一條路，走了很久，沒有盡頭；一首詩，作了很久，終難完美；一杯水，一塊石，折射出無限可能、無限人生：看似放了石頭的杯子已經(jīng)滿了，然而沙子和水還可以放進去……這正如我們的人生，看似已經(jīng)瀕于“極限”的事物總會有“驚世”轉(zhuǎn)機和意外收獲！

A road, walking for a long time, has no end; a poem, written for a long time, will not be perfect; a glass of water, a stone, reflects the infinite possibility, infinite life: it seems that the glass with the stone is full, but the sand and water can also be put in This is just like our life. Things that seem to be on the verge of "limit" will always have "amazing" turnaround and unexpected harvest!

曾記否，那年小小的你，執(zhí)拗地甩開父親的手，爬上自己的“鐵馬”。你鎖眉，你嚴肅，你滿眼執(zhí)著。終于，你登上“寶座”，用力一蹬，自行車動了。可是你的腳還夠不到大大的車蹬啊。下一秒，事情可想而知……父親急忙挪開壓在你身上的車，從摔倒到被扶起一語不發(fā)的你笑了，笑著說：“爸爸，我做到了?！币苍S你摔倒了，但從你執(zhí)意自己騎車的那一刻起，就注定了你是成功的。因為那一刻，你挑戰(zhàn)了自己，超越了自己年齡和身體的極限……

Have you ever remembered that year, you stubbornly threw off your father's hand and climbed onto your "iron horse". You lock your eyebrows, you're serious, you're obsessed. Finally, you step on the throne, push hard, and the bike moves. But your feet can't reach the big pedals. Next second, we can imagine My father quickly moved away from the car on you. You smiled and said, "Dad, I did it." Maybe you fell down, but from the moment you decide to ride your bike, you are doomed to success. Because at that moment, you challenged yourself, beyond your age and physical limits

曾記否，那年你站在小小的舞臺上，那樣稚拙。漲紅的小臉，不自然地向上揚起的嘴角，細密的汗珠，借助你不知所安的眼睛和體側(cè)緊握的雙手，一眼就看到你臉上寫著：無助。然而，那第一句的清晰歌唱，收尾時的燦爛微笑，表明了你無可爭議的勝利爆發(fā)，你必將化繭成蝶，炫彩飛舞。因為那一刻，你戰(zhàn)勝了自己，解開沉重枷鎖，超越了心理極限……

Ever remember, that year you stood on a small stage, so naive. The little red face, the unnatural upward raised corner of the mouth, the fine sweat, with the help of your eyes and hands that you don't know where you are, you can see that your face is written: helpless. However, the clear singing of the first sentence and the brilliant smile at the end show that your indisputable victory will break out, and you will turn into a butterfly and fly in brilliant colors. Because at that moment, you overcome yourself, untie the heavy shackles, and transcend the psychological limit

曾記否，汶川地震158個小時后帶給你的驚喜和感動，救援的黃金時間已經(jīng)過去了八十幾個小時，他依然生還，虛弱但不懦弱。在黑暗中，摸索、等待是他生存的重心。然而最苦悶、最絕望的時期，他熬過來了。當?shù)谝豢|陽光照進那微小的縫隙時，就已宣告了他在這場與死神的拉鋸戰(zhàn)中勝利了。那一刻，他安全了，勝利了。生命的光輝在他身后光彩奪目，因為那一刻，他也克服了自己的生理和心理的種種困難，走出陰霾，超越了生命的極限……

Did you remember that 158 hours after the Wenchuan earthquake, the golden time for rescue has passed for more than 80 hours, and he is still alive, weak but not cowardly. In the dark, groping and waiting are the focus of his existence. However, he survived the most miserable and desperate period. When the first ray of sunlight shines into the tiny gap, it has declared his victory in the battle with death. At that moment, he was safe and won. The brilliance of life is shining behind him, because at that moment, he also overcame his physiological and psychological difficulties, walked out of the haze, and exceeded the limit of life

