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在雅思寫作考試中邏輯關系是重要的體現(xiàn)，常見的論證方法有舉例論證，因果論證。因果關系的表達中大家最熟悉的莫過于because / so，還有很多其它表示因果關系的表達，比如：

1、Because系列(表原因)

1. because of ： because后接的是一個句子(主謂賓);because of 后一般直接跟名詞。

2. as / since (除了“因為“外，還有”自從”的意思，使用時要注意避免歧義)

3. thanks to (positive situations 通常適用于結(jié)果好的時候)

due to (negative situations通常使用與結(jié)果不好的時候)

owing to / attributable to /on account of

4.當原因需要的表達較多時，我們還可以把以上表達改寫為原因狀語從句，使用thanks to the fact that / due to the fact that / owing to the fact that 或者on the grounds that ......

5. caused by / result from 也表原因。

2、So系列(表結(jié)果)

1. thus/ therefore / thereby / hence

thus： 表示‘in this/that way’

therefore： 表示 ‘for this reason’ /‘because of this or that’

thereby： by that means， as a result of that

hence： 表示 ‘from this/that’

2. as a result / as a consequence

3. consequently /accordingly

consequently 更偏重因果邏輯;accordingly 更偏重后續(xù)解決

3、名詞系列(因果)

1. cause (of sth)/ reason 原因

Obesity can be divided into three main causes – diet, lifestyle and education.

2. result (for sth)/ effect 結(jié)果

Another result is lack of self-esteem.

3. causality 因果關系(cause and effect) causation 原因

The correlation between population and housing price does not indicated causality, only the association.

4. impact/influence 影響

This area is often overlooked but has a tremendous impacton your life.

4、形容詞系列(因果)

表示因果的形容詞不是很常用，使用時多和 factor, element 結(jié)合

1. causal 原因的，因果的

Low income and elderly are among the potential causalfactors of prevalence of obesity among adults.

2. consequential 結(jié)果的，隨之發(fā)生的

Measures other than ratings will prove more consequential.

3. influential 影響的，有影響力的(大多數(shù)情況下使用第二個意思)

Family is the most influential factor on happiness.

2017年12月9日雅思考試寫作真題大作文高分范文

題目是：A rise in the standard of living in a country often seems to only benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems might this difference cause? How might these problems be reduced?在一個國家，生活水平的提高似乎只會讓城市而不是農(nóng)村地區(qū)受益。這一差異會造成什么問題?如何減少這些問題呢?

雅思寫作范文：

Economic success in many countries has brought about the improvement of living conditions. However, rural areas tend to fall behind urban areas in this aspect and a series of problems may arise as a result.

Undoubtedly, the urban-rural gap is unfair to the rural population, and more people are expected to migrate to the city in pursuit of a better life. The massive migration would cause the shortage of resources in education, healthcare and transportation in the city. The soaring house prices and severe traffic congestions in major cities are good examples of this, illustrating that the urban infrastructure virtually cannot accommodate the fast growing population,

In addition, for those rural residents, swarming into large cities does not seem to be an ideal choice. The fierce competition in the job market, together with their disadvantages in terms of personal resources, may make them frustrated and disappointed. Their leaving can also worsen the shortage of labor force in the countryside, impeding its economic progress. With the urban-rural gap further widening, a vicious circle would be formed.

To break this circle, the government needs to play a leading role and the first step is perhaps to implement preferential policies to support the development of rural areas. For instance, by subsidizing the agricultural sector, the income of farmers would increase and then more people would choose to do farm work. Another solution is to construct small towns and relocate some enterprises out of large cities. If more jobs were created and the local government's revenues were raised, fewer people would leave their hometown and the disparity between the city and the countryside would be narrowed.(272words)

2017年12月9日雅思寫作大作文7分范文

題目:A rise in the standard of living in a country often seems to only benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems might this difference cause? How might these problems be reduced?在一個國家，生活水平的提高似乎只會讓城市而不是農(nóng)村地區(qū)受益。這一差異會造成什么問題?如何減少這些問題呢

