大大的眼睛，烏黑的頭發(fā)，一張櫻桃小嘴能說(shuō)會(huì)道，這就是我—小可兒。

Big eyes, dark hair, a small cherry mouth, that's me - little Ke'er.

我有一個(gè)缺點(diǎn)：愛(ài)哭。誰(shuí)要是惹到我，我的眼睛就像沒(méi)關(guān)緊的水龍頭，眼淚嘩嘩地流個(gè)不停。唉！其實(shí)我也不想當(dāng)一個(gè)嬌里嬌氣的女孩兒，可不知道是為什么，我老是克制不住自己。

I have one drawback: crying. If anyone offends me, my eyes are like a tap that is not closed tightly, and my tears are flowing continuously. Alas! In fact, I don't want to be a delicate girl, but I don't know why. I always can't help myself.

我還是一個(gè)驕傲的女孩兒：為什么我的成績(jī)老是一上一下，那都是因?yàn)轵湴羻h。我每次考試的成績(jī)，要是畫(huà)成折線(xiàn)圖呀，恐怕要成一個(gè)個(gè)的“w”嘍！

I'm still a proud girl: why do my grades always go up? It's all because of pride. If I draw a line chart of my scores in each exam, I'm afraid I'll have to make "W" one by one!

你們不要以為我是一個(gè)滿(mǎn)身缺點(diǎn)的人哦！我這叫“丑話(huà)說(shuō)在前頭”。

You don't think I'm a man full of shortcomings! I call it "ugly talk ahead".

我有一大優(yōu)勢(shì)：有恒心。

I have one big advantage: perseverance.

那天，我和我的好朋友一起剝花生。開(kāi)始我們覺(jué)得是一種樂(lè)趣，開(kāi)心地剝著。剝了半盤(pán)后，朋友便不想剝了，我的朋友五看電視去了，只剩下我一人孤零零地在那兒 慢慢地剝著，覺(jué)得沒(méi)意思了，本不想剝的，但又想起媽媽經(jīng)常對(duì)我說(shuō)的話(huà)—“做事情要有始有終，要有恒心！”最后，我堅(jiān)持下來(lái)了，終于滿(mǎn)滿(mǎn)的一盤(pán)花生呈現(xiàn)在我 面前！這不僅僅是對(duì)我一個(gè)小小的考驗(yàn)，還是對(duì)我恒心的考驗(yàn)。終于，我看到了我的大海，看到了我的成果，我好高興！

That day, I peeled peanuts with my good friend. At first, we thought it was a kind of fun, happily peeling. After half a play, my friend didn't want to peel. My friend went to watch TV five times. I was left alone and slowly peeling. I thought it was boring. I didn't want to peel, but I thought of what my mother often said to me - "always do things with perseverance!" Finally, I insisted, and finally a full plate of peanuts appeared in front of me! This is not only a small test for me, but also a test for my perseverance. Finally, I see my sea, see my results, I am so happy!

這就是我—一個(gè)可愛(ài)的女生！

This is me - a lovely girl!

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1.文章介紹“我”自己，除了對(duì)外貌進(jìn)行描述外，還講了自身的特點(diǎn)，既有有點(diǎn)也有缺點(diǎn)。結(jié)構(gòu)完整，層次分明，重點(diǎn)突出，詳略得當(dāng)。

1. The article introduces "I" myself. In addition to describing the appearance, it also talks about its own characteristics, which have some shortcomings as well. The structure is complete, the level is clear, the focus is prominent, and the details are slightly appropriate.

2.文章首先是本著“丑話(huà)說(shuō)在前頭”的原則，很客觀地做了自我檢討，將自己愛(ài)哭也愛(ài)驕傲的特點(diǎn)生動(dòng)形象地揭露出來(lái)，又通過(guò)一件具體的事來(lái)體現(xiàn)出自己有始有終、有恒心的優(yōu)點(diǎn)。

2. In the first place, based on the principle of "the ugly words are in the first place", the article makes an objective self-examination, reveals vividly the characteristics of crying and pride, and embodies the advantages of being consistent and consistent through a specific thing.

3.語(yǔ)言詼諧幽默，比喻形象夸張，基調(diào)輕松歡快。

3. Humorous language, exaggerated figurative image, relaxed and cheerful tone.