托福獨(dú)立寫作高分要點(diǎn)解讀, 說清楚邏輯關(guān)系很重要?今天小編給大家?guī)砹送懈＊?dú)立寫作高分要點(diǎn)解讀，希望能夠幫助到大家，下面小編就和大家分享，來欣賞一下吧。
托福獨(dú)立寫作高分要點(diǎn)解讀 說清楚邏輯關(guān)系很重要
托福獨(dú)立寫作為什么邏輯容易扣分?
很多人都覺得奇怪，為什么托福獨(dú)立寫作部分邏輯容易出錯(cuò)扣分呢?其實(shí)原因很簡(jiǎn)單，邏輯是個(gè)思維層面上的東西，而中國考生和老外出題者，在思維模式上對(duì)不上電波其實(shí)并不少見。
很多同學(xué)習(xí)慣了寫中文文章較為含蓄或者話里有話的思路，而老外考官其實(shí)并沒有義務(wù)去猜測(cè)你的想法，這種思維上的差異就會(huì)導(dǎo)致考生自以為已經(jīng)表達(dá)清楚的邏輯，其實(shí)老外考官根本就沒有GET到點(diǎn)，反而覺得考生沒把邏輯關(guān)系寫清楚。再加上托福寫作中電腦部分的e-rater評(píng)分也并不從內(nèi)容邏輯角度來給分，這就造成了中國考生很容易在邏輯中因?yàn)闆]把話說清楚而被扣分了。
實(shí)例講解托福獨(dú)立寫作的邏輯扣分
上面說了一些理論大家可能還沒完全理解，下面小編舉一個(gè)來自小站托福寫作學(xué)員的真實(shí)案例給大家分析一下：
學(xué)生習(xí)作節(jié)選
When one student pay his all attention to the professor, he can find the mistakes. And during the process of the discussion with the professor, students can learn a lot of new knowledge.
邏輯問題分析
這篇獨(dú)立寫作的題目是討論大學(xué)教育中學(xué)生和教授的關(guān)系。而這位同學(xué)寫的文章其實(shí)詞匯語法句式方面都還好，但偏偏就是邏輯問題太多。大家來看這段節(jié)選的句子，邏輯上的錯(cuò)誤多到別說是老外，就連同為中國人的小編都忍不了的地步。
為什么學(xué)生認(rèn)真聽講就能找到錯(cuò)誤?找到的到底是什么錯(cuò)誤誰的錯(cuò)誤?是老師講課犯的錯(cuò)誤還是學(xué)生自己的理解錯(cuò)誤?然后找到錯(cuò)誤和后面討論之間又是什么關(guān)系，兩個(gè)沒有明顯邏輯聯(lián)系的句子怎么就給連著寫了出來?
像這樣塞滿了邏輯問題的句子，就好像“元芳你怎么看?”“我用眼睛看。”一樣的無厘頭對(duì)答一樣，考官既看不懂更沒有義務(wù)和心思去猜你的行文邏輯，很可能直接一個(gè)邏輯部分不合格的評(píng)分就甩了出來，你的作文得分就這么掉了下來。
如何改善托福獨(dú)立寫作的邏輯論述?
那么，假如考生在托福獨(dú)立寫作中存在上述的論述邏輯問題，要怎么樣才能及時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)和改正過來呢?
1. 先列提綱再寫文章
寫作文之前列提綱是很好的習(xí)慣，但很多同學(xué)嫌麻煩或是為了節(jié)省時(shí)間都會(huì)跳過這個(gè)步驟，然而邏輯問題往往就是因?yàn)榇蠹覜]列提綱理清楚寫作思路所產(chǎn)生的。因此，小編希望大家在撰寫?yīng)毩懽鞯奈恼聲r(shí)，還是能夠先把提綱給列好，至少整篇文章的觀點(diǎn)，分論點(diǎn)，支持論據(jù)這些要先想清楚并且寫在草稿上，至于具體的詞匯語法句式則可以邊寫邊加入。這么做既能避免文章跑題，在邏輯論述上也能更有條理，有效避免邏輯錯(cuò)誤。
2. 找別人看文章
想要改善邏輯問題，那么考生需要先能夠發(fā)現(xiàn)問題才行。然而實(shí)際上大家想要找到自己平時(shí)寫作文時(shí)存在的邏輯漏洞卻并非易事。之所以邏輯問題不容易發(fā)現(xiàn)，原因在于考生自己往往是很難看出自身思維上的邏輯錯(cuò)誤的。本來就是按照自己的想法思維來寫的，大家理所當(dāng)然地會(huì)覺得別人也能看懂，發(fā)現(xiàn)不了問題實(shí)屬正常。而既然自己發(fā)現(xiàn)不了，那么最好的做法當(dāng)然是找別人來看了。
有條件的考生可以直接找托福寫作方面的老師或者擅長(zhǎng)英語寫作的朋友來替你看文章，沒有條件的也可以嘗試通過托?？荚嚾旱仍诰€方式找人來看自己的作文?？次恼碌囊蟛恍枰芨撸灰寗e人看看有沒有邏輯上的問題。也許你發(fā)現(xiàn)不了的邏輯錯(cuò)誤別人一眼就能看出來。通過這種方式來尋找自身作文的邏輯問題并加以改善，也是相當(dāng)不錯(cuò)的做法。
3. 用好邏輯關(guān)系詞
最后一個(gè)提升寫作邏輯的做法就是用好邏輯關(guān)系詞。托福寫作中的邏輯關(guān)系很多，并列、因果、轉(zhuǎn)折、遞進(jìn)、讓步等等，各有各的對(duì)應(yīng)邏輯關(guān)系詞，小編在這里給大家留個(gè)作業(yè)，希望各位同學(xué)自己去把常用的表示各類邏輯關(guān)系的詞匯分門別類的歸納匯總起來，然后嘗試在自己的文章中用好這些關(guān)系詞。這就好比給本來昏暗的房子里裝上了照明燈一樣，不僅自己能把邏輯關(guān)系展現(xiàn)出來，也能讓考官看得更明白。
托福寫作高分范文的積累
What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? Why is this room more important to you than any other room? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
The kitchen is my favorite room in a house, because it is where families gather. To me, that is the most important thing. So many of the memories people have of growing up revolve around the kitchen. My childhood memories concern the kitchens in my grandparents' homes.
My mother's family lived in a row house in the city. The rooms were all small, and that included the kitchen. In the summertime, when we'd visit, the back door of the house would, be left open. People would be sitting on the back porch and in the kitchen, talking and laughing, while my grandmother made dinner. There was no air-conditioning, but I don't ever remember feeling too hot. There was always a breeze coming through, along with the sounds of traffic and kids playing ball in the street.
My father's family lived on a farm in the country, and their house had a huge kitchen with windows on three sides. It seems like the windows were always open and the curtains blowing with the breeze. The main door to the house was almost never used. Everyone came in through the kitchen, and sat at the big table in the middle of the room. When dinner was being prepared, all the women would bustle around, while the men sat at the table talking about farm prices. Sometimes my grandmother wouldn't even sit down during dinner, but would be refilling bowls of food and people's glasses. From outside, we could hear the cows in the field near the house.
These two kitchens are the background for some of my happiest memories. From the beginning of time, human beings have gathered together near the fire where the food was being prepared. I hope that never changes.