解析:本周雅思作文是關于生活水準的提高帶來的城鄉(xiāng)差異等問題，以及其解決方式。

那么城鄉(xiāng)差距到底會帶來那些問題呢?比如說資源的分配問題，城市會分配到越來越多的資源，越來越先進，而農(nóng)村則會相對越來越落后。隨之帶來的影響包括勞動力人口向城市涌入，造成城市資源短缺，就業(yè)市場競爭激烈;而農(nóng)村則會出現(xiàn)教育水平低下，基礎設施落后等一系列問題。對于城鄉(xiāng)差異，我們應當加大對農(nóng)村地區(qū)的基礎設施和教育投入，讓城鄉(xiāng)和諧發(fā)展。

7分范文：

The cities have benefited more from the rise of living standard than the rural areas so that the gap between the urban and rural areas has been widened. Consequently, a series of problems related to the urban-rural gap arise.

As more budgets are invested in the infrastructure in the urban rather than the rural areas, urban population enjoy better educational and medical resources as well as more convenient transportation. To struggle for a better life, labors from rural areas rush into the cities, making the already limited city space more and more crowded and resulting in the prohibitively high cost of living. For those who migrate from rural areas to cities, they may have a hard time adjusting themselves to the lifestyle in cities since it is so very different from their previous country life. As a result, they will face a job market so competitive that it will be extremely difficult for them to find a satisfactory job. Then, with the ever increasing number of jobless young people come more serious social problems like stealing, robbing and other crimes.

Another concern is that it is not always possible for children from rural areas to get access to proper schooling in cities. Hence, these children have to be left behind in the countryside, separated from their parents, and eventually find themselves unable to compete with those who grow up in cities. Very unfortunately, as the educational resources keep pouring into the cities, the rural children will remain unable to use them, which means the educational gap between the urban and rural children may exist for quite a long time.

To break up the vicious cycle that will lead to a wider urban-rural gap, the government is obliged to balance the development of cities and rural areas by investing more money in the public services such as schools and hospitals and providing more job opportunities in rural areas. Besides, agricultural tourism can be developed to bring income for the rural population. For those eager to move to cities, the government should offer them more training opportunities to ensure they can find their position in cities.(353 words)

高分表達：

Consequently 結(jié)果......

Arise 出現(xiàn)

Result in 導致

Prohibitively 出奇地

Adjust oneself to... 調(diào)整自己以適應......

Eventually 最終

Vicious cycle 惡性循環(huán)

Ensure 確保

2017年12月9日雅思寫作大作文原創(chuàng)范文

題目是：A rise in the standard of living in a country seems to only benefit cities than rural areas. What problems might this difference cause? How might the problems be reduced?原創(chuàng)來自小站范鈺紅老師。

1.范文解析

范文解析 解析：本文屬于社會生活類話題。其文體為說明文?？忌诓季制陆Y(jié)構時，可以對應問題確定主體段的內(nèi)容。對于本題中城鄉(xiāng)差異導致的問題和解決方面考生應該不難想出，詞匯和短語方面也主要是關于社會服務以及經(jīng)濟發(fā)展?？傮w來說，本題難度系數(shù)并不是很大。

2.原創(chuàng)范文

In the course of national economic progress, the imbalanced development between urban and rural areas has become a big concern for the authority, as it may give rise to a series of more pressing issues, which I would illustrate as follows.

Among those problems, the explosion of population in megacities is an inevitable one. Apparently, the sound public facilities and adequate educational resources attract a large quantity of people to flood into cities. Statistics show that in 2006, the total of residents in Shanghai ( a metropolis in China) was about 24. 20 million, of which approximately 40% of them were non-natives. Obviously, under such circumstance soaring house price and the heavy burden on traffic system are deemed as the consequent troubles. Most working class can hardly afford a private home or an apartment and traffic congestion is so common in every rush hour, demonstrating the urban infrastructure virtually cannot satisfy the demands of growing population.

