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托福獨(dú)立口語(yǔ)高頻話題資深講師批改分享：志愿者幫助老人
本期托福獨(dú)立口語(yǔ)高頻話題
What would you like to do when you work as a volunteer to help elderly people?
學(xué)生對(duì)此話題的表述答案
If I have a chance to volunteer to help old people, I will throw a party for them. Because, firstly, I think a party is a good place to show talent of old people. Many old people have great talent, some of them can sing every well, some of them can dance very well. If you hold a party for them, they will have an opportunity to show that talent. It will make them more confident and also make their life more colorful. Secondly, If I throw a party for them. They will have more chances to meet new people and make friends. Because old people are always very lonely. They really need someone to be their side and to listen to them.
資深講師批改意見(jiàn)
發(fā)音部分需注意的幾個(gè)詞(Pronunciation)
1 party
2 colorful
語(yǔ)法方面出現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤(Grammar)
1 Because, firstly————Firstly
2 Because old people————Old people
表達(dá)部分存在的問(wèn)題(Expression)
1 some of them can sing every well, some of them can dance very well.————some of them can sing or dance very well
2 are always very lonely————can get very lonely
此高頻話題高分口語(yǔ)模板分享
If I have a chance to volunteer to help old people, I will throw a party for them. Firstly, I think a party is a good place to show talents of old people. Many old people have great talents, some of them can sing or dance very well. If you hold a party for them, they will have a place to show their talents. It will make them more confident, and also make their life more colorful. Secondly, if I throw a party for them, they will have more chances to meet new people and make friends. Old people can get very lonely. They really need someone to be at their side and to listen to them.
托福獨(dú)立口語(yǔ)高頻話題資深講師批改分享：安靜的學(xué)習(xí)工作環(huán)境
本期托福獨(dú)立口語(yǔ)高頻話題
When they are studying or working, some people prefer to listen to music while others prefer to stay in a quiet place. Which do you prefer and why?
學(xué)生對(duì)此話題的表述答案
I prefer to stay in a quiet place to study. Because only in that way, I can be more concentreated on my studies. As a law school student, I have too many legal terms and provisions to recite. Music, noisy or things like that may divert my attention. Music for me is more like an entertainment. When it plays the music that I like, I may be immersed in it. So it's not a good choice for me to listen to music when I'm study.
資深講師批改意見(jiàn)
發(fā)音部分需注意的幾個(gè)詞(Pronunciation)
1 study
語(yǔ)法方面出現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤(Grammar)
1 noisy————noise
2 When I'm study————When I study
表達(dá)部分存在的問(wèn)題(Expression)
1 I prefer to stay in a quiet place to study. Because only in that way, I can be more concentreated on my study.————I prefer to study in a quiet place, because that's the only way I can concentrate on my studies.
2 too many————many
3 recite————memorize
4 When it plays————When I play
此高頻話題高分口語(yǔ)模板分享
I prefer to study in a quiet place, because that's the only way I can concentrate on my studies. As a law school student, I have many legal terms and provisions to recite/memorize. Music, noise or things like that may divert my attention. Music for me is more like entertainment. When I play the music that I like, I maybe immersed in it. So it is not a good idea for me to listen to music when I study.
托福獨(dú)立口語(yǔ)高頻話題資深講師批改分享：如何保護(hù)環(huán)境?
本期托福獨(dú)立口語(yǔ)高頻話題
An environmental group is planning to organize an activity to protect the environment. What activity would you suggest?
學(xué)生對(duì)此話題的表述答案
I think the most significant activity the environmental group should do is to plant more trees worldwide. It is reported that the desert has occupied a fourth of the earth landing surface. And this process is increasing at a alarming speed. As we know, planting tree can reduce the erosion to green area by wind and soil from the deserts. Because the root of green trees can strengthen the sand in the deserts. By doing this, we can protect the environmental conditions both in the cities and deserts.
