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雅思寫(xiě)作萬(wàn)年5.5，作文審題很關(guān)鍵

雅思備考過(guò)程和考試中都有許多容易被同學(xué)們忽略的點(diǎn)，“審題”合不合格就是其中的關(guān)鍵，有些同學(xué)開(kāi)始動(dòng)筆就輸了，說(shuō)的就是一開(kāi)始就沒(méi)寫(xiě)對(duì)方向，或者沒(méi)有一個(gè)清晰的思路。雅思寫(xiě)作關(guān)鍵就是“審題”，同學(xué)們可能會(huì)問(wèn)了，審題就幾分鐘的事，還得要這么折騰嗎?老師可以在這告訴各位同學(xué)，很有必要，我們可以先來(lái)看這樣一個(gè)現(xiàn)象：

雅思(IELTS)從1989年在中國(guó)大陸開(kāi)始，距今(2018年)已經(jīng)快三十年了，但英國(guó)文化教育委員會(huì)的官方數(shù)據(jù)顯示，大陸考試的雅思寫(xiě)作平均成績(jī)一直徘徊在5.2-5.3之間，幾乎沒(méi)有任何本質(zhì)性的變化。這一成績(jī)?cè)趤喼抟恢钡陀谌毡?、韓國(guó)、越南等鄰國(guó)。

我從2007年開(kāi)始在大陸地區(qū)教授雅思寫(xiě)作至今，在長(zhǎng)期的雅思寫(xiě)作教學(xué)過(guò)程中對(duì)此現(xiàn)象有點(diǎn)滴體會(huì)，影響雅思分?jǐn)?shù)的因素很多，今天就圍繞“審題”展開(kāi)分析，跟各位同學(xué)分享。雅思大作文的審題是必不可少的重要環(huán)節(jié)(劃重點(diǎn)了哈~)，其重要性不容忽視，否則就會(huì)造成災(zāi)難性的后果。

例如，在2017年9月16日的雅思考試中，大作文的題目是：An increasing number of people today change their career and place of residence several times during their lives.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

參考譯文: 今天越來(lái)越多的人在一生中幾次改變自己的行業(yè)或居住地。你認(rèn)為這是積極還是消極的發(fā)展?此題已經(jīng)不是第一次在大陸地區(qū)出現(xiàn)，在2014年4月5日和2010年6月19日原題已經(jīng)出現(xiàn)過(guò)兩次，這已經(jīng)是第三次在大陸地區(qū)出現(xiàn)。很明顯我們可以看出題干中有兩個(gè)關(guān)鍵部分一個(gè)是“career change”，另一個(gè)是“residence change”。如果考生能夠在考場(chǎng)上首先用鉛筆畫(huà)出關(guān)鍵詞，并稍加思索就能知道career change指的是改行，并非跳槽(job-hopping)。隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展，改行已不罕見(jiàn)。但改行指的是行業(yè)改變，而跳槽一般是指同行業(yè)內(nèi)工作單位的改變。

二者的頻率和難度都不可同日而語(yǔ)。改行可以是傷筋動(dòng)骨，難度很大，對(duì)個(gè)人極富挑戰(zhàn)性，改行的人會(huì)面臨全新的環(huán)境和全新的領(lǐng)域，之前的行業(yè)積累可能全部被清零。

例如，有些人厭倦了會(huì)計(jì)師事務(wù)所里的常年加班和枯燥的工作，改行去開(kāi)了面包店，因?yàn)樗麖男【蛯?duì)做面包非常感興趣，并且樂(lè)此不疲，每天工作都很快樂(lè)。但改行不適于所有的人，特別是人到中年再改行絕非易事。而跳槽幾乎是每天都可能發(fā)生的事，有些剛畢業(yè)的年輕人在工作的前幾年會(huì)頻繁跳槽，有的是為了更好地待遇，有的是不滿(mǎn)現(xiàn)在公司的同事或環(huán)境等等。跳槽幾乎是大部分年輕人都會(huì)經(jīng)歷的事情。

但是，很奇怪，大陸地區(qū)許多“范文”都在首段就將“career change”改寫(xiě)成了“job-hopping”，這樣的文章很難說(shuō)是切題，也很難稱(chēng)得上是范文。于是我們就不得不重視起來(lái)，需要將這個(gè)現(xiàn)象加以研究。

