Spring is a beautiful season,everything becomes new in it. You can see kites flying in the sky,you can listen to the birds that singing in the sky,and also you can smell flowers in our schoolyard...The wind of spring is soft. It blows you as if someone is touching you.It see the river's jumping, the butterfly's dancing and the spring's smiling.It often rains in spring.The rain is so thin but long that we even feel the sky is weeping when it is raining. After raining, the sun comes out, the world is washed very clear and we can berath in fresh air again.

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