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2005年有12篇文章從25萬多份作文卷中脫穎而出，成為優(yōu)卷。所謂優(yōu)卷作文，指的是至少要在68分以上(滿分70分)的作文。據(jù)評卷老師介紹，優(yōu)卷作文是這樣產(chǎn)生的，每一份作文卷至少要經(jīng)過兩個評卷老師之手，如果兩個老師的評分差距在7分內(nèi)，那么取平均分為最后成績，否則再讓第三個老師來評分，后取相近的兩個分?jǐn)?shù)(差距也必須在7分內(nèi))的平均分。最后的平均分如果在68分以上的，就要提交到作文評卷大組進(jìn)行最后審定，大組的老師由福建師大的教授以及高考作文命題組老師組成。 福建地區(qū)高考作文題：兩幅圖：一幅是標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的圓形，周長小，面積大，比較穩(wěn)定。一幅是帶有棱角的圓形，周長大，面積小，比較多變。根據(jù)這兩幅圖自擬題目的話題作文。

In 2005, 12 articles stand out from more than 250000 Composition Papers and become excellent ones. The so-called excellent composition refers to the composition with a score of at least 68 (full score of 70). According to the teacher's introduction, excellent composition is produced in this way. Each composition paper must go through the hands of at least two teachers. If the score difference between the two teachers is within 7 points, the average score will be taken as the final score, otherwise the third teacher will score, and then the average score of the two similar scores (the difference must be within 7 points) will be taken. If the final average score is more than 68, it will be submitted to the composition assessment group for final examination. The teachers in the group are composed of the professors of Fujian Normal University and the teachers of the composition proposition group of the college entrance examination. Two pictures: one is a standard circle with small circumference, large area and relatively stable. One is a circle with edges and corners. It grows in circumference, has a small area and is relatively changeable. According to these two pictures, I made up the topic composition of the topic.

跳出枷鎖創(chuàng)造風(fēng)格

Out of the shackles to create style

為什么服裝設(shè)計師總要千方百計地設(shè)計一套又一套的時裝？為什么我們的祖國在前進(jìn)的號角中總夾雜著這樣一句話――提倡科技創(chuàng)新？為什么一座座拔地高起的高樓不沿用20世紀(jì)五六十年代建筑的風(fēng)格？一切的一切，只因為時代在變化，人的思想也在變化。時裝要迎合時代潮流，發(fā)展要與時俱進(jìn)，生活賦予了我們創(chuàng)新的動力。

Why do fashion designers always try their best to design one set of fashion after another? Why is our motherland always mixed with such a sentence in the clarion call of advancing - advocating scientific and technological innovation? Why don't the tall buildings which are standing on the ground follow the architectural style of 1950s and 1960s? All things, only because the times are changing, people's thinking is also changing. Fashion should meet the trend of the times, development should keep pace with the times, and life has given us the power of innovation.

跳出圓圈的枷鎖，創(chuàng)造新穎的風(fēng)格，這是一個充滿智慧的選擇。

It is a wise choice to jump out of the shackles of circle and create a new style.

今天接過試卷，我不由的在心中贊嘆――這是語文考試的一大革新！沒有了平日里框架式的出題方式。取而代之的是更能體現(xiàn)水平的試題結(jié)構(gòu)，我不敢說規(guī)范化的試題有何弊端，但我可以說，創(chuàng)新需要勇氣，它不僅是在選拔人才，更是在引領(lǐng)中國文學(xué)走向風(fēng)格化，這是一個成功的前奏！

Today I took the test paper, I can't help but admire it in my heart - this is a great innovation of Chinese test! There is no usual way of framing questions. Instead, it is a test structure that can better reflect the level. I can't say what's wrong with the standardized test, but I can say that innovation needs courage. It is not only to select talents, but also to lead Chinese literature towards stylization, which is a successful Prelude!

我們在適應(yīng)別人的創(chuàng)新，而為何我們不嘗試著跳出枷鎖呢？

We are adapting to other people's innovation, and why don't we try to get out of the shackles?