我的原創(chuàng)開(kāi)頭段如下：I believe that making a career shift is a risk that is worth taking because career transition and relocation not only help you discover what you’re meant to do, but help you become stronger.參考譯文：我認(rèn)為改行有風(fēng)險(xiǎn)，但值得冒這個(gè)險(xiǎn)。因?yàn)楦淖兟殬I(yè)和居住地不但可以讓你發(fā)現(xiàn)本就適合干什么，而且可以讓自己變得更堅(jiān)強(qiáng)。

雖然只有一句話(huà)，但大家可以看出我們使用了“career shift”和“career transition”來(lái)替換題干中的“career change”，并且使用“relocation”來(lái)替換題干中的“residence change”。

另外，我在首段的后半句使用“help you discover what you’re meant to do”和“help you become stronger”來(lái)回答“positive or negative development?”。這就是劍橋雅思考官范文中常常使用的開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山的寫(xiě)法。

在此，我仍大力推薦考生在參加任何輔導(dǎo)之前，要熟讀劍橋雅思的考官范文，甚至要背上幾篇。這樣，既可以讓自己少受誤導(dǎo)，也可以大大省下許多時(shí)間，事半功倍。

這樣地道的英文表達(dá)，各位考生需要在備考時(shí)就有所準(zhǔn)備，否則到了考場(chǎng)上就很容易出現(xiàn)大腦一片空白，所謂的萬(wàn)能模板的作用就無(wú)力了。

如果用中文還能想出些素材，就勉強(qiáng)翻成英文，并暗暗祈求上帝希望自己表達(dá)的不是中式英文。如果沒(méi)能想出太多素材，就只能車(chē)轱轆話(huà)來(lái)會(huì)說(shuō)，自己心里非常難受。出了考場(chǎng)，有些考生一邊心里默默流淚，一邊就想著立刻去報(bào)個(gè)輔導(dǎo)班……

再舉一例，2017年12月9日大陸地區(qū)的雅思大作文題目是：A rise in the standard of living in a country only seems to benefit cities more than rural areas.

What problems may those differences cause?

How can these problems be reduced?

參考譯文： 國(guó)家生活水平的提高似乎只是讓城市比鄉(xiāng)村受益更多。這種城鄉(xiāng)差別會(huì)帶來(lái)什么問(wèn)題?怎樣才能減少這些問(wèn)題?該題也不是第一次出現(xiàn)，是大陸2013年10月26日的舊題重考。該題中，第一句的關(guān)鍵詞是“benefit cities more than rural areas”，第二句的關(guān)鍵詞是“problems caused”，第三句的關(guān)鍵詞是“How to reduce”。因此，如果大家將關(guān)鍵詞劃出后，就會(huì)知道本題考的是城鄉(xiāng)發(fā)展不均衡帶來(lái)的問(wèn)題及對(duì)策，而非原因及對(duì)策。

但是，許多同學(xué)剛出考場(chǎng)就發(fā)信息給我，說(shuō)自己把“problems”寫(xiě)成了“reasons”。其原因就是在考場(chǎng)上草草看過(guò)題目，就開(kāi)始動(dòng)筆，生怕自己寫(xiě)不完。雖然字?jǐn)?shù)寫(xiě)夠了，但成績(jī)?nèi)匀徊焕硐?。這樣的問(wèn)題屢見(jiàn)不鮮，甚至可以說(shuō)是大量出現(xiàn)，所以，這里又再次思考起來(lái)，花這十分鐘做這件事真的有用。經(jīng)過(guò)審題，我的開(kāi)頭段如下：Despite the overall improvement in quality of life, there has seen a widening rural-urban gap with respect to education and healthcare, which might be narrowed by modern technology aided by government assistance.

參考譯文：盡管總體的生活質(zhì)量有所提高，但是在教育和醫(yī)療方面的城鄉(xiāng)差距仍在擴(kuò)大。通過(guò)現(xiàn)代科技，并輔之以政府扶持，可以縮小這些差距。

盡管開(kāi)頭段只有一句，但是我通過(guò)“a widening rural-urban gap with respect to education and healthcare”表明城鄉(xiāng)差距的具體問(wèn)題。并且通過(guò)“might be narrowed by modern technology aided by government assistance”來(lái)表明解決問(wèn)題需要通過(guò)現(xiàn)代科技和政府扶持。

各位同學(xué)可以看出我的開(kāi)頭段仍舊是劍橋雅思考官范文中常常使用的開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山的寫(xiě)法。如果大家有興趣，可以參見(jiàn)劍橋雅思4第98頁(yè)的例題及考官范文：題目如下：In many countries schools have severe problems with studentbehaviour.What do you think are the causes of this?

What solutions can you suggest?

