My Father

　　There is always a brilliant image living in my heart. That is my dear father. Seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. But he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, I have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as diligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.Being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. He works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. He seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not much. He chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.

　　Father devotes all himself to our family. As we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. For the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously in the fields throughout the year. Now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. In spite of all this, father never complains to us. It is his full devotion that we're living a better life now. It is his full devotion that both my brother and I are able to study at college.Father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. Whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. If my brother and I fall ill, he will not hesitate a moment to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. My mother suffers a bad disease. Father looks after her very carefully. He never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. Mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.

　　Father is a person full of optimism. He never complains about our poor life. He is never frustrated by trouble. He often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. Due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.

　　We all think that father is not in the least an ordinary man. He plays an extraordinary role in my family. We can't have anything without him. Now I'm pursuing further studies at college far away from father. I miss him very much. And I often see him in my dreams. His great image is deeply carved in my mind.

　　我父親的光輝形象永遠是一種生活在我的心里吧.”那是我親愛的爸爸.在許多其他人的眼中,父親似乎是一個很普通的人.但在我的眼里他很特別,自從我的童年他在我眼中一直都是勤奮、敬業(yè)、保健、樂觀.

　　作為一個農(nóng)民,父親在田里工作很努力.收獲的季節(jié)，他每天從早到晚工作,直到午夜時.他很少像其他的農(nóng)民享受休閑,即使在農(nóng)場工作不多的時候.他選擇一個繁忙的生活不情愿停下來。

　　父親為了我們這個家奉獻了他的全部.當我們貧窮時,他總是盡自己最大的努力來支持我們的家庭和支付我哥哥和我的學費.為整個家庭,為哥哥和我,他總是不停地在地里工作一整年.現(xiàn)在他因為過度辛勤工作已經(jīng)有了一個滿是皺紋的臉和白色毛發(fā),歲,比任何其他與他相同的年齡的人.雖有這一切的事,父親從不抱怨.這是他的全部奉獻,我們正處在一個更好的生活.這是他的全部奉獻,我的兄弟和我都能在大學讀書。

　　父親十分關心我們，和我母親一樣.每當有什么好吃的食物放在桌子上,他只是讓我們吃自己吃少點.如果我和我兄弟生病,他會毫不猶豫地讓拿些藥給我們或帶我們?nèi)タ瘁t(yī)生.我的母親受嚴重的疾病.父親照料得很認真.他從不讓媽媽在家里和田間做什么繁重的工作.感謝他的母親,她經(jīng)常在別人面前稱贊他為模范丈夫。

　　父親是一個十分樂觀的人.他從不抱怨我們貧窮的生活.他從未灰心喪氣.他經(jīng)常告訴我們,一切都會好起來的,如果我們有足夠的信心.由于他的樂觀,我們都是自信的面對我們的生活和工作。我們都認為,父親是不平凡的人.他在我的家庭中具有非常重要的作用.我們能不能有什么東西.現(xiàn)在我繼續(xù)進修大學遠離的父親.我懷念他.我經(jīng)常看到他在我的夢.他的偉大的形象深深刻在我的腦海里.

　　評語： 本文作者以樸實的語言充滿感情地刻畫了父親的不平凡的形象，分別從四個不同的角度描述了父親的勤勞、奉獻、關愛和樂觀。內(nèi)容真實感人，行文簡潔流暢，結構清晰，組織有條有理，首尾呼應，給讀者以強烈的感染力。 作者用詞簡潔精確，并能很好地嘗試一些新學的詞匯及表達，使簡潔的行。文更為生動。作者沒有運用太多復雜的句式，但能適當運用介詞短語、分詞結構、強調(diào)及重復的手法，恰到好處 地突出了行文句式的變化，使文章更耐讀。