候要特別注意。
Appropriate Word Choice
就是你怎么樣把這個詞用對，寫出來一句話你要讓閱卷者完成閱讀并且完成理解如果你用一個說法以前沒有人用過，這個時候他看了也不知道是什么意思，如果我們第二語言學(xué)英語的時候，就像英語是第一母語學(xué)漢語的時候犯的錯誤是一樣的。
Cohesive & Coherent
主要是在語言論述和闡述過程中的問題，托福寫作輔導(dǎo)提到托福的作文寫的是議論文，不是小說也不是散文，所以在這個過程當(dāng)中如何讓文章結(jié)構(gòu)變得嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，這是重要的過程，你怎么樣讓它實現(xiàn)完整的論文結(jié)構(gòu)。另外在描述的過程中需要保持語言的連貫，第一個是邏輯的連貫性，邏輯是不是一致的，有沒有出現(xiàn)沖突。第二是語意上的連貫。
Variety of Language Use
你需要一種語言變化，平時在寫作文的時候會有一個問題，寫任何一個東西的時候我可能想腦子里信出來的表述方式非常有限，所以導(dǎo)致一講Said你就聽不明白了，對于語言的變化并不是要去炫，而是要你的語言表述有一種特征，向考官表明你能自由駕馭一種語言，這也是托福考試本的核心和目的。
托福綜合寫作特點分析
No Attitude of the author
獨立寫作是你自己的想法，綜合寫作一定不能有自己的想法，你要看別人的東西，不能帶有自己的觀點態(tài)度或是看法。
Completely repeated Points
必須完整復(fù)述你聽到、看到的東西，你在寫的時候不能漏掉聽到和看到的。
Paraphrase
考生必須具有能夠把原始內(nèi)容轉(zhuǎn)化為自身表達(dá)方式的能力，也就是不能直接照搬照抄原文內(nèi)容，無論是聽力中的語句還是閱讀中的資料，都需要進(jìn)行一定的改寫加工才行。我們在大學(xué)上課的時候需要看教科書、講義，聽教授講課，同時要做筆記，同時還要有自己的理解。托?？荚囋谶@點上把所有的練習(xí)都放在一個環(huán)境當(dāng)中，通過閱讀也好、寫作也好會對你自身在美國的學(xué)習(xí)打下非常好的基礎(chǔ)。
托福寫作句型賞析：一句話三種邏輯
名句欣賞：
There has been an implicit assumption that because electric cars do not burn fossil fuels, they are clearer for the environment and safer for people, but that does not take into account how the electricity they use is generated.
解析：
這句話比較長，但邏輯主干還是比較簡單：
There has been an assumption that A, but that does not take into account B.
有一個假設(shè)A，但這并沒有考慮到B
A 是 assumption 的具體內(nèi)容， B 是考慮的內(nèi)容，即 = take B into account
A=because electric cars do not burn fossil fuels, they are clearer for the environment and safer for people
1) A 是 assumption 的同位語
2)electric cars 電動汽車
3)burn fossil fuels 燃燒化石燃料
4)safe 在這里的意思是[not likely to lead to any physical harm or danger ] 不損害健康的
整個A的意思是： 因為電動汽車不燃燒化石燃料，因此它們對環(huán)境更清潔，對人們更無害。
B= how the electricity they use is generated.
1) they use 是后置定語，修飾 [ the electricity]
2) generate electricity 發(fā)電
3) B= 它們使用的電是如何生產(chǎn)的
這句話有三種邏輯，[因果邏輯][比較邏輯][轉(zhuǎn)折邏輯]，值得好好模仿
整句話的意思是：有一個隱含的假設(shè)：因為電動車不燃燒化石燃料，所以他們對環(huán)境更清潔，對人們更無害，但是這并沒有考慮它們使用的電是如何生產(chǎn)出來的。
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Independent Task
Nowadays, children rely too much on the technology, like computers, smartphone, video games for fun and entertainment; playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for the children's development.
寫作參考一:
For parents, how to well plan their children’s development has been a huge problem. While some children are given more time on technological gadgets, others are more inclined to choose some activities, such as going camping or traveling. For me, the former option would be a better one.
