很多考鴨都在頭疼的雅思寫作這座大山，是時(shí)候該卸下了。和小站雅思君一起來(lái)了解一下雅思作文中需要注意的6個(gè)雅思寫作細(xì)節(jié)問題吧。下面小編就和大家分享雅思寫作拿高分這六個(gè)細(xì)節(jié)很重要，希望能夠幫助到大家，來(lái)欣賞一下吧。

雅思寫作拿高分這六個(gè)細(xì)節(jié)很重要

雅思寫作細(xì)節(jié)一：標(biāo)點(diǎn)書寫問題

按英文書寫規(guī)定，標(biāo)點(diǎn)應(yīng)緊挨著它的附著意群進(jìn)行標(biāo)注，與另一個(gè)意群要以一個(gè)字符的空格隔開。但是在實(shí)際作文中經(jīng)常發(fā)現(xiàn)學(xué)生不論什么標(biāo)點(diǎn)都會(huì)當(dāng)作一個(gè)單詞來(lái)對(duì)待，即標(biāo)點(diǎn)前后都空下空格，結(jié)果給人以標(biāo)點(diǎn)滿天飛的感覺，影響了文章的美感。有例為證：

First, energy and other natural resources have become more abundant, not less so , since the book ‘ The Limits to Growth ’ was published by a group of scientists .

可以看出，標(biāo)點(diǎn)像獨(dú)行俠一樣出現(xiàn)在句子中，會(huì)給人以喧賓奪主的感覺。所以大家平時(shí)練習(xí)時(shí)就要注意正確書寫標(biāo)點(diǎn)。

雅思寫作細(xì)節(jié)二：句首單詞首字母大小寫問題

通常情況下，同學(xué)們只要感覺是個(gè)句子就都把句首單詞首字母大寫了，但是在實(shí)際寫作中情況如何呢?下面我們來(lái)看個(gè)例子。

Some corpora attempt to cover the language as a whole; others are extremely selective.

分號(hào)的作用是對(duì)關(guān)系非常緊密的句子進(jìn)行分隔，所以后一個(gè)句子只是前一個(gè)的附屬，并不是一個(gè)獨(dú)立的新句子，所以首字母仍然要小寫的。這個(gè)現(xiàn)象同樣適用于冒號(hào)、破折號(hào)、括號(hào)。

雅思寫作細(xì)節(jié)三：書寫過于隨意

每個(gè)人都有自己的書寫習(xí)慣，但是雅思考試畢竟是要給外國(guó)人看的，所以大家如果能夠在書寫習(xí)慣上貼近老外，肯定會(huì)給人以親切的卷面印象。比如不要書寫得過于密集，以免讓人看不清單詞，影響理解。也不要寫得過于稀疏而讓人無(wú)法在eye span 范圍內(nèi)看到完整的意群，從而影響考官閱讀。字不要寫得太大，也不要太小。盡量不要連寫以免造成l,r,n,m等混淆不清，造成考官閱卷障礙。

雅思寫作細(xì)節(jié)四：寫作格式混亂

英文寫作格式主要有齊頭式和縮進(jìn)式。通常齊頭式因?yàn)轫旑^書寫且段與段之間空出一行，所以會(huì)給人以整潔的感覺，也比較推薦大家使用這種格式?？s進(jìn)式和中文的寫作格式相似，即每一段的開頭句縮進(jìn)，但是段落之間沒有空行，所以不是很受歡迎。經(jīng)常在作文中看到同學(xué)們用的是“齊頭式+縮進(jìn)式”，即段首句縮進(jìn)+段落之間空行，給人以不倫不類的感覺，同學(xué)們一定要注意。

雅思寫作細(xì)節(jié)五：總結(jié)段缺失

很多學(xué)生在寫作時(shí)因?yàn)闀r(shí)間不充裕無(wú)法寫出總結(jié)段，于是給閱卷者沒完成任務(wù)的感覺。建議考生盡量要寫最后的summary，無(wú)論是task1還是task2。因?yàn)橥瑢W(xué)們可以利用最后一段來(lái)點(diǎn)題、歸納，這樣可以最大限度地避免因?yàn)檎Z(yǔ)言功底不深而導(dǎo)致的文章結(jié)構(gòu)不明晰，說(shuō)服力不強(qiáng)等問題，即用形式來(lái)彌補(bǔ)內(nèi)容上無(wú)法克服的困難。

另外，因?yàn)殚_頭結(jié)尾段是我們平時(shí)練習(xí)得比較熟練的部分，所以我們很容易就搞定的，為什么放著拿分的部分不寫呢?!