范文開(kāi)頭段如下：Poor student behaviour seems to be an increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.

該開(kāi)頭段將題干中的“severe problems”改寫(xiě)為“increasingly widespread problem”，并且回答原因?yàn)椤癿odern lifestyles are probably responsible for this”，也是開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山的典型范例。

總之，我建議大家在雅思考試的考場(chǎng)上先別急著動(dòng)筆，第一步先審題，只有審題審對(duì)了，后面才能愉快地進(jìn)行。日常的寫(xiě)作地道表達(dá)也要堅(jiān)持積累。做到以上兩點(diǎn)，相信你可以早日和雅思作文5.5分說(shuō)再見(jiàn)了。

小站原創(chuàng)2018年4月7日?qǐng)鲅潘紝?xiě)作小作文參考范文

雅思寫(xiě)作小作文題目解析

該地圖屬于改造和變遷類(lèi)。地點(diǎn)常發(fā)生在museum，gallery, school 或者 town。描述的通常是過(guò)去時(shí)，現(xiàn)在時(shí)或者對(duì)將來(lái)的預(yù)測(cè)。應(yīng)對(duì)此類(lèi)題目，先找出前后哪些地方發(fā)生了變化，再依次描述。范文全篇8句話(huà)。

雅思寫(xiě)作小作文參考范文

The two maps compare what the layout of the South Wing of Whelton Museum looked like in two separate years 2008 and 2012.

In 2008, It is clear that the museum stretched from the west to the east with six rooms and two stairs. In the western part, a path led to a special collective gallery bordered by the entrance and stairs with a shop located to the opposite side. In addition, a gallery and an interactive gallery were constructed in the north part and a reading room and a cloakroom stood by their eastern side, with stairs between them.

Four years later, great changes had occurred with the number of rooms almost doubling. It is striking to note that the entrance had transformed into an entrance hall where tourists can take a rest under the sunshade while the previous gallery was equipped with a cloak room and also on its north a restaurant was erected. The stairs on the eastern side was upgraded into a lift shared by more enlarged public zones like an exhibition room, a self-service cafe, and children area.

During the period, this museum had developed in terms of facilities and services supplied for the public.(200 words)

18年4月7日雅思寫(xiě)作大作文范文：變富有就該幫助窮人

雅思大作文題目

Some people think the most important thing about being rich is that give person an opportunity to help other people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

雅思大作文解析：

本題為社會(huì)生活類(lèi)話(huà)題。題目問(wèn)題是同意還是不同意變得富有最重要的事是幫助他人?？忌趯忣}時(shí)，要注意“the most important”這個(gè)形容詞最高級(jí)的限定作用。思考論點(diǎn)時(shí)建議多往disagree的方面展開(kāi)。

paragraph 1 :結(jié)合時(shí)代背景引入話(huà)題且表明自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)。

paragraph 2: 論述富人幫助他人的必要性。(通過(guò)對(duì)比富人的富有和窮人的困境展開(kāi))

paragraph 3: 論述富人幫助他人非最重要的。(從自由支配財(cái)產(chǎn)和政府兩個(gè)層面展開(kāi))

paragraph 4: 總結(jié)上文論點(diǎn)，強(qiáng)調(diào)自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)。

雅思大作文參考范文

In an age when economic success is easily achievable, a number of businessmen and elites have accumulated their property to a larger sum. Some people claim that the most significant thing for the wealthy is to offer assistance to those in need. Personally speaking, I disagree with this assertion.

Admittedly, it is the moral obligation for the rich groups to provide financial support to people who live in poor and disadvantageous situations. As is reported, over a billion people are still living in object poverty and each year over six million children die as a result of malnutrition. However, the cost of a dinner in a luxury restaurant for the millionaires may be equal to several years’ living expense for the poor. Therefore, it seems reasonable and sensible for them to donate money and goods to charity.

Nevertheless, I do not contend such practice is the vital thing for being rich. The most rooted reason is that, they are entitled to allocate their wealth. A case in the point is that large amount of disposal income can be invested in the acquisition of some promising venture companies, in which case, they are likely to earn a fortune in the near future. In addition, it is government that should place a high priority on fighting hunger and poverty. Financial aid, sound welfare system and sufficient employment opportunities are all supposed to be provided to counteract with this recurring problem. If the authority only relies on the efforts of the rich, this potential threat to social stability will not be fundamentally removed.

In conclusion, although helping people is an indispensable duty for the wealthy, it is not the most important. Instead, the state should formulate policies and feasible strategies to build up a wealth and prosperous society.(295 words)

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