童年如畫，定格無數(shù)精彩的瞬間；童年如歌，跳躍著無數(shù)歡樂的音符；童年如河，翻騰著無憂無慮的歡樂的浪花，童年如同奇妙的萬花筒，使人永遠(yuǎn)沉浸在愉快之中——那無邊的幻想和傻傻的童稚會湊成的一件又一件趣事，想起來總讓我笑破肚皮。

Childhood is picturesque, with countless wonderful moments fixed; childhood is like a song, with countless happy notes skipping; childhood is like a river, with carefree and happy waves, and childhood is like a wonderful kaleidoscope, which makes people immersed in happiness forever - the endless fantasy and silly childishness will make up one interesting thing after another, which always makes me laugh.

剛記事的時候，看到爸爸刮胡須很好玩，電動剃須刀一開“嗡嗡嗡”胡子拉碴的老臉一下子就變得“煥然一新”。我多想試一下，可我的下巴那么光滑，無法享受那種感覺。一天，爸媽出發(fā)了，爺爺奶奶在里屋休息，只剩下我一個人在院子玩。怪寂寞的，干啥好呢？突然聽到“喵——喵”的叫聲，哦，原來小花貓也很寂寞。我靈機(jī)一動，何不給小花貓當(dāng)一回美容師呢，讓它美一回呢？對，先給它剪一剪胡須，讓它變得利索一些。于是，我找來剪刀，喚過小花貓，把小花貓放到椅子上，并學(xué)著爸爸的樣子給小花貓抹上點(diǎn)肥皂沫?？尚』ㄘ垺安蛔R好人心”，不愿接受我的免費(fèi)服務(wù)，一溜煙地跑了。我好容易費(fèi)了九牛二虎之力才把他捉住，用一條繩子把它綁在了椅子上。“哈哈”，這會看你上哪里逃？我拿起電動剃須刀就要給他剃胡須，可小花貓的胡須太長了，我費(fèi)盡了渾身的解數(shù)。也給它剃不下來，也許這種服務(wù)不舒服，它一邊“嗚嗚”地掙扎著，一邊用用爪子來抗議我的“竭誠服務(wù)”。我無奈中一眼看到了媽媽放在窗臺上的剪刀，一下子有了主意，拿過來“咔喳”一聲，小花貓的胡須剪掉了一半。我剛要剪另一半，忽然傳來爺爺?shù)暮奥暋安灰舭?！”我連忙放下剪刀。爺爺從里屋出來，看到這番情景，又氣又笑，板著臉說“好孫女，貓的胡子是不能剪的。”“為什么不能剪?。磕皇浅Ｕf‘人物一理’嗎”我覺得我還很有理，歪著頭反問爺爺。見我那副傻樣，爺爺?shù)哪樕弦娏诵θ荩骸柏埖暮臃浅Ｖ匾?，是用來測量老鼠洞口寬窄的，并且能保持貓的平衡。不信你把它放下來，讓它走幾步試試?！蔽野沿埥庀聛?，放到地上。我本以為它會“嗖”的一聲跑掉，可沒想到它東倒西歪，一陣風(fēng)都能把它吹倒似的。

When I was just recording, it was fun to see my father shave. As soon as the electric razor turned on the "buzzing" old face with a scratchy beard, it suddenly became "brand new". I'd like to try more, but my chin is so smooth that I can't enjoy it. One day, my parents set out. My grandparents had a rest in the inner room. I was the only one left to play in the yard. It's lonely. What can I do? Suddenly heard "meow - meow" call, oh, the original kitten is also very lonely. I have an idea. Why not be a beautician for the little flower cat and let it be beautiful? Yes, first cut the beard to make it easier. So, I found scissors, called the kitten, put the kitten on the chair, and like my father, put some soap on the kitten. But the kitten "does not know the good people", unwilling to accept my free service, ran away. It was so easy for me to catch him and tie him to the chair with a rope. "Ha ha", it depends on where you run? When I picked up the electric razor, I was going to shave his beard, but the beard of the kitten was too long, so I spent all my energy to figure out. It can't shave off. Maybe this kind of service is uncomfortable. It struggles "whine" while protesting my "dedicated service" with its claws. I had no choice but to see my mother's scissors on the windowsill. Suddenly, I had an idea. With a sound of "Kacha", the little cat's beard was cut in half. I was just about to cut the other half when my grandfather called out, "don't cut!" I quickly put down the scissors. Grandpa came out of the inner room and saw the scene. He was angry and smiling. He said with a straight face, "good granddaughter, cat's beard can't be cut." "Why can't you cut it? Don't you often say "people are reasonable?" I think I'm quite reasonable. I asked grandpa with my head askew. Seeing my silly look, my grandfather saw a smile on his face: "the cat's beard is very important. It is used to measure the width of the mouse hole and keep the balance of the cat. If you don't believe it, put it down and let it take a few steps. " I took the cat off and put it on the ground. I thought it would "swish" and run away, but I didn't expect it to turn around, like a gust of wind can blow it down.

什么是平衡，我大了才知道，可貓被剪掉胡須的景象到現(xiàn)在還記憶猶新。哦！童年如畫，童年如歌，……難忘的童年趣事，使人永遠(yuǎn)沉浸在愉快之中。

What is balance? I didn't know until I was older, but I still remember the scene of the cat being cut off. Oh Childhood is like a picture, childhood is like a song Unforgettable childhood fun, so that people will always be immersed in happiness.

教師評析：是的“童年如畫，童年如歌”。該習(xí)作選材新穎，語言流暢，寫出了童心童趣。且還可以看出小作者語言功底較深。

Teacher's comments: Yes, "childhood is like a picture, childhood is like a song". The material selection of the exercise is novel, the language is fluent, and the childlike innocence is written. It can also be seen that the language skills of the author are deep.