“輕輕地握著你的手，為你把眼淚擦干。這顆心永遠(yuǎn)屬于你，告訴我不再孤單?！?/p>

"Gently hold your hand and dry your tears. This heart belongs to you forever, tell me no longer alone

5月19日14時(shí)28分起，整個(gè)奔忙飛跑的中國(guó)，在尖利的防空警報(bào)聲后停頓三分鐘。

From 14:28 on May 19, the whole China, running fast, stopped for three minutes after the sharp air defense alarm.

七天前的同一時(shí)刻，一場(chǎng)特大地震撼動(dòng)了大半個(gè)中國(guó)，神州上下，共此國(guó)殤。

Seven days ago, at the same time, a huge earthquake shook most of China, Shenzhou up and down, a total of this war.

國(guó)殤是一場(chǎng)悲劇，然而，國(guó)殤更是一次空前的團(tuán)聚。

War is a tragedy, however, war is an unprecedented reunion.

很久之前，詩(shī)人王昌齡這么寫道：“青山一道同風(fēng)雨，明月何曾是兩鄉(xiāng)。”青山無(wú)法阻隔我們風(fēng)雨同舟的攜手，地域也不會(huì)隱沒(méi)團(tuán)結(jié)一心的中華民族頭上那輪共有的明月。

A long time ago, the poet Wang Changling wrote: "Qingshan is the same wind and rain, and the moon is not the two townships." Qingshan mountain can't prevent us from joining hands in the same boat, nor can the region conceal the bright moon shared by the United Chinese nation.

一個(gè)人，一絲希望，一顆堅(jiān)定的心。當(dāng)救援部隊(duì)在汶川大地震的廢墟下救出被困60余小時(shí)的姑娘樂(lè)劉會(huì)時(shí)，在場(chǎng)的人們激動(dòng)地哭了，而她卻沒(méi)有哭?！拔蚁嘈庞腥藭?huì)來(lái)救我的，一定會(huì)，我相信你們！”從未掉過(guò)一滴眼淚，這個(gè)看上去灰頭土臉的妙齡女子始終微笑著，緊緊拉著救援人員的手。一雙手和十幾雙手緊緊地交握，這是一個(gè)災(zāi)民與她的救命恩人們最質(zhì)樸也最真誠(chéng)的團(tuán)聚。

A person, a glimmer of hope, a firm heart. When the rescue forces rescued the girl Leliu Hui trapped for more than 60 hours under the ruins of Wenchuan earthquake, the people on the scene cried excitedly, but she did not cry. "I believe that someone will come to save me. I will. I believe you!" Never a drop of tears fell. The young woman, who looked ashen, smiled all the time and held the rescue workers' hands tightly. It is the most simple and sincere reunion between a disaster victim and her rescuers.

五千米的高空有多高？問(wèn)起參加救援的解放軍戰(zhàn)士，他們會(huì)告訴你：五千米是我們能否拉住受災(zāi)人民的手的距離，是生與死的距離。五千米，這個(gè)國(guó)際專業(yè)領(lǐng)域深感不可能執(zhí)行的跳傘高度，被解放軍空降戰(zhàn)士拋在腦后。撥不開汶川上空連天蔽日的迷霧，但他們必須撥開震區(qū)人民心上的烏云。就這樣，“人民的軍隊(duì)”從五千米的高空降下，給災(zāi)區(qū)斷絕天日、與世隔絕的鄉(xiāng)鎮(zhèn)帶去了救命的福音。村人們激動(dòng)地說(shuō)：“解放軍來(lái)了！”這壯烈的一幕便不只出現(xiàn)在革命戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)年代，這是一地鄉(xiāng)民與國(guó)家之間最動(dòng)人的團(tuán)聚。

How high is 5000 meters? Ask the PLA soldiers participating in the rescue, they will tell you: five thousand meters is the distance between us and the people affected by the disaster, the distance between life and death. Five thousand meters, which is a highly improbable skydiving altitude in the international professional field, was left behind by PLA airborne fighters. They couldn't get rid of the fog that covered the sky over Wenchuan, but they had to get rid of the dark clouds in the hearts of the people in the earthquake area. In this way, the "people's army" descended from a height of 5000 meters, bringing life-saving gospel to the isolated villages and towns in the disaster area. The villagers said excitedly, "the PLA is coming!" This heroic scene is not only in the Revolutionary War era, it is the most touching reunion between the villagers and the country.

