命題者在去年以“問”為話題檢驗學(xué)生的作文能力之后，沒有延續(xù)過往，而是猛然變臉，毅然回到了傳統(tǒng)作文命題的軌道，拿起了全命題寶劍，讓學(xué)生以“一步與一生”為題進(jìn)行寫作。深入分析，我們不難看出，今年的四川高考作文試題仍是獨具特色的，她能讓考生的思想在哲理思考中得到彰顯和升華。
After last year's test of students' writing ability on the topic of "asking", the propositioner did not continue the past, but suddenly changed his face, resolutely returned to the track of traditional composition propositions, picked up the whole proposition sword, and let students write on the topic of "one step and life". Through in-depth analysis, we can see that this year's composition test of Sichuan college entrance examination is still unique, which can make the candidates' thoughts manifest and sublimate in philosophical thinking.
一、意料之外，情理之中。今年除了重慶、浙江、廣東、山東四個省市仍然在堅守話題作文的陣地外，全國卷Ⅰ、全國卷Ⅱ、北京、湖北均改為了給材料作文，在上海始終堅持命題作文的陣營中，相繼有天津、江蘇、江西、安徽、湖南、福建、遼寧以及四川在今年也欣然加入其中。這也給了我們一個有益的啟示，平時的作文訓(xùn)練，切忌跟風(fēng)逐潮，切忌猜題押題，切忌倚輕倚重，必須全面訓(xùn)練，打牢基礎(chǔ)，防患于未然，以不變應(yīng)萬變。才能在高考考場上穩(wěn)操勝券。
1、 Unexpected, reasonable. This year, in addition to Chongqing, Zhejiang, Guangdong and Shandong, four provinces and cities still adhere to the position of topic composition, national Volume I, national Volume II, Beijing and Hubei are all changed to writing for materials. In Shanghai, Tianjin, Jiangsu, Jiangxi, Anhui, Hunan, Fujian, Liaoning and Sichuan have joined in this year. This also gives us a useful enlightenment. In the usual composition training, we must avoid following the trend, suspecting the topic, relying on the light and relying on the heavy. We must train in an all-round way, lay a solid foundation, prevent the trouble before it happens, and respond to the changes constantly. Only in this way can we win the college entrance examination.
二、合理限制，適當(dāng)放寬。仔細(xì)分析，今年的作文試題十分簡潔明了，命題者采用“題目﹢要求”的簡單形式來命題。文題既有合理限制，又適當(dāng)給予放寬。合理限制體現(xiàn)在兩個方面：一是限定題目，二是限定字?jǐn)?shù)，考生是不能另擬題目，不顧字?jǐn)?shù)，超越雷池的；適當(dāng)放寬則主要體現(xiàn)在“文體自選”上，也就是說，無論從文章體裁記敘文、說明文、議論文來講，還是從文學(xué)體裁小說、散文、詩歌、戲劇來講，只要考生選取自己善于駕馭的體裁來寫作，無論哪類，均無不可。
2、 Reasonable restrictions and appropriate relaxation. After careful analysis, this year's composition test questions are very concise and clear, and the propositioner uses the simple form of "question + requirement" to make a proposition. There are not only reasonable restrictions, but also appropriate relaxation. Reasonable restrictions are reflected in two aspects: one is to limit the topic; the other is to limit the number of words. Candidates can't write another topic, ignore the number of words, and surpass Leichi; the appropriate relaxation is mainly reflected in the "free choice of style", that is to say, no matter from the perspective of narrative, expository text, argumentative paper, or from the perspective of literary genre novel, prose, poetry, drama, as long as candidates No matter what kind of writing you choose, you are good at mastering.
三、辨明題旨，準(zhǔn)確立意?？v觀多年的高考作文試題，不難看出，高考作文試題基本上都是關(guān)系型的。今年的作文試題要求考生以“一步與一生”為題寫一篇文章，不但具有一定的難度，而且也具有很好的區(qū)分度，這樣不僅便于拉開檔次，而且更利于選拔人才。
3、 Distinguish the theme and make an accurate idea. It is not hard to see that the composition test questions of college entrance examination are basically relational. This year's composition test requires candidates to write an article on the topic of "one step and one life". It is not only difficult, but also has a good distinction, which is not only convenient to open up the level, but also more conducive to the selection of talents.
