我家鄉(xiāng)的風(fēng)味小吃有很多，如盒子糕、鍋邊糊、豆腐丸、臭豆腐......但我最喜歡的要數(shù)臭豆腐了。

There are many snacks in my hometown, such as box cakes, pot paste, tofu balls, stinky tofu... But my favorite one is stinky tofu.

在浦城的大街小巷不時傳來一陣陣誘人的叫賣聲：“快來買了，正宗的臭豆腐，又香又便宜！”提起臭豆腐，我們浦城人誰都會豎起大拇指的。

From time to time in the streets and alleys of Pucheng, there comes a sound of tempting selling: "come and buy it, authentic stinky tofu, fragrant and cheap!" When it comes to stinky tofu, everyone in Pucheng will give a thumbs up.

臭豆腐聞起來臭，吃起來香。今天和媽媽一起上街，我又央求媽媽給我買臭豆腐。只見攤主把一塊塊一寸見方的臭豆腐從“鹵水”里撈出來，再放到油鍋內(nèi)炸。這時，就能聽到一陣陣“吱吱”的響聲。大約炸了兩分鐘，一串串臭豆腐便熟了，攤主利落地把一串串臭豆腐便可以吃了。我拿著臭豆腐放在嘴邊輕輕地咬一口，“哇，真好吃！”我情不自禁地叫道。我狼吞虎咽地吃著臭豆腐，好像山珍海味也比不上似的。不知不覺地，一串臭豆腐便下肚了，這時，我才覺得嘴巴好辣，辣得我“呼哧、呼哧”地喘著粗氣。旁邊的媽媽笑嘻嘻地對我說：“還要不要來一串呀？”我搔著頭，不好意思地回答道：“想是想，可惜肚子太小了?！眿寢屄犃?，指著我的頭說：“你這只小饞貓?！闭f完，我們都哈哈大笑起來。

Stinky tofu smells stinky and tastes delicious. Today, I went to the street with my mother and begged her to buy me stinky tofu. I saw the stall owner pull out the stinky tofu from the "brine" and fry it in the oil pan. At this time, you can hear a "squeak" sound. About two minutes of frying, a string of stinky tofu will be cooked, and the stall owner will eat a string of stinky tofu. I took the stinky tofu and put it on my mouth and bit it gently, "Wow, it's delicious!" I can't help shouting. I devour stinky tofu, as if the delicacies of the mountains and seafood are not comparable. Unconsciously, a string of stinky tofu will be eaten. At this time, I feel that my mouth is very spicy, which makes me breathe heavily. The mother next to me said with a smile, "don't you want to have a bunch?" I scratched my head and replied sheepishly, "I think so, but my stomach is too small." Mom listened and pointed to my head and said, "you greedy little cat." After that, we all laughed.

我愛家鄉(xiāng)的各種風(fēng)味小吃，但我更愛家鄉(xiāng)的臭豆腐。

I love all kinds of snacks in my hometown, but I prefer stinky tofu in my hometown.

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1.小作者首先概括地介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的風(fēng)味小吃，然后突出了對臭豆腐的喜愛，并通過沿街的叫賣聲及家鄉(xiāng)人的推崇從側(cè)面體現(xiàn)出臭豆腐是一種深受人們喜歡的美食。接下來，小作者詳盡介紹了臭豆腐的烹制及口感，具體、生動地描繪，加上小作者真實的體驗，使人讀后感同身受。結(jié)尾再次突出中心思想。

1. The author first introduces the flavor snacks in his hometown, and then highlights his love for stinky tofu. Through the peddling along the street and the praise of his hometown people, he shows that stinky tofu is a kind of delicious food that people like very much. Next, the author introduces the cooking and taste of stinky tofu in detail, describes it concretely and vividly, and the author's real experience makes people feel the same after reading. At the end, the central idea is highlighted again.

2.文章前后呼應(yīng)，重點突出，詳略得當(dāng)，層次分明，條理清晰。

2. The article echoes back and forth, with outstanding emphasis, proper details, clear layers and clear organization.

3.文章語言生動形象，充滿童趣，洋溢著對家鄉(xiāng)的熱愛之情。

3. The language of the article is vivid, full of children's interest and full of love for hometown.