一些“學(xué)霸”的雅思閱讀和聽力能上8分，但是寫作卻遲遲不上6分，寫作成了他們聽說讀寫中的拉分項和申請名校的絆腳石，這讓很多烤鴨“迷惑不解”甚至“灰心喪氣”。

雅思寫作避開這四項錯誤 分?jǐn)?shù)不會差

第一，不要字體潦草。

第二，不要單邊論證。

第三，不要錯誤太多。

第四，不要邏輯混亂。

第一點要牢記的是，千萬不要字體潦草，難以辨認(rèn)。很多考生認(rèn)為字體不重要，平時寫字就龍飛鳳舞，到了考場時間緊張，字體更加潦草，難以辨認(rèn)，給考官閱卷帶來困難。字體不好會不會影響分?jǐn)?shù)? 想想看，考官是通過閱讀你寫的文字來了解你的觀點和思路，判定你的寫作水平，而每篇文章通常只有2—3分鐘的閱卷時間，如果字體潦草，難以辨認(rèn)，影響了考官的閱讀和理解，勢必會影響分?jǐn)?shù)，所以親愛的考生們，一定要字跡工整清晰啊!

第二點要牢記的是，千萬不要單邊論證，結(jié)構(gòu)失衡。在雅思大作文題目中，通常都有兩個對立面需要去分別闡述和論證，如果你只說其一，不說其二，片面看待問題，很容易造成寫作偏題，結(jié)構(gòu)失衡，因此而失分。比如下面這個題目：

Some people think money which the government spends on art, such as music and painting, would be better spent on things more important. Do you agree or disagree?

該題話題屬于政府支出類，題目中有兩個對立面，分別是art和things more important，都需要闡述。而有的同學(xué)只寫things more important，比如教育和醫(yī)療，忽略其對立面art，那么這樣的文章就是偏題，沒有完全回應(yīng)題目的要求，會因此而失分?？忌趯忣}的時候，一定要把握住題目中的對立面，正方和反方都要有相應(yīng)的主體段落。

第三點要牢記的是，千萬不要語法錯誤太多、用詞不當(dāng)。6分的作文，是一篇可讀性較強的文章，可以是簡單句為主，復(fù)合句為輔，語法錯誤很少，讀起來通順流暢。很多考生誤以為“牛”的文章就是大詞長詞、從句套從句，因此他們過于追求生僻的詞匯和復(fù)雜的句型，經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)用詞錯誤和語法錯誤。殊不知這樣錯誤百出的文章，在考官眼里只是“小學(xué)生作文”，很難上6分。因此，筆者建議考生盡量選擇有把握的常用詞匯，力求寫出符合英語語法的準(zhǔn)確句子，多寫多練，提高表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性，這樣就離6分越來越近了。

第四點要牢記的是，千萬不要邏輯混亂，思維跳躍。有的考生在論證觀點時不符合常理和邏輯，比如在論證因果關(guān)系時，不是從原因到結(jié)果一步一步往下推進(jìn)，而是想到哪說到哪，思維跳躍，缺乏邏輯。這樣的文章，考官讀起來可能感到不知所云。其實在論證時，并不需要高深莫測的思想和標(biāo)新立異的觀點，只要把論點合理展開，解釋清楚，符合常理和邏輯就可以了。

雅思大作文：newspapers are still the main source of news

雅思大作文題目：More and more people are reading news online, but newspapers are still the main source of news for most people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

作文范文：

The newspaper is an important source of people’s daily news consumption, even though other media may get the upper hand nowadays such as the multimedia. It is predicted that the printing days are over due to strong competition from television, radio and the Internet. In terms of popularity, newspaper is statistically down but is not emotionally out.

Statistically, it can be said that the print news fans are dwindling, which means newspaper readership is getting squeezed by other ways of learning about news. According to research reports on the news industry, local television is the number one source of news for the majority of people, with digital news coming in second, followed by the radio, and then by the newspaper. One possible explanation why the newspaper is being left far behind is that many people do not see the point in buying a print newspaper if they believe they can get all the news they need elsewhere for free.

Nevertheless, for emotional reasons print newspapers will continue to exist for a good while. To begin with, the feeling of a warm newspaper right off the press is one of traditional readers’ favorite moments to begin a regular day. Unlike other ways of delivering news, a print newspaper can be physically held in a reader’s hands, and this is a huge pro for print editions. In addition, newspapers can provide opportunities for longer, more in-depth feature articles that tend to be read in full. Instead of becoming a thing of the past, print newspapers are still widely read and preferred by many audiences.

