雅思小作文對很多烤鴨來說,是雅思考試?yán)镒铍y的一環(huán)。畢竟是要跟數(shù)據(jù)打交道,很多人是擅于分析說理,今天小編給大家?guī)砹搜潘夹∽魑目焖賹懽鞣椒?希望能夠幫助到大家,一起來學(xué)習(xí)吧。
雅思小作文快速寫作方法
1. 雅思小作文寫作結(jié)構(gòu)搭建:
(1) 第一段的introduction:直接改寫題目——句型主動(dòng)改被動(dòng)或是反之,單詞可做稍微替換,雖然說改寫比較簡單,但是這一步驟缺一不可。一定要改寫題目,一定不能照抄。
(2) 第二段的overview:圖表中,你最先看到的,最最明顯的特征,你這里可以做以下稍微的總結(jié),因?yàn)榕履愫竺鏇]時(shí)間進(jìn)行總結(jié),小作文的時(shí)間最多只有20分鐘,要放在大作文后面寫,很多時(shí)候大作文會(huì)占據(jù)大于40分鐘的時(shí)間,那么你的小作文時(shí)間就會(huì)來不及,那么在這里你對于最最明顯的特征進(jìn)行總結(jié),就算到后面沒時(shí)間,也不會(huì)因?yàn)闆]有對圖表特征進(jìn)行總結(jié)而扣分。
(3) 第三段的details:圖表所提供的信息就是需要你進(jìn)行對比的。對比分兩種:縱向和橫向??v向是跟自己比,比之前自己增長了,還是下降了;橫向比是跟別人比,跟比人比我是第一還是最后。圖表中的數(shù)據(jù)信息,你無需所有的數(shù)據(jù)都寫在你的文中里,只需要特征明顯的,比如位于首位,位于最后這種,還有就是一定要進(jìn)行對比。
(4) 如果你前面的overview段有總結(jié)了,就無需再來個(gè)結(jié)尾段了,不過要是有時(shí)間,你也可以進(jìn)行一句話的結(jié)尾。
2. 雅思小作文素材積累
這邊給大家展示我自己所積累的小作文用到的素材。大家每天都拿出來看一遍,寫小作文的時(shí)候盡量用上去。
時(shí)期:from…to, between…and, over/ during the period from 1995 to 2005=over/during the period of one decade
上升:go up, climb, grow, rise, increase, ascend, show an upward trend=show an increasing/rise trend
表明/揭示:show/reveal/indicate/reflect/present/describe/illustrate/demonstrate/compare/give information about + n
緩慢、逐漸:slow, slowly=gradually=steadily=consistently=step by step,contious
迅速:rapid, quick, swift,sudden, sharp, dramatic
小幅度:slight(ly), modest(ly), moderate(ly), marginal(ly)
大幅度、明顯:sharp,drastic, considerable, noticeable, marked, dramatic, significant, substantially,
下降:fall, go down, drop, decrease, decline, descend, dip, dipped, show a downward trend, plummet, plunge
波動(dòng):fluctuate, fluctuation,eg: rise with some fluctuation, go up and down=be unstable/flexible=be in instability/flexibility
保持平穩(wěn)、不變:level out/off at + n=stabilize / hover at + n= reach a plateau at + n
Stay/keep/remain/maintain + stable/ unchanged/constant at+ n
大約:about,around, almost, nearly, roughly, approximately, just over/under…,… or so
達(dá)到最大值:reach the maximum=reach the peak/summit/culmination at + n=peak/summit/culminate at…=reach the highest point at
達(dá)到最小值: reach the minimum=reach/touch the bottom at…=bottom out at…=reach the lowest point at…
補(bǔ)充:according to = in accordance with= based in= in terms of =in the light of = in line with
Comparing…=compared with/to…=in comparison with…= different from…
While, whilst, whereas, yet
To conclude, in conclusion=to summarize, in summary=to sum up=all in all =overall
3. 雅思小作文寫作訓(xùn)練
小作文就最適合這種模式性的訓(xùn)練啦。有了上面的框架,還有就是積累各種說明文的上升下降,巨變啥的表達(dá)。去找那些老師們整理好的資源唄,不用自己準(zhǔn)備了,你要做的就是直接拿來用。這是站在巨人肩膀上,哈哈。
我用的是9分達(dá)人的那個(gè)母題訓(xùn)練,在清楚寫作骨骼的前提下,再來補(bǔ)充血肉和靈魂,哈哈。然后積累范文里面的好句子。有了骨架,寫作材料就是血和肉,你的主題思想就是寫作思路就是你整篇文章的靈魂,三者缺一不可。
一定要練習(xí)哈!三天就可以來一次訓(xùn)練了,我很慶幸找到了一個(gè)一起奮斗的小烤鴨,我們互相監(jiān)督,互相批改,嚴(yán)格的時(shí)間內(nèi)完成,然后兩個(gè)人進(jìn)行討論修改,再寫,再改,就是這么一路走過來的。也不要套模板吧,就是明白了寫作模式,有了框架,再加上題目的寫作思路,有了靈魂,再加上你的詞句,有了血肉,其實(shí)就是你自己的模板。這個(gè)時(shí)候你的小伙伴是很重要的,大家一起高歌歡唱,才會(huì)讓自己走得更遠(yuǎn)。
雅思寫作Task2生態(tài)類考官范文
Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why or why not?
Model Answer:
As human population is significantly rising every year, people's requirements are increasing too. We need more food, more machines, more place to live. As a result of this people need more land to satisfy their requirements. We cultivate and irrigate more and more land to plant vegetables, build new buildings, airports, roads, etc. I think sometimes we forget that we are not alone on this planet. I have to disagree with those people who think that human needs are more important than saving land for endangered animals. I base my opinion on the following points.
First of all, as I already mentioned, we are not alone on this planet. A few centuries ago we were the part of wild nature. I think we need to remember this fact and respect all creatures around us.
Second of all, I believe that we all need to think of the problem of overpopulation. The human population is dramatically increasing and we have to do something about it. From my opinion, every family should have no more than two children. It will help to stop the growth of population, decrease human needs for farmland, housing and industry.
In conclusion, I think it is a very topical question nowadays. My point is that all people should answer this question and find the solution.
雅思寫作Task2生態(tài)類考官范文
Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources, such as forests, animals, or clean water.
Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved.
Model Answer:
As human's population is dramatically rising every year, people's requirements are increasing too. We need more food, more fresh water, more places to live. As a result of this many parts of the world are losing essential and sometimes irreplaceable resources, such as forest, animals, or fresh water. In this essay I will focus on the threat of disappearing many wild animals.
The reason why I think that animals should be preserved is that all living creatures on this planet are connected with each other. So, the disappearance of only one species can cause dramatic changes in the planet and even death of many other living creatures. For example, the disappearance of bats will cause the huge increasing of insect population and this will reflect on all animals and plants. Another example is that if the population of bats increases, the population of insects will decrease significantly, and this will cause the disappearance of many plants because insects are the main pollinators. So, I think it is very important to preserve all species on our planet and live in harmony with our environment.
Another important reason why I think that animals should be saved is that I, personally, do not want my child to learn about different animals from books and not be able to see them alive. I think it is shameful for humankind to explain our children that we are the reason why those animals disappeared.
In conclusion, I would like to say that the issue about losing important natural resources is topical and open for debate nowadays. I believe that together people can make a difference. From my point of view, the first problem we should find a solution for is human's overpopulation. As I mentioned above people's demands are growing and this means we consume more and more natural resources. The second question, which is on the list of most important issues, is pollution including the air pollution, water pollution, etc.
雅思寫作需搭建行文基本框架
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