Admittedly, playing simpler toys or playing outside might be good choice for children. Simpler toys, namely Lego, are a good way to develop children’s thinking on solving the problem through block by block. By assembling the pieces for different blocks, children could assemble an even big piece, such as the classic London Tower Bridge. Also, playing with friends is helpful. When they are playing with others, they would cooperate with them to playing sports or even solve problems. However, on balance, both of these ways are limited in helping children. Toys and outdoor activities are restrained to their actual forms: parents need lots of money to buy different toys to help children develop, and they pay a great amount of money on helping their children for different activities. For those parents who suffer from financial burden, these are not effective ways for children’s development. Comparatively, technology would be a more effective way for children.
Firstly, Internet via computers and smartphone are essential for their development. In other words, Internet provides students with vast amounts of information. According to a recent survey conducted by Gallup, after polling thousands of students from local high schools, most respondents claim that Internet is the No.1 helper from them to finish homework. When they have problems, they would search reference on Internet. Websites such as Google Scholar would be a wonderful tool for them to find some papers or academic reference for their homework. Meanwhile, Internet is a wonderful place for them to entertain as well. They could watch movies on Youku.com. They could even find interesting stories on sina.com. All funny experiences are available on Internet without causing children too much money.
In addition, video games are also necessary for children’s growth. When children are playing video games, they might learn some strategic thinking. For example, when I am playing FIFA 2016, I have to manage my team members according to their physical strength so that I could beat other teams. For those who run quickly, it would be a good idea for them to play forward; for those who are tall and strong, they would be better playing middle field. Because of this team management strategy, I have achieved many titles in the game. Learning from this, I would allocate my time in finishing homework according to my energy level. When I am energetic, I might choose the most difficult homework; if I am tired, I might choose some easy-to-do tasks, which would not cost me much time.
To conclude, while playing toys or spending time on outdoor activities is a good way for their development, technology would be better way.
寫作參考二:
2月28日：Nowadays, children rely too much on the technology, like computers, smartphone, video games for fun and entertainment; playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for the children's development.
Technological advancement has contributed to the invention of a wide range of electronic products and there are an increasing number of children who are reported to rely heavily on the technology. Thus, the controversy is raised among the public whether playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends are better for the children’s development. From my perspective, I insist on that depending on high technology is a rather right decision.
For one thing, children can learn more about the world and develop a better way of resolving problems. For instance, the upcoming Fourth Industrial Revolution heralds a thorough change of the composition of working force in the society and learning the latest news through computers or smartphones will lead children to be aware of what are needed urgently and what have been outdated, in this way, they can decide what kinds of capabilities and qualities they should develop for being accustomed to the fast-changing world. Besides, children nowadays have to accomplish diverse curriculums many difficult assignments like writing a paper related to how independent war was sparkled or what consequences had been aroused after the assassination of Lincoln. Computers can help resolve the problem more effectively by providing students with abundant references and historic documentation. Additionally, there have been more educational programs spreading through the Internet like TED that is designed to disseminate the most outstanding professors’ lectures throughout the world to share the greatest ideas with people in every corner of the world. Obviously, relying on the high-tech devices can be of great benefits for children both to resolve the problems they might meet during their study and learn more things beyond their textbooks.
For another thing, video games have been designed to be more alluring and intellectually demanding. To be more specific, there have occurred many more video games that are invented to exploit children’s imagination and also release their pressure. Take Minecraft, a popular game sweeping many primary and high school students, as an example. In the game, players can use diverse construction materials and tools to construct what they like such as a castle or a skyscraper even a city. Besides, by decorating the entities they created in many different styles, massive intellectual activities are needed like how to design the roof the house and where should put the pets in the city and etc. During the process, students can be fully occupied in the game, serving as an antidote to boredom that will be detrimental to students’ mental health if it can be erased promptly. Consequently, playing video games is a better choice for students to make to release their pressure and ensure their health.
Granted, I have to admit that playing outside with friends is also a better way of releasing pressure like playing sports that can help exercise children’s bodies to improve their physical quality. However, children might be injured while joining sports since they are lack of adequate physical exercises usually. However, playing video games will not trigger any possible injuries.
In a word, relying on technology is a better choice than playing simple toys or playing outside with friends for children’s development. Learning more out of the classroom, resolving academic problems as well as releasing workloads effectively can all reveal the superiority of relying on technology.