In conclusion, the golden days of print news are gone forever, but nothing is like the feeling of physically holding a newspaper in hands. After all, the different ways of learning about news are not mutually exclusive. Each news media outlet is effective in its own way.

雅思大作文：people waste a lot of food

雅思大作文題目：In some countries, people waste a lot of food which is bought in shops and restaurants. What do you think are the reasons? What can be done to solve this problem?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

作文范文：

In the current society, with the improving life standard, diet has become a hot topic discussed among citizens who attach importance to what they are going to eat. As a byproduct of this circumstance, the great amount of wasted food has been an top concern around the world.

No one can deny why the waste of food is enormous is because people having more money than before are prone to buy more food based on their preference instead of their real needs; as a result, lots of food cannot be consumed, and the exceeded expense would be one of the main reasons. Meanwhile, taking the globalization into consideration, the whole world is merging, which means that various products from different areas can be brought to everyone's life by using online shopping, and the sale promotion and advertisements used by the manufacturers are crammed into our daily life; therefore, the increasing temptations and convenience motivate individuals' curiosity to place order repetitively even they do not need, which gradually forms a habit of wasting.

However, there is the fact that food is the treasure and is worth to cherishing, so that everyone has the responsibility to save the food. Government, as the maker of all the rules in the society, can formulate the strict principles and implement seriously to prevent people from wasting food, such as improving the supervising system and rising the fine. Besides, compared with the punishment, the prevention shouldn't be ignored. Increasing the awareness of saving food in the society can also contribute to help people to build a right concept of consumption, which can be an effective way to solve the problem from its origin.

In conclusion, although the better life offers people more opportunities to experience new and attractive things, we do need to maintain some good traditions, and the importance of saving food should be noticed.

雅思大作文：it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities

雅思大作文題目：When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

作文范文：

While the price of real estate is rocketing in metropolitan cities in recent decades, the living space for city dwellers is drastically squeezed. This situation does not only mean the square meter of their home, but also refer to the outdoor public space and commercial buildings they are allowed to utilize.

City residents need space to do outdoor activities. They need to walk their dogs, do exercises, or play with their little children. Equipped with some sports facilities, these places can serve a role of encouraging physical activities and healthy lifestyles. Public open space also facilitates local residents to meet their neighbors and feel to be included in a community. This sense of belonging can be vital for the establishment of a healthy and safe cohesive community. Open areas are the most significant for children. Especially for those children with no siblings, the public ground around their home is the place where they regularly socialize with their peers in their neighborhood.

Of course, plazas, gardens and parks occupy land, posing a real challenge for metropolis planners, who have to balance between the growing demand for residence as well as commercial buildings and recreational infrastructures. Furthermore, the size of such facilities should also be under scrutiny. A large civic central square does not actually serve a better function for local residents than a smaller one around home because the distance travelled between would be long, and this inconvenience can discourage people from regular participation. Imagine the Tiananmen Square, not in Beijing but in a town with small population in a regional area. Would it serve its best to local people?

Therefore, here is my conclusion that citizens deserve large commercial shopping centres for recreational purposes. In the meantime, small sporting facilities ought to be established outside each residential quarter.

雅思大作文：fittest and strongest individuals and teams can achieve the greatest success

雅思大作文題目：Some people argue that the fittest and strongest individuals and teams can achieve the greatest success in sports. But other people think the success is much related to the mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

作文范文：

There is a common belief that players who achieve a perfect physique level would have better performance in sports competition, while others believe that strong-minded perseverance is the determinate factor. In my opinion, though fitness level is important, the most essential element should be mental attitude.

Being physically strong is crucial for a sport player. Many studies have shown that having a perfect physique level means that one can exert better power of explosive strength and endurance, and these attributes are required by many sports activities such as basketball and rugby. In addition, showing a quicker judgement is another ability exerted by those players, and this means that they may come up with efficient strategies and are capable of finding holes in the opposing defense.

There is no denying a fact that being mentally strong is also important in competitions. The most inspiring fact about the Paralympics is to convey to people that those who are physically disabled can also achieve greater success with the help of specialized trainings. In addition, perseverance means that a player is willing to contribute and control their emotions regardless of the pressure imposed by their opponents. These abilities ensure that a player is clear-minded and can make the right judgement, while refrain from irrational behavior towards opponent and referee. Also, being a clear-minded player ensures the flow of cooperation in team work, to some extent reducing mental pressure of the teammates while providing better strategies.

In conclusion, a person with a superior fitness level may achieve a greater success in competitions, but one cannot make an achievement without the ability to endure mental stress and the willingness to make an effort in teams.