做真正的自我

Be the real self

即使世俗的圍墻擋住你萬丈豪情，但擋不住你鏗鏘的步伐。做真正的自我，那是陶潛的五斗詩魂；

Even if the secular walls block your lofty feelings, they can't block your sonorous steps. To be a real self is Tao Qian's Five Spirits of poetry;

即使厚重的夜幕擋住你滿天星斗，但擋不住你心中的燈火。做真正的自我，那是文天祥的零丁絕唱；

Even if the heavy night block your stars, but can not block the lights in your heart. To be a real self is Wen Tianxiang's unique singing;

即使歲月的樊籬擋住你堅強(qiáng)的身軀，但擋不住你忠貞的信念。做真正的自我，那是屈平的水中離騷。

Even if the time's barrier blocks your strong body, but can't block your faithful faith. To be a real self is Qu Ping's disdain in the water.

五斗詩魂

Five winds of poetry

采菊東籬下，悠然見南山。

Picking chrysanthemums under the eastern fence, leisurely see Nanshan.

流云伴著坎坷，來到美麗的桃花源；風(fēng)雨帶著憧憬，來到清幽的山澗；萬丈紅光透過云霧，照射在晉代的山鄉(xiāng)小巷……做真正的自我，不為五斗米折腰，你放棄了污濁塵世和榮華富貴，只為做真正的自我，遠(yuǎn)離勾心斗角的官場。江岸邊，菊花旁，你陶然其間，這是飄逸灑脫，這是自由不羈。

With the ups and downs, the flowing clouds come to the beautiful peach blossom garden; with the wind and rain, they come to the quiet mountain stream; through the clouds and mist, the ten thousand Zhang red light shines on the mountain alleys of the Jin Dynasty To be a real self is not to stoop for five Dou meters. You have given up the dirty world and the splendor, just to be a real self, far away from the official arena of intrigue. By the Bank of the river, by the chrysanthemum, you are in the middle of Tao Ran. It's free and easy, it's free and uninhibited.

快哉！做真正的自我，那是陶潛的五斗詩魂。

Quick! To be a real self is Tao Qian's soul of five poems.

零丁絕唱

Singing alone

人生自古誰無死，留取丹心照汗青。

Since ancient times, no one has died. Let's take care of the history.

故國河山淪陷的無限憤慨與悲愴，昔日繁華的宮殿早已化為斷壁殘垣，你像那天邊孤獨的云無處著落。河山萬里依然故我，你低頭回望，滿眼是百姓流離，尸骨遍野，無限感傷涌上心頭。但你做真正的自我，寧死不降，一行熱淚灑江天，成為零丁洋中的千古絕唱。

The boundless indignation and pathos of the fall of rivers and mountains in the old country, the former prosperous palace has already turned into ruins, and you are like the lonely cloud that day. The rivers and mountains are the same as me. You look back and look down. You see the people moving away, the bones are everywhere, and the infinite sadness comes to your heart. But you do the real self, rather die than fall, a line of hot tears in the river, become the eternal masterpiece in the world.

壯哉！做真正的自我，那是文天祥的零丁絕唱。

Great! To be a real self is Wen Tianxiang's unique singing.

水中離騷

Water Sao

舉世皆濁我獨清，眾人皆醉我獨醒。

The whole world is turbid and I am pure, and all people are drunk and I wake up alone.

記憶順著汨羅江，流過春秋，越過戰(zhàn)國，當(dāng)秦攻破郢都的那一刻，你悲憤至極，在嘆息中，在號哭中，在悲痛中，你雖背負(fù)太多的無奈與辛酸，但卻做真正的自我，用生命表達(dá)你對祖國的忠貞與高潔的品行。

The memory follows the Miluo River, flows through the spring and Autumn period, crosses the Warring States period, when Qin conquers the capital of Yingdu, you are extremely sad and indignant. In sighing, crying and grieving, you bear too much helplessness and bitterness, but you are the real self, expressing your loyalty and noble conduct to the motherland with your life.

悲哉！做真正的自我，那是屈平的水中離騷。

Sad! To be a real self is Qu Ping's disdain in the water.

一縷清香一份灑脫，做真正的自我，展示高潔與傲岸，那是陶潛的五斗詩魂！

A wisp of fragrance, a free and easy way, to be a real self, to show noble and lofty, that is Tao Qian's five soul of poetry!

一江春水一曲悲歌，做真正的自我，滿載大江與汪洋，那是文天祥的零丁絕唱！

A river, a sad song, to be a real self, full of river and ocean, that is Wen Tianxiang's unique singing!

一頁歷史一面鏡子，做真正的自我，昭示理性與忠貞，那是屈平的水中離騷！

A page of history, a mirror, to be a real self, to show rationality and loyalty, that is Qu Ping's water Lisao!

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這篇考場作文的精彩之處主要有三：一是構(gòu)思精巧，借助陶淵明等三位歷史名人的行為來詮釋文章主旨；二是語言精美，開篇及結(jié)尾部分精彩的排比，使全文神采飛揚；三是結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，先總說，主體部分以小標(biāo)題的形式分述，收篇處呼應(yīng)開頭，思路清晰而嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。

There are three main highlights of this composition in the examination room: first, it is elaborately conceived, with the help of the behavior of three historical celebrities such as Tao Yuanming to interpret the main idea of the article; second, the language is exquisite, and the wonderful arrangement of the opening part and the ending part makes the full text lively; third, the structure is clear, first of all, the main part is described in the form of a small title, and the closing part echoes the beginning, with clear and rigorous thinking.