對(duì)于很多備考雅思寫(xiě)作的同學(xué)，經(jīng)常能遭遇到總突破不了高分的困境。單詞，模板，萬(wàn)能句式什么的都沒(méi)少背，為什么還不能提高呢?今天小編給大家?guī)?lái)了雅思寫(xiě)作提分五點(diǎn)要求,希望能夠幫助到大家，一起來(lái)學(xué)習(xí)吧。
雅思寫(xiě)作提分五點(diǎn)要求
雅思寫(xiě)作提分要求1：審題最重要，緊抓題目中心論點(diǎn)，觀點(diǎn)鮮明，論據(jù)充分。
通常來(lái)說(shuō)，考生在進(jìn)行雅思作文寫(xiě)作中。除了要抓住題目核心之外，就是要對(duì)考生寫(xiě)的話題要有鮮明的觀點(diǎn)和充分的論據(jù)。尤其是對(duì)論據(jù)的敘說(shuō)，因?yàn)橛^點(diǎn)很好被提出來(lái)，重點(diǎn)就是你選用的題材是不是很恰當(dāng)。同時(shí)有良好的方法將論據(jù)一一延展。文章應(yīng)該有一條無(wú)形的線貫穿始終，任何偏離文章總觀點(diǎn)的內(nèi)容都應(yīng)該被刪除，哪怕那些段落和句子非常亮眼。
雅思寫(xiě)作提分要求2：話題思路整理。
通常考生在學(xué)習(xí)雅思寫(xiě)作技巧的時(shí)候， 總會(huì)被強(qiáng)調(diào)文章邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)。很多考生其實(shí)很難理解到底是什么意思， 其實(shí)通俗來(lái)說(shuō)就是內(nèi)容扣題，例子客觀，上下文互相呼應(yīng)?？忌趯?duì)模板的使用也需要注意， 例如需要從各個(gè)話題母題(經(jīng)典高頻考題)及預(yù)測(cè)題目的思路整理出發(fā)，通過(guò)學(xué)習(xí)成熟寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容來(lái)打開(kāi)思路，練習(xí)審題，以保證作文內(nèi)容的扣題。
雅思寫(xiě)作提分要求3：準(zhǔn)確判斷寫(xiě)作任務(wù)及文章邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)。
傳統(tǒng)的備考方法注重題目表面陳述方式的差異性，比如：議論文Argumentation(議論文)類(lèi)題型題目的陳述方式常見(jiàn)的有：
1.一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)的討論。提問(wèn)方式：To what extent do you agree or disagree? / What is your opinion on this statement (=issue)?
2.兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)的討論。提問(wèn)方式：Discuss both opinions and give your own idea.
3.討論現(xiàn)象或事物的利弊。提問(wèn)方式：Do the advantages of... outweigh the disadvantages? / Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of...
上述三點(diǎn)看似不同，但并沒(méi)有實(shí)質(zhì)性的差別，它們都體現(xiàn)出了唯一的寫(xiě)作要求：即辯證地分析題目中提出的討論內(nèi)容并表明態(tài)度。其實(shí)，如果按照國(guó)外預(yù)科語(yǔ)言課程寫(xiě)作題型分類(lèi)來(lái)判斷，Argumentation(議論文)類(lèi)題型分為三種Influence，Prediction，Solution;這種題型的分類(lèi)更注重寫(xiě)作任務(wù)本身，而非題目的表面陳述方式。
很多考生都喜歡使用寫(xiě)作的萬(wàn)能模板，其實(shí)這樣對(duì)于想突破高分的人而言是不利的。最好盡量避免使用這些模板，因?yàn)槲覀冃枰獜?qiáng)調(diào)的是文章的中心觀點(diǎn)決定文章邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)，而不是題目表面的陳述方式，更不能忽略不同題目寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容的差異來(lái)刻意統(tǒng)一出一個(gè)“最容易得分”的結(jié)構(gòu)。換句話說(shuō)，寫(xiě)作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)里第一項(xiàng)文章內(nèi)容的確定在先，第二項(xiàng)文章邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)的判斷其次，是根據(jù)內(nèi)容需求選擇邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)。
雅思寫(xiě)作提分要求4：語(yǔ)匯儲(chǔ)備。
考生在使用詞匯和短語(yǔ)的時(shí)候，一定要切記不要重復(fù)用詞，最好能用多種表達(dá)方式去表現(xiàn)句子含義，這樣才能體現(xiàn)考生用詞豐富。此外，很多考生覺(jué)得記同義詞就可以解決上述問(wèn)題，但依舊得不了高分，其實(shí)是很多相近意思的詞匯存在很多細(xì)節(jié)和適用語(yǔ)境的差別。例如要表達(dá)“小心的”，careful為最一般意義的小心，cautious則是“警覺(jué)”，meticulous有“一絲不茍”的含義，scrupulous是在“正直”前提下表現(xiàn)出的細(xì)心謹(jǐn)慎。這幾個(gè)單詞不能隨意換用，而要根據(jù)描述的對(duì)象與程度來(lái)選用。另外最基本重要的就是用詞準(zhǔn)確性。一切使用不當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯都會(huì)斷送分?jǐn)?shù)。雅思考官對(duì)微小錯(cuò)誤的懲罰力度極大，不論是基礎(chǔ)語(yǔ)法還是詞匯，連續(xù)的失誤可能導(dǎo)致分?jǐn)?shù)0.5-1分的懲罰，這與口語(yǔ)類(lèi)似。由于較生僻的詞匯一般有很具體的應(yīng)用情景，稍有不當(dāng)都可能給考官生搬硬套的印象，甚至直接影響最終成績(jī)。
雅思寫(xiě)作提分要求5：選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)。
很多考生在進(jìn)行雅思寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候，總偏愛(ài)用幾種句型替換寫(xiě)，而不在乎是不是合適的。因此選擇合適的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)可以使句子意思的表達(dá)更為精確和簡(jiǎn)練。以下是在考慮選擇何種語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)時(shí)可以參考的原則。
1.在雅思寫(xiě)作中，一個(gè)句子的主語(yǔ)和謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該能夠反映句子中的最重要的意思。例如：
The situation that resulted in my grandfather's not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm.