曾經(jīng)，珠穆朗瑪峰是不可征服的；曾經(jīng)，南極極點是不可穿越的；曾經(jīng)，馬里亞納海溝是下不去的……而今，珠峰上插遍了各國國旗；極點上留下了我們的足跡；海溝里還有我們的殘溫……這一個個的不可能現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)變得平常無奇，不經(jīng)意間我們發(fā)現(xiàn)：都是因為“極限”，我們超越了極限，讓不可能成為可能。

Once, Everest was invincible; once, the Antarctic pole was invincible; once, the Mariana Trench was invincible Now, the national flags of all countries are planted on Everest; our footprints are left on the poles; there is our residual temperature in the trenches This one by one impossibility has now become commonplace. Inadvertently, we find that it's all because of the "limit". We have exceeded the limit and made the impossibility possible.

蝶的飛舞是因為它超越了繭層的極限；花的芬芳，是因為它超越了苞葉的極限；果的誘人，是因為它突破了青澀的極限……

Butterflies fly because they exceed the limit of cocoon layer, flowers are fragrant because they exceed the limit of bracts, fruits are attractive because they exceed the limit of green

漫漫人生路，我們知道，害怕退卻，沒有出路；我們也知道，中途拋錨，又要耽誤時間；我們更知道，任其飄搖，就有觸礁沉沒的危險。所以，“超越”是我們的必經(jīng)之路，唯有越過“極限”的高山，我們才能看到曠世奇景！

Long life, we know, afraid of retreat, no way out; we also know, anchor midway, but also delay time; we know, let it drift, there is a risk of sinking on the rocks. Therefore, "Surpassing" is our only way. Only when we surpass the "extreme" mountains, can we see the wonders of the world!

【名師點評】

[comments on famous teachers]

文章用抒情的筆調(diào)頌揚無極限的人生。作者運用具有濃郁抒情意味的語言對敢于超越自己的孩子給予了頌揚，對在汶川大地震中超越72小時生命極限頑強堅持到生還的受難者，對征服珠穆朗瑪峰、南極、馬里亞納海溝等人類極限的中國人進行頌揚。全文語言感情充沛，激情洋溢。

The article uses lyrical style to praise the limitless life. The author uses lyrical language to praise the children who dare to surpass themselves, the victims who are determined to survive in the Wenchuan earthquake, and the Chinese who conquered the limits of human beings such as Mount Everest, Antarctica and Mariana Trench. The language is full of emotion and passion.

這篇作文是情理相生的散文。從說理這個角度，作者在第一段運用走路、寫詩引出作文題目中材料所涉及的話題，提出了無極限的觀點。然后以第一次騎自行車的孩子，第一次上舞臺的孩子以及地震中超越生命極限頑強堅持的災(zāi)民，征服珠峰、南極等的英雄豪杰為事例論證，充分地說明了超越人類極限完全是有可能的。從抒情的角度說，作者在文章前半部分寫孩子的事例時采用了第二人稱的寫法，使文章親切，富有情感，而全文主要采用排比段的寫法，也為增添抒情意味作了很好的蓄勢。(李錫琴)

This composition is an essay of mutual affection and reason. From the point of view of reasoning, in the first paragraph, the author uses walking and writing poetry to lead to the topics involved in the materials in the composition, and puts forward the unlimited point of view. Then, taking the children who ride bicycles for the first time, the children who go on stage for the first time, the victims who persist in transcending the limit of life in the earthquake, and the heroes who conquer Everest, Antarctica and other places as examples to demonstrate that it is completely possible to transcend the limit of human beings. From the lyrical point of view, the author used the second person writing method in the first half of the article to write children's cases, which makes the article cordial and full of emotion, while the full text mainly uses the method of arranging paragraphs, which also makes a good preparation for adding lyrical meaning. (Li Xiqin)