誰都想走筆直大道，但世上沒有永遠(yuǎn)的筆直大道，只要你一直往前走，你就避免不了遇到坡道和彎路。

Everyone wants to go straight, but there is no straight road in the world. As long as you go straight, you can't avoid encountering ramps and detours.

若干年前，人們總是按照自身的偏好，將高速公路裁彎修直，想節(jié)省點(diǎn)資金，也想給匆忙的人們節(jié)省點(diǎn)時間，可事與愿違，筆直的高速公路上，車禍頻起。后來人們才發(fā)現(xiàn)都是“直道惹的禍”。直道讓人視力疲勞，讓人心思倦怠。將直道有意調(diào)彎后，人們用心轉(zhuǎn)彎，反而事故少有發(fā)生，從而安全地到達(dá)目的地。高考資源網(wǎng)

A few years ago, people always cut corners and straightened highways according to their own preferences. They wanted to save money and time for people in a hurry. However, on the straight highways, traffic accidents happened frequently. Later, people found out that it was "the disaster caused by the straight way". Straight road makes people tired of vision and mind. When the straights are deliberately turned, people turn with their hearts. On the contrary, accidents rarely happen, so as to reach the destination safely. College entrance examination resource network

其實自然界的生命也是一樣，它們都要經(jīng)歷生命的“彎道”，沒有隨隨便便的成功。禾苗長大要經(jīng)過風(fēng)霜雨雪的“彎道”，揠苗助長只會使它過早枯黃；夏蟬破蛹要經(jīng)過痛苦掙扎的“彎道”，剪蛹幫助只能加速它的死亡。彎道是它們成長的一部分。

In fact, life in nature is the same. They all have to go through the "detour" of life and have no casual success. When the seedlings grow up, they have to go through the "curve" of wind, frost, rain and snow. If the seedlings are encouraged, they will only wither prematurely; if the summer cicadas break their pupae, they have to go through the "curve" of painful struggle. The help of cutting the pupae can only accelerate their death. Curves are part of their growth.

人生有誰不想避開彎道，可生命的輝煌就必須經(jīng)過“彎道”的磨礪，不經(jīng)風(fēng)雨，怎見彩虹，沒有曲折，哪來成功。毛澤東在領(lǐng)導(dǎo)紅軍反圍剿時，四渡赤水，南涉烏江，來往兜圈，盡走彎道。事后才知，不是走了這些“弓背路”，早已像石達(dá)開一樣葬身大渡河了。毛澤東在彎道中尋到了生機(jī)，走出了勝利。

Who doesn't want to avoid the detour in life, but the brilliance of life must be honed by the detour, without wind and rain, how to see the rainbow, without twists and turns, where to succeed. When Mao Zedong led the Red Army in its counter campaign against encirclement and suppression, he crossed Chishui four times and Wujiang River in the south, making circles and detours. Later, I learned that it was not through these "bow back roads" that I had already died in Dadu River like Shi Dakai. Mao Zedong found life in the bend and walked out of victory.

蘇東坡，面臨過人生彎道，從仕途的高峰跌落到低谷，從皇帝、太后都欣賞的才子變成貶往黃州的遷客。就在黃州這個彎道上，蘇軾飲盡孤獨(dú)，洗盡浮華，從而寫出了流芳百世的《念奴嬌·赤壁懷古》和《赤壁賦》。蘇子從彎道上走出了精彩。

Su Dongpo, faced with a life curve, fell from the peak of his official career to the trough, and changed from a talent appreciated by the emperor and the Empress Dowager to a exile to Huangzhou. On the bend of Huangzhou, sushi drank all his loneliness and swayed all his pomp, thus wrote the immortal "niannujiao · Chibi nostalgia" and "Chibi Fu". Suzi walked out of the corner.

泰戈爾說：“上天完全是為了堅強(qiáng)你的意志，才在道路上設(shè)下重重的障礙。”面對彎道，我們不要憂慮，要審時度勢，邁步前行。美國華裔商務(wù)部長駱家輝在任華盛頓州州長時說，在一百年前，他的祖父在距華盛頓州長官邸不到2000米處的白人家庭做傭人。一百年后的1997年，自己跨進(jìn)這座官邸，成為美國歷史上第一位華裔州長。駱家輝無不感慨地說：這2000米的路，他們家走了一百年。

Tagore said: "God set up many obstacles on the road just to strengthen your will." Facing the curve, we should not worry, but judge the situation and move forward. Locke, the Chinese American Secretary of Commerce, said his grandfather worked as a servant in a white family less than 2000 meters from the governor's residence a hundred years ago. A hundred years later, in 1997, I stepped into the mansion and became the first Chinese Governor in American history. Luo Jiahui all said with emotion: This 2000 meter Road, their home walked for one hundred years.