當(dāng)你看到身邊的交通警示牌上寫著“小心慢行”，而美國的交通警示牌上卻寫著“如果想讓你的車子游泳，請照直開”的時候，你是否感受到了風(fēng)格的魅力?！靶⌒穆小币痪錁O其規(guī)范化的話，或許只會讓人不屑一顧；而創(chuàng)新的產(chǎn)物卻不一樣，它在給人幽默感的同時，深深地印在了每一位駕駛員的心中。一成不變的事物，有時并不能達(dá)到理想的目的，而帶上風(fēng)格的創(chuàng)新，哪怕只有一點點，也許會讓人擁有喜出望外的收獲。這就是新生事物旺盛生命力的寫照。

Do you feel the charm of style when you see that the traffic warning sign beside you says "be careful and slow", while the traffic warning sign in the United States says "if you want your car to swim, please drive straight". "Be careful and walk slowly" is an extremely standardized sentence, which may only be ignored by people; however, the products of innovation are not the same. It gives people a sense of humor and is deeply impressed in the hearts of every driver. Constant things, sometimes can not achieve the ideal goal, and with style innovation, even if only a little, may let people have a surprising harvest. This is a picture of the exuberant vitality of new things.

也許你要說，被圓圈套住的事物有章可循，它更穩(wěn)定；可是別忘了，跳出枷鎖，創(chuàng)造風(fēng)格，永遠(yuǎn)領(lǐng)先于被規(guī)范化的條條框框，因為它被注入了一種鮮活的思想――創(chuàng)新。

You may say that there are rules to follow for things trapped by circles, which are more stable; but don't forget to jump out of the shackles and create styles, which are always ahead of the standardized rules and regulations, because it is infused with a fresh thought innovation.

貝多芬說過，一個卓越的人的一大優(yōu)點，就是在陳舊與新穎之間果敢地選擇了新穎。

Beethoven said that one of the great advantages of an excellent man is that he boldly chooses the novel between the old and the new.

面對同樣一顆石頭，許多雕塑家都說它是一個不屬于藝術(shù)的頑石，可是羅丹以他特有的眼光識慧于這顆石頭，并把它雕成著名的大衛(wèi)像。正像其他雕塑家所言：這顆石頭上的紋路與藝術(shù)相悖離，可是為何羅丹卻不這么認(rèn)為呢？因為他走了一條不常規(guī)的路。他用自己的技藝，避開石頭固有的紋路，創(chuàng)造了雕塑界的一大“奇觀”。

Facing the same stone, many sculptors say that it is a hard stone that does not belong to art. However, Rodin recognized the stone with his unique vision and carved it into the famous image of David. As other sculptors have said, the grain on this stone is contrary to art, but why doesn't Rodin think so? Because he took an unusual road. He used his own skills to avoid the inherent lines of stone and created a "wonder" in the sculpture world.

是什么東西如此出類拔萃，是什么東西敢于走出枷鎖，實現(xiàn)完美？是創(chuàng)新，是一種與眾不同的風(fēng)格，是它們在向“規(guī)范”挑戰(zhàn)，是它們?yōu)楦矣趧?chuàng)新的人蓄積了勝利的吶喊。

What is so outstanding, what dare to get out of the shackles and achieve perfection? It's innovation. It's a unique style. It's a challenge to "norms". It's a call for victory for those who dare to innovate.

規(guī)范化的城市、街道，規(guī)范化的工作、學(xué)習(xí)，規(guī)范化的生活、娛樂，是否已經(jīng)讓你厭倦了？沒關(guān)系，只要你帶上在規(guī)范的圈子里所學(xué)的知識，用勇氣武裝自己，帶上一顆年輕朝氣的心，堅定地跳出這一束縛思維的條框，你就會看到創(chuàng)新在向你招手，它會帶領(lǐng)你走向生命的另一個極致！

Are you tired of standardized cities and streets, standardized work and study, standardized life and entertainment? It doesn't matter, as long as you take the knowledge learned in the standard circle, arm yourself with courage, take a young and energetic heart, and firmly jump out of the box of this fettered thinking, you will see that innovation beckons to you, and it will lead you to another extreme of life!

自信一點，跳出枷鎖，創(chuàng)造風(fēng)格吧！看吧，前方的鮮花在為你歌唱，因為你是明智的！

Be confident, jump out of the shackles and create a style! Look, the flowers ahead are singing for you, because you are wise!