雅思寫作細(xì)節(jié)六：分段過多或者過少

大家可以設(shè)想一下，當(dāng)你拿著一篇只有一段的很長(zhǎng)的文章時(shí)，是不是會(huì)有很暈的感覺?尤其是當(dāng)我們的寫作能力有限，文字表達(dá)沒有吸引力時(shí)，怎么能讓考官有耐心看完你的文章呢?再設(shè)想一下，當(dāng)你看的文章分成很多的段落，而你的論證能力有限，費(fèi)了半天勁也寫不出幾個(gè)句子，會(huì)不會(huì)每段都給人以流水賬的感覺呢?

所以，對(duì)于考試作文，要想既用形式掩飾內(nèi)容的不足，又能給考官以好印象，那么請(qǐng)把雅思寫作task1段落劃分控制在3-5段，雅思寫作task2控制在4-6段，既能體現(xiàn)段落分配清晰，突出自己要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容，又能避免論證太過分散而中心不明確。

雅思寫作Task2社會(huì)類考官范文

In the past, buildings often reflected the culture of a society but today all modern buildings look alike and cities throughout the world are becoming more and more similar.

What do you think is the reason for this, and is it a good thing or a bad thing?

Model Answer:

Every city has its architectural character, but the similarities between cities are more obvious these days than in the past. In my opinion, one reason for this is the high price of land.

In most large cities, land is scarce and consequently it is very valuable. This has led to the construction of tall buildings which occupy only a small area of land while providing lots of floor space where people can live or work. Buildings of this type are made of concrete and steel and can be built comparatively quickly using prefabricated materials. They do not use local materials, such as stone, timber or brick, which used to give cities their individual character. In consequence many cities. now look very much the same and you might not know whether you were in Brisbane, Bangkok or Berlin when you are on the street.

While I realise that we cannot stand in the way of progress, I believe that cities should try to keep some individuality. For example, in Paris it is prohibited to build very tall buildings in the centre of the city, as this would spoil the overall appearance of the skyline. Other cities have chosen to design unique buildings to ensure they look different. The twin towers in Kuala Lumpur or the Opera House in Sydney are examples of this approach, and I agree with this kind of initiative.

All in all, although it is regrettable that modem cities look similar, I tend to feel that this is unavoidable. However, it can be argued that, even if the buildings are similar, cities will maintain their own character as a result of cultural diversity, the terrain and the climate, which ultimately determine how people live.

雅思寫作Task2社會(huì)類考官范文

In some countries the average worker is obliged to retire at the age of 50, while in others people can work until they are 65 or 70. Meanwhile, we see some politicians enjoying power well into their eighties. Clearly, there is little agreement on an appropriate retirement age.

Until what age do you think people should be encouraged to remain in paid employment?

Model Answer:

Mandatory retirement age varies from society to society, perhaps a reflection of economics, population pressures or simply value systems. Indeed, retirement at 50 can probably be as easily justified as that at 70. It is my belief, however, that the longer an able person is allowed to work, the better for both the individual worker and the employer.

Chronological age is not always a true indicator of ability. While some 65? year-olds may not perform as well as they did in their past, many workers at this age do just as well or better than they used to. People's suitability for a position should be a reflection of their performance in the job, rather than the number of wrinkles or grey hairs they have. Employers concerned about the increasing age of their employees need only observe their work records. Those doing poorly may be asked to retire, but those as yet unaffected by age should stay on. Indeed, it would appear economical for an organisation to retain its older employees when possible rather than spend time and money on training new workers.

Remaining in one's job for as long as one is able makes sense as life expectancies increase around the world. As people live longer, they are longer able to contribute to society in the form of meaningful work. But they are also in need of income for a longer period, so a mandatory retirement age of 55 for someone who is statistically likely to live to 77 becomes increasingly difficult to justify. At a time when populations are ageing, governments are less able to provide for their senior citizens, so by keeping able workers in paid employment for as long as is practicable, public expenditures are less strained.

Thus, workers who can still demonstrate their capacity to carry out their work should not be asked to retire simply because they have reached a certain age. Societies that insist on early retirement may do well to look again at their policies.