資深講師批改意見(jiàn)
發(fā)音部分需注意的幾個(gè)詞(Pronunciation)
1 worldwide
2 deserts
3 erosion
語(yǔ)法方面出現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤(Grammar)
1 to green area————in green areas
2 because (delete)
表達(dá)部分存在的問(wèn)題(Expression)
1 landing surface————land surface
2 by wind and soil————caused by wind and soil
此高頻話題高分口語(yǔ)模板分享
I think the most significant activity the environmental group should do is to plant more trees worldwide. It is reported that the deserts have occupied a fourth of the earth's land surface. And this process is increasing at an alarming speed. As we know, planting trees can reduce the erosion in gree areas caused by wind and soil from the desserts. The roots of the green trees can strenghten the sand in desserts. By doing this, we can protect the environmental conditioin both in cities and desserts.
托福獨(dú)立口語(yǔ)高頻話題資深講師批改分享：拯救地球環(huán)境
本期托福獨(dú)立口語(yǔ)高頻話題
We are facing serious environmental problems. What can we do to save the planet?
學(xué)生對(duì)此話題的表述答案
Facing serious environmental problems, we should take many measures. One effective way is to improve the education standard, because education is a akin to some of these problem. We should inform more people with the importance of environment and the effective way to protect it. And another way is to encourage people to live in environment friendly ways. For example, people should plant trees in their spare time and take public transport instead of driving private cars. So our environment will be better.
資深講師批改意見(jiàn)
發(fā)音部分需注意的幾個(gè)詞(Pronunciation)
1 problems
2 plant
3 trees
4 measures
語(yǔ)法方面出現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤(Grammar)
1 inform more people with the importance of environment and the effective way to protect it————inform more people of the importance of the environment and effective ways to protect it
2 education is akin to some of these problem————education is akin to some of these problems
表達(dá)部分存在的問(wèn)題(Expression)
1 Facing serious environmental problems, we should take many measures————While we are facing serious environmental problems, we need to take a lot of/many measures
2 environment friendly————encironmentally friendly
此高頻話題高分口語(yǔ)模板分享
While we are facing environmental problems, we should take a lot of measures to solve these problems. First, we need better education. We need to inform people the importance of the environment and the ways that we can protect it. We need to teach people how they can contribute to protect the environment. We also need to encourage people to live environmentally friendly lives and develop environmentally friendly habits. We need to encourage people to plant trees in their spare time, and we need to encourage people to take public transport instead of driving, so the environment will be better. By educating people and encourage them to live encironmentally friendly lives. We can save the planet.
托福獨(dú)立口語(yǔ)高頻話題資深講師批改分享：互聯(lián)網(wǎng)改變生活
本期托福獨(dú)立口語(yǔ)高頻話題
How has the availability of the worldwide Internet changed people's life?
學(xué)生對(duì)此話題的表述答案
on my daily life, I would say the increasing of ability of internet is the most important advancement in our life. It makes people's lives ever more convenient and colorful. For example, when I need to find the answer of the queston, it is as simple as putting the key words into the search box, and then I could check all the information below the box. By contrast, it is hard to find the exact piece of information from hundreds of pages in traditional way. Secondly, it provides us sufficient resource to support our daily lives, such as news on the internet and the latest results from the research.
資深講師批改意見(jiàn)
發(fā)音部分需注意的幾個(gè)詞(Pronunciation)
1 it
2 makes
語(yǔ)法方面出現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤(Grammar)
1 the increasing of ability of internet————the increasing capabilities of the internet
2 it is hard to find the exact piece of information from hundreds of pages in traditional way————it is hard to find specific piece of information in the traditional way of looking through hundreds of pages
表達(dá)部分存在的問(wèn)題(Expression)
1 I could check all the information below the box.————I can look through all the information below the search bar.
2 latest result from the research————latest research results.
此高頻話題高分口語(yǔ)模板分享
The internet is the most important advancement in mordern life. The internet makes people's lives ever more colorful and convenient. When searching for information, we can use a search engine where we all have to do is to put the key words into the search bar and then look through the information below the search bar to find what we need. It used to be much harder to find specific information the traditional way of looking through hundreds of pages and books. The internet not only makes research more convenient for us, but it keeps us updated about the news all over the world. It also keeps us updated on different kinds of research. Internet access changed many people's lives in many crucial ways.
