一棵老松樹死了，動植物們都來悼念它，兔子妹妹發(fā)現(xiàn)樹枝上有一封遺書，便大聲讀了起來。

When an old pine tree died, animals and plants came to mourn it. Sister rabbit found a note on the branch and read it aloud.

“親愛的朋友們，大家好！我是一棵活了900年的樹，大家一定認為我是老死的，其實我的死是由于人類破壞環(huán)境造成的。

"Dear friends, Hello! I am a tree that has lived for 900 years. You must think that I died of old age. In fact, my death was caused by human destruction of the environment.

“首先，土壤遭受污染。1000多年前，這里曾經(jīng)是一個草木茂盛的大草原。但最近一二百年來，由于人類過度開墾、放牧，使土地沙化。有些地方還打上農(nóng)藥，土壤變成了有害土壤，草原大片大片地在地球上消失。樹啊、花啊都活不成了，我雖然生命力強，但是也招架不住土壤的污染。植物朋友們，你們一定要遠離有害土壤，不然也會送命的。

"First, the soil is polluted. More than 1000 years ago, it used to be a grassy prairie. However, in the past 120 years, due to human over cultivation and grazing, the land has been desertification. In some places, pesticides are also used, and the soil becomes harmful. Large areas of grassland disappear on the earth. Trees and flowers can't live. Although I have strong vitality, I can't stand the soil pollution. Plant friends, you must stay away from harmful soil, or you will die.

“其次，天空中的空氣遭到污染。人類把廢氣、濃煙排放到天空，天空沒有以前那樣藍了，天上的小鳥、大雁也少了許多?，F(xiàn)在人們還用叫什么電冰箱的電器，里面的氟利昂使天空中的臭氧層遭受破壞，‘臭氧層空洞’日益擴大，強烈的紫外線照到身上，我們就會得病，你們飛行的鳥類也不例外。鳥類朋友們，你們一定要移民到一個花香鳥語的地方去。

"Secondly, the air in the sky is polluted. Human beings put waste gas, smoke into the sky, the sky is not as blue as before, and there are many fewer birds and geese in the sky. Now people also use refrigerators. Freon in them destroys the ozone layer in the sky. The "ozone hole" is expanding day by day. If the strong ultraviolet light hits us, we will get sick. Your flying birds are no exception. Birds friends, you must immigrate to a place where flowers and birds sing.

“最后，水質(zhì)受到污染。人類制造的工業(yè)廢水，沒經(jīng)過處理就倒進了河里，河水變濁、變臭，魚類無法生存。魚弟弟無法生存。魚弟弟你要盡快告訴你的同伴，叫它們到河水清澈的地方去吧。

"Finally, the water quality is polluted. Industrial waste water produced by human beings is poured into the river without treatment. The river becomes turbid and stinky, and fish cannot survive. Fish brother can't survive. Brother fish, you should tell your companions as soon as possible to go where the river is clear.

“你們快走吧！人類破壞環(huán)境的速度不斷加快，你們再不逃，到那時候會沒命的。”

"Let's go! Human beings are destroying the environment faster and faster. If you don't run away, you will be killed at that time. "

動植物們收拾東西，正準(zhǔn)備走，突然又停下來了。它們在思索：“家該往哪兒搬呢？”

The animals and plants were packing up. They were about to leave when they suddenly stopped. They were thinking, "where should I move my home?"

點評：文章選材新穎、獨特，以《松樹的遺書》為題，富有啟發(fā)性和震撼力。讀后，不得不引發(fā)讀者深深的思索。“植物朋友們”、“鳥類朋友們”、“魚弟弟你要盡快告訴你的同伴”等，這些語句無不顯露出小作者的一顆善良的童心。寫作文應(yīng)該寫自己的童心、平常心，這樣才能有真情實感。

Comments: the article is novel and unique in material selection. It is full of inspiration and shock with the title of pine tree's bequest. After reading it, the readers have to think deeply. "Friends of plants", "Friends of birds", "brother fish, you should tell your companion as soon as possible" and so on, all of these sentences reveal the good childlike innocence of the author. To write a composition, one should write one's childlike and ordinary mind, so that one can have true feelings.