從意思上來(lái)分析，上面這句話需要表達(dá)的重要的概念是“grandfather's not being able to study”.
在表達(dá)這個(gè)概念時(shí)，原句用的主語(yǔ)是situation,謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞是was,不能強(qiáng)調(diào)需要表達(dá)的重點(diǎn)概念，可以改為下面這句話：
My grandfather couldn't study engineering because his father needed help on the farm.
2.在雅思寫(xiě)作中，避免頻繁使用“there be”結(jié)構(gòu)。
例如：There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather.
可以改為：
My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day.
更簡(jiǎn)潔的句式為：
My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.
3.在雅思寫(xiě)作中，把從句改為短語(yǔ)或單詞。
例如：Dairy cows were raised on the farm, which was located100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote.
簡(jiǎn)潔的表達(dá)方式為：
The dairy farm was located in a remote area, 100 kilometers to the nearest university.
4.在雅思寫(xiě)作中，僅在需要強(qiáng)調(diào)賓語(yǔ)而不是主語(yǔ)的時(shí)候，才使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。
例如：In the fall, not only did the cows have to be milked, but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather's family.
本句不夠簡(jiǎn)潔的原因是本句的重心應(yīng)該是“忙碌的家庭-my grandfather's family”.
而使用了被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)后，仿佛重心變成了cows和hay,下面的表達(dá)方式是主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，相對(duì)來(lái)說(shuō)更簡(jiǎn)潔一些：
In the fall, my grandfather's family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay.
雅思寫(xiě)作Task2社會(huì)類(lèi)考官范文
Trade and travel would be a lot easier with a single, global currency that we all use.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Would a single currency cause any problems?
Model Answer:
It is clear to me that the idea of a single global currency is an excellent ideal to work towards. There can be no doubt that trade and travel would be vastly easier. On the other hand I believe that it would cause problems today.
The benefits of a single currency can be seen with the use in Europe of the Euro. Whenever you are travelling between countries using the Euro, the problems of currency changing and exchange rates are history. Similarly business between countries using the Euros is so much easier; no more worrying about exchange rate risk and pricing. Everyone?s money is the same. The same thing is true with the US dollar. Most countries do not use the US dollar but it is accepted in many places. There are many countries that you can travel to and just take US dollars to use.
At present though a global currency would be impossible. Firstly most countries would not accept the idea. Secondly all countries are in different economic states. Some are economically very strong and some are in a state of collapse with inflation ruining the economy. Such countries could not be brought into a world currency as it would cause massive financial instability worldwide. So it is clear that a global currency would indeed cause some serious problems.
So, in conclusion I see a global currency as a future ideal but it will not happen in my lifetime. It would make trade and travel much easier but the problems it would cause nowadays would be insurmountable.
雅思寫(xiě)作Task2社會(huì)類(lèi)考官范文
The 21st century has begun.
What changes do you think this new century will bring?
Model Answer:
Man, through the ages, has undergone many changes from the time when he depicted a herd of mammoths on the walls of his cave to these days when he can create beautiful pictures and even make coffee by use of computer technologies without leaving his favorite chair. The 20th century made huge steps in developing computer technologies and reached many goals that made our life much easier. What should we expect in the 21st century?
First of all, I think that the pace of our life will speed up: we will move faster from one place to another, from one continent to another using high speed jet airplanes. Second of all, I believe that we will be able to do many things that take much time now without leaving our house. Computers will be everywhere including out clothes. Many people will have chips and mini computers inserted in their heads to hold huge amount of information and have a quick access to it.
But what will be the most amazing thing in the 21st century is the flights to the outer space and Mars that will be available to all people. Scientists say that Mars has many things similar to the Earth's. Moreover, they say that with the help of modern technology people can artificially create conditions that will allow people to live there on the constant basis.
To sum up, I am sure that many amazing changes will be brought by the 21st century. Furthermore, I think that with the help of the contemporary technologies people can do many things that were even difficult to imagine a century ago. So, nowadays it is rather difficult and even impossible to imagine all changes that will happen in the next decades.