海洋曾把世界割裂成對(duì)立的區(qū)域，而今天海洋再不能阻斷世界的愛(ài)心匯聚到一起。這愛(ài)心來(lái)自東鄰日本每一個(gè)便利店前的捐款箱，來(lái)自大洋彼岸的美國(guó)遍及各州的慈善機(jī)構(gòu)，來(lái)自大陸西岸那些并不富有的亞非國(guó)家一筆筆友誼的捐款……中國(guó)和某些國(guó)家因意識(shí)形態(tài)而產(chǎn)生的分歧，在災(zāi)難面前湮沒(méi)成沙，隨著飛機(jī)和航船源源不斷地向著東方的中國(guó)而來(lái)，這是全世界各個(gè)國(guó)家的人心最盛大的團(tuán)聚。

The ocean once divided the world into opposing regions, but today the ocean can no longer stop the love of the world coming together. This love comes from the donation box in front of every convenience store in Japan, from the American charities all over the country on the other side of the ocean, and from the Asian and African countries that are not rich on the West Bank of the mainland The ideological differences between China and some other countries have been buried in the sand in the face of the disaster. With the continuous flow of airplanes and ships to China in the East, this is the most grand reunion of the people of all countries in the world.

愴然災(zāi)難，古來(lái)有之。然而歷史由古至今，誰(shuí)可曾見過(guò)這般撼天動(dòng)地、凝聚人心的團(tuán)結(jié)？《史記》中有云，民與民同心，則家安之；君與民同心，則國(guó)興之。在今天，則是人民與人民、人民與國(guó)家、國(guó)家與世界的攜手，又何愁家不安、國(guó)不興？

Pathetic disaster has existed since ancient times. However, from ancient times to the present, who has ever seen such a shocking and cohesive unity? In historical records, it is said that if the people are united, the family will be safe; if the people are united, the country will be prosperous. Today, it's people and people, people and country, country and the world. Why worry about the uneasiness of home and country?

青山一道，我們同歷風(fēng)雨共團(tuán)聚；而將五洲四海的人心聯(lián)結(jié)在一起的紐帶，是這樣一種期望：為天下立心，為生民立命，為往圣繼絕學(xué)，為萬(wàn)世享太平！

Together with Qingshan mountain, we have been reunited with the past. The bond that connects the hearts of people from all over the world is the expectation: to build a heart for the world, to build a life for the people, to inherit the unique learning for the saints, and to enjoy peace for all the world!

【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】

[comments on famous teachers]

此文在亮出“國(guó)殤是一場(chǎng)悲劇，然而，國(guó)殤更是一次空前的團(tuán)聚”這一觀點(diǎn)后，精選典型事例，通過(guò)“一個(gè)災(zāi)民與她的救命恩人們最質(zhì)樸也最真誠(chéng)的團(tuán)聚”等三個(gè)層次，逐層深入地展開論證，最后歸結(jié)出“在今天，則是人民與人民、人民與國(guó)家、國(guó)家與世界的攜手，又何愁家不安、國(guó)不興”。全文見解新穎，內(nèi)容集中，思路清晰，材料豐富。?文章語(yǔ)言流暢，巧妙融合現(xiàn)代歌詞、古代詩(shī)文、現(xiàn)實(shí)場(chǎng)景于一爐，“青山無(wú)法阻隔我們風(fēng)雨同舟的攜手，地域也不會(huì)隱沒(méi)團(tuán)結(jié)一心的民族頭上那輪共有的明月”“五千米是我們能否拉住受災(zāi)人民的手的距離，是生與死的距離”“撥不開汶川上空連天蔽日的迷霧，但他們必須撥開震區(qū)人民心上的烏云”等文句既飽含深情又文采飛揚(yáng)，體現(xiàn)出作者深厚的寫作功底。

This paper, after revealing the view that "war is a tragedy, but war is an unprecedented reunion", selects typical examples, and demonstrates them from three levels: the most simple and sincere reunion between a disaster victim and her benefactor. Finally, it comes to the conclusion that "in today's world, it's the joint efforts of people and people, people and country, and country and the world." How can I worry about my family's uneasiness and my country's unhappiness. The full text has novel ideas, concentrated content, clear thinking and rich materials. "The language of the article is fluent and skillfully integrates modern lyrics, ancient poems and realistic scenes in one furnace." Qingshan mountain can't block our hand in hand, and the region can't hide the common bright moon on the head of a united nation. "" 5000 meters is the distance between us and the victims' hands, the distance between life and death. "" we can't get rid of the fog that covers the sky and blocks the sun over Wenchuan, but They must get rid of the dark clouds in the hearts of the people in the earthquake area "and other sentences are full of affection and elegant, reflecting the author's profound writing skills.

《青山一道同風(fēng)雨》一文不是簡(jiǎn)單地羅列現(xiàn)象，而是將內(nèi)容集中到“團(tuán)聚”這一個(gè)點(diǎn)上，取得了很好的表達(dá)效果。它給我們的啟示是：考場(chǎng)作文角度要巧，開掘要深，應(yīng)善于以小見大。

The article "Qingshan together with wind and rain" is not a simple list of phenomena, but focuses on the point of "Reunion", and achieves a good expression effect. The enlightenment it gives us is that we should be skillful in the angle of composition in the examination room, deep in exploration, and good at taking the small into the big.