What’s worse, this urban-rural gap may contribute to a vicious circle. As more locals swarm into large cities, the shrinkage of labour force in the countryside is worse, being an obstacle on the way to economic success. In consequence, the slow-paced rural economy renders the gap widens further.

In an attempt to diminish the gap, effective measures are supposed to be adopted and the first step is that the state should allocate more budget for the public service such as medical insurance, education as well as public transport in rural areas. Furthermore, the leading industries in countryside should be supported by government. For example, specific talents and high technology can be introduced to stimulate the agricultural development; historical experts can be hired to restore local cultural heritage so as to boost tourism industry. Only when public facilities were upgraded and local economy thrives, can people work and live in their hometown and the disparity between the city and countryside can be narrowed.(319 words)

3.文章結(jié)構

paragraph 1 :結(jié)合時代背景引入話題。

paragraph 2: 論述城鄉(xiāng)差距導致的問題1(1.大量人口涌入城市以及其引發(fā)的問題)。

paragraph 3: 論述城鄉(xiāng)差距導致的問題2(2.惡性循環(huán))。

paragraph 4: 提出解決方法并總結(jié)。

4.高分結(jié)構

In the course of, … has become a big concern for… 在..的過程中，…已經(jīng)成為了一個很大的問題

Only when, can… 只有當…的時候，…可以

5.高分話題表達

the imbalanced development between… and… …和…之間的發(fā)展不平衡

give rise to… 引起

the explosion of population 人口的爆炸

megacity 大城市

inevitable 不可避免的

sound public facilities 完善的公共設施

adequate educational resources 充足的教育資源

flood into cities 涌入城市

non-natives 外鄉(xiāng)人

soaring house price 激增的房價

heavy burden on traffic system 交通及通的重擔

consequent 隨之發(fā)生的

working class 工薪階層

traffic congestion 交通阻塞

rush hour 高峰期

urban infrastructure 城市基礎設施

urban-rural gap 城鄉(xiāng)差距

a vicious circle 一個惡性循環(huán)

swarm into 涌入

the shrinkage of …的收縮

an obstacle on the way to economic success 經(jīng)濟發(fā)展道路上的障礙

slow-paced rural economy 緩慢發(fā)展的鄉(xiāng)村經(jīng)濟

diminish the gap 縮小差距

specific talents 專門的人才

stimulate the agricultural development 刺激農(nóng)業(yè)發(fā)展

cultural heritage 文化遺產(chǎn)

boost tourism industry 促進旅游業(yè)

the disparity between… and … …和…的差距

2017年12月9日雅思寫作真題范文之小作文

2.雅思小作文范文

The bar charts compare the average retirement age of females and males in seven nations in the years 2004 and 2008.

From the chart, it can be seen that except for Italian women, females in other six countries retired at older age in 2008 compared with those who retired in 2004. Besides, the retirement age of French women was youngest at 58.7 years old in 2004 and 58.8 years old in 2008. By contrast, Swedish females did not retire until they were at the age of 63 year-old in 2004 and 63.5 years old in 2008, which was the oldest retiring age among those mentioned countries.

Regarding to men, apart from those in Italy where they retried at the age of 63 in both years, male retirement age was raised in other nations in 2008 and the biggest increase was seen in the figure for males in Germany. It is interesting to note that the age of retired men in French was also the youngest but in Sweden the oldest.

Overall, it is noticeable that males worked for a longer period than females both in 2004 and 2008.(188 words)

3.高分表達

From the chart, it can be seen that… 從圖表中我們可以看出…

compared with 相比較

By contrast 相比之下

Regarding to 關于

the biggest increase was seen in the figure for… …的數(shù)據(jù)得到了最大的增長

It is interesting to note that… 有趣的是，我們注意到…