這又是一條什么樣的路，需要用一百年的時間呢？

What kind of road will it take for 100 years?

顯然這不是空間上的有形距離，而是他家庭的奮斗之路。在這條路上肯定有許多險灘彎道，只有忍耐，憑心智和勇氣沿著崎嶇彎道埋頭前行的人，最終才走向了事業(yè)的高峰。

Obviously, this is not the physical distance in space, but the struggle of his family. There must be many dangerous corners on this road. Only those who persevere and follow the rugged curves with their mind and courage can finally reach the peak of their career.

當(dāng)然我們也不是刻意丟了直道走彎道，就像頑皮的孩子在雨天盡找水凼里走一樣。我們在學(xué)習(xí)中盡可能地避免走彎路，汲取經(jīng)驗，助己成功；在生活中也應(yīng)盡可能地避開繁瑣波折，把握方向，揚(yáng)帆直航。在工作中也應(yīng)盡量減少內(nèi)耗，構(gòu)筑和諧，讓生命呈現(xiàn)五光十色。

Of course, we don't deliberately lose the straight way to walk around the bend, just like naughty children do their best to look for water in rainy days. In our study, we should try our best to avoid detours, learn from experience and help ourselves succeed; in our life, we should also try our best to avoid complicated twists and turns, grasp the direction and sail straight. In the work, we should also try to reduce internal friction, build harmony and make life colorful.

但我們也要從殘酷的現(xiàn)實中明白，人生的彎道時常橫亙在你的眼前：汶川地震的噩夢還未全醒，重慶山體滑坡又埋下無辜的生命，金融危機(jī)讓全球經(jīng)濟(jì)遇冷，法航空難200多旅客喪生……但我們也應(yīng)清醒地認(rèn)識到，彎道與超越同在，困難與希望并存。

But we also need to understand from the cruel reality that the curve of life is always in front of you: the nightmare of Wenchuan earthquake has not been fully awakened, the landslide in Chongqing has buried innocent lives, the financial crisis has cooled the global economy, and more than 200 passengers in Air France crash have died But we should also be aware of the fact that detours are with transcendence, difficulties and hopes coexist.

誠然不是所有的山都能打隧洞，不是所有的河都要架高橋，不是所有的災(zāi)難都可避免，也不是所有的彎道都能“取直”超越，但是當(dāng)命運(yùn)之神沒有及時垂下救生的舷梯時，你要堅守希望，不要?dú)怵H，用你的“心”——誠實、睿智、潛能和堅韌去面對，或忍受不幸，無奈滑行；或抓住機(jī)遇，加速拐彎。

It's true that not all mountains can tunnel, not all rivers need high bridges, not all disasters can be avoided, and not all curves can be "straightened" beyond, but when the God of fate does not timely drop the life-saving gangway, you should stick to hope, don't be discouraged, use your "heart" - honesty, wisdom, potential and tenacity to face, or endure misfortune, We have no choice but to slide or seize the opportunity to accelerate the turn.

人生漫道多艱難，用“心”繞過那道彎。

Life is a long way, with the "heart" around the corner.

[簡評]：這篇考場作文寫得很成功。標(biāo)題即是論點(diǎn)，讓人一目了然。文中圍繞論點(diǎn)例舉論據(jù)：古今中外娓娓道來，且有詳有略；論證上正反對比，令人信服；結(jié)構(gòu)完整，結(jié)尾深化論點(diǎn)；語言順暢，條理清晰，顯示出作者駕馭語言的純熟，在考場有限的時間內(nèi)完成這樣一篇優(yōu)秀作文，實屬可貴。

[brief comment]: this composition was written successfully. The title is the argument, which is clear at a glance. In this paper, the arguments around the argument are as follows: from ancient times to modern times, there are some details, some details; the positive and negative contrast in the argument is convincing; the structure is complete, and the ending deepens the argument; the language is smooth and clear, showing the author's proficiency in controlling the language, and it is valuable to complete such an excellent composition in a limited time in the examination room.