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寫作老師經(jīng)驗長談 從根本上提升雅思寫作水平之同義轉(zhuǎn)換篇

政府應(yīng)該保護環(huán)境。

這句話我們應(yīng)該怎么去翻譯呢?或者應(yīng)該問的是，有幾種簡單的翻譯方法呢?

大概是有這么幾種：

1. The government should protect our environment.

2. Our environment should be protected by governments.

3. There is a responsibility for governments to protect the environment.

4. It is responsible for governments to protect the environment.

5. Protecting the environment should be a priority for governments.

這五個簡單句，除了第五句用到了V.ing作為主語之外，其他的都十分的簡單，但是相信并不是每一位同學都能成功的并且正確的在自己的大作文之中使用到這些句式，特別是第三個和第四個句式，不要因為覺得there be和形式主語簡單而鄙視它們，并不是這樣的，我們所要的是一個grammatical range，而非不管怎么樣都硬著頭皮去使用倒裝虛擬和強調(diào)。

除此之外，短語的同義改寫是否積累的夠了呢?可能絕大部分都會去背各種所謂的“必備短語X.X條”之類的東西，那么請各位一定記得在寫作中去實際應(yīng)用，因為你知道不等于你背過，你背過不等于你會用，你會用不等于你可以輕松的正確使用，這些都需要各種實際的段落練習。所以話又說回來了，連20篇都寫不完的同學，乖乖先寫完再說話吧~

在這里有三組同義替換的單詞or短語，難度為1最簡單2中等3最難，各位可以試試看：

1. Important、large、good、bad的同義替換

2. “罪犯”criminals有哪些詞可以替換，寫出來3個是最低要求

3. People有哪些詞可以替換

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問題1各位隨意回答吧哈哈~

問題2

criminals=lawbreakers=perpetrators=offenders=culprits

問題3見下：

相信大部分同學對于1的問題是比較輕松的，2呢就比較棘手，3呢可能有同學都沒明白我想表述的是什么問題。

拿3為例，我們來看一個句子：

People have their rights to supervise governments' behavior since they have paid taxes for years.

這句話里面的people，可以替換成什么詞?

可選答案為：

citizens, residents, tax-payers等

這幾個詞難么?不難，但是需要同學們自己心里有一個念頭：“我不能一直都寫people!”這個一直要同義改寫的念頭才是比較難培養(yǎng)的。

雅思備考：大作文觀點解析之年輕一代

Does the younger generation know best?

Arguments

1. The young are better educated and more broad-minded.

2. The young enjoy a lot more things than the old: they have money to spend; they are less dependent on their parents; they grow up more quickly; and they enjoy more freedom.

3. The young question the values and assumptions of the older generation and they are right.

4. The young enjoy more freedom and have a stronger sense of responsibility.

5. The old tend to settle differences by conventional politics and violence.

6. Some old people do not have noble ambitions and only strive for material possessions.

7. The old are unable to keep away from the rat race, in which they have lost touch with the most important things in life.

8. The old can learn from the young. Young people are more devoted to their friends.

9. The young know how to enjoy work and leisure and not to be inhibited.

10. The young live in the present rather than in the past or future.

Counter-arguments

1. The young do not assume their responsibility; they evade it.

2. The young have too much money and they are spoiled.

3. The young are only interested in themselves.

4. The young seek material possessions like clothing, cars, etc. They do not wish to work for them.

5. The young should feel grateful to the older generation, who have created a good life for them.

6. The old provide the young with a good education and money to spe12

7. The older generation fought in the two world wars. They faced real problems, but the young have an easier life.

8. Young people have too much freedom and have no sense of morality.

9. The older generation is too kind and soft with the young. A tougher policy is needed and might work wonders.

10. Young people's outlook on the world is very bleak and they are sceptical of everything.

雅思備考：大作文分析之寵物是否有益于人

Are pets good for mankind?

Arguments

1. Pets are of particular importance to children in this Plastic Age when most of us live in large cities.

2. Watching the everyday activities of a pet helps a child to understand nature and cope with problems.

3. Learning to care for a pet helps a child to grow up into a loving adult who feels responsible towards those dependent on him.

4. The great virtue of pets is that they can keep us company.

5. A pet is kept as a companion that makes us feel happy. It's suggested that pets should be sent to astronauts in a spacecraft to help reduce their loneliness.

6. Besides providing mere companionship, pets invite us to love and be loved.

7. Often a cat or a dog can comfort us at times when human words don't help.

8. Animals can communicate with each other in their particular way. They communicate with human beings, too, for they are quick to sense anger and sorrow.

9. People keep pets for emotional rather than economic reasons.

10. A pet dog brings its master (owner) a sense of confidence, for he cell see in the dog that faithfulness does exist and he does have something to trust.

Counter-arguments

1. Keeping pets is just a waste of time and resources.

2. The growing number of pets has caused serious hygiene problems that cannot be solved.

3. The earth will no longer be a world of human beings and animals but a world of aninkals only if we don't take measures to stop the increase of pets.

4. Pet dogs and cats of both .s should be sterilized because the animals themselves are in danger of becoming the first victims for the simple reason that their owners don't have enough time for too many of them.

5. Pets are humanized by those who keep pets. Owing to their need for a home, for food and drink, pets are tamed and idealized by their owners.

6. People nowadays are so crazy about pets that they even neglect caring for their own children.

7. A campaign should be launched against the overpopulation of pets.

8. As a matter of fact those who keep pets don't always treat their pets with kindness. They sometimes abandon their pets when they go away on holiday- and are unable to take the pets along with them.

9. It's really against nature to cage birds, chain dogs and keep cats within the house.

10. Pets are animals. They should be seen in their natural habitat rather than in the homes of human beings.

雅思備考：大作文觀點解析之應(yīng)該大力發(fā)展旅游業(yè)嗎?

Is it necessary to develop tourism?

Arguments

1. It is necessary to develop the tourist trade, for it contributes a lot to increasing understanding between nations.

2. As the saying goes, "Seeing is believing." Only a trip to an unfamiliar land can help us understand the people and culture there.

3. Since tourism helps increase understanding between people, it will finally wipe out prejudice against other nations, and make the world a more peaceful one.

4. Tourism contributes significantly to many countries' GNP(Gross National Product). The economy of some nations is based on the tourist industry.

5. Tourism helps develop a nation's commerce because tourists are most likely to buy souvenirs wherever they go.

6. Tourism provides jobs for many people and helps solve or ease the social problem of unemployment.

7. Tourism helps accelerate a city's construction and its embellishment.

8. Contact with tourists from 123r widens the horizon of the local people.

9. The tourist trade gives people a chance to enjoy the beautiful scenery of the word and the wonders of manki12

10. Tourism will help people learn about different cultures of the world.

Counter-arguments

1. Tourism cannot increase understanding between nations because tourists are often trapped in big hotels and only gaze at the natives from a distance.

2. Tourism does not wipe out prejudice, but leads to the persistence of national stereotypes because when travelling, you notice only characteristics which confirm your preconceptions.

3. It is true that foreign friends can make people understand stereotypes are absurd and harnffnl, but the tourist trade prevents people from making foreign friends.

4. Since tourists do not have time to mix with the local people, they cannot have a full view of the local culture.

5. Tourism makes some parts of the word too crowded a place to live in.

6. Tourism creates pollution and has destroyed many beautiful scenic spots.

7. Tourists cannot have a full enjoyment of the beautiful scenery because the places they visit are restricted by organizers.

8. As the saying goes, "Travel makes a wise man better, but a fool worse."

9. Contact with and assimilation~ of other cultures will reduce the uniqueness of one's own culture and make the world less colourful than before.