“一步與一生”，文題凝練而平易，頗具比喻意義和象征意義。有關(guān)“一步與一生”的名言警句可謂舉不勝舉。像“千里之行，始于足下”“一步錯，步步錯”“一失足成千古恨”“一著不慎，滿盤皆輸”“不積小流，無以成江海；不積跬步，無以至千里”……這些名言警句無不在揭示一個真理：做好一件事，走好一步路，對人的一生至關(guān)重要。有時，做好一件事，走好一步路，可以成就人的一生；做錯一件事，走錯一步路，可以毀掉人的一生。古今中外，與“一步與一生”有關(guān)的人和事也可以說是數(shù)不勝數(shù)。
"One step and one life", the title is concise and simple, which is quite figurative and symbolic. There are many famous sayings about "one step and one life". Like "a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step", "one wrong step, one wrong step", "one wrong step becomes eternal hatred", "one careless move, one lose everything", "no small flow, no sea; no small step, no even a thousand miles" All these proverbs reveal a truth: to do a good job, to take a good step, is essential to one's life. Sometimes, to do a good job and take a good step can achieve a person's life; to do a wrong thing and take a wrong step can destroy a person's life. At all times and in all over the world, there are countless people and things related to "one step and one life".
四、合理選材，務(wù)必出彩。審準(zhǔn)題目以后，就要選擇題材，運思行文了。選材時，可以選自己，也可以選他人；可以選古人，也可以選今人；可以選國人，也可以選外族。只要與“一步與一生”有關(guān)的人和事即可。因此，我們可以將題材鎖定在親人、友人，乃至古人、今人上，從正面立意，寫古今中外的風(fēng)云人物、黎民百姓因“一步”而影響“一生”的情結(jié)，表達(dá)自己的景仰敬意、歌頌贊美；也可以從反面著筆，寫歷史現(xiàn)實中的敗類小丑因“一步”而鑄就“一生”的遺憾，乃至遺臭萬年的罪惡，表達(dá)自己的憎惡仇恨或鞭撻憤怒。因此，要寫好這道作文題，選材的關(guān)鍵在于選取恰當(dāng)?shù)慕嵌?，一定要闡釋清楚“一步”與“一生”的辯證關(guān)系。而出彩的關(guān)鍵則在于表達(dá)方式的運用和突出主題的技巧?？梢曰騿蜗蛩季S，或雙向思維，或多向思維，或深入一步，別具匠心，寫出與眾不同的華章。
4、 Reasonable selection of materials must be brilliant. After examining and approving the topic, we should choose the subject matter, think and write. When selecting materials, you can choose yourself or others; you can choose the ancients or the modern; you can choose the Chinese or the foreigners. Just people and things related to "one step and one life". Therefore, we can lock the theme in our relatives, friends, and even the ancients and modern people, and from the positive perspective, we can write the complex of "one step" which affects the "life" of people at all times and in all countries, and express our admiration, praise and praise; we can also write from the opposite side, we can write the regret of "one step" which casts the "life" of the scum clowns in the historical reality, Even the infamous sin, express their hate hate hate or lash anger. Therefore, in order to write this composition well, the key of selecting materials is to choose the right angle, and to explain the dialectical relationship between "one step" and "life". The key to success lies in the use of expression and the skill of highlighting the theme. One way thinking, two-way thinking, multi-way thinking, or in-depth one step, unique, write a different chapter.
由于要求中規(guī)定“文體自選”，因此，我們可以選取情真意切的記敘文、情文并茂的散文、辯證思辨的議論文、波瀾起伏的小說，或者人物鮮活的劇本等等。但是，不管怎么說，形式只是思想感情的載體。如果我們對自己寫作的主題和題材缺乏真實的體驗和感悟，就只會搬弄套話空話，無病呻吟，無論如何也寫不出考場美文來。只要我們有真情實感，有對“一步”與“一生”的深刻認(rèn)知和獨特思考，再加上豐厚的文化積淀、扎實的寫作功夫，就一定能夠?qū)懗隽钊藫艄?jié)的佳作。
Due to the requirement of "style selection", we can choose the true narration, the prose with both feelings and texts, the argumentative paper of dialectical thinking, the novel with ups and downs, or the script with fresh characters and so on. However, in any case, form is only the carrier of thoughts and feelings. If we lack real experience and understanding of the theme and subject matter of our own writing, we will only make nonsense and moan without illness, and in any case, we will not be able to write beautiful articles in the examination room. As long as we have a real feeling, a deep understanding and unique thinking of "one step" and "life", coupled with rich cultural accumulation and solid writing skills, we will be able to write a stunning masterpiece.
