托福寫作想要取得高分難度是比較高的，不僅因為作文本身不好寫，更是由于作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)較為主觀考生很難把握。今天小編給大家?guī)砹送懈懽?9分高手經(jīng)驗分享,希望能夠幫助到大家，一起來學(xué)習(xí)吧。
托福寫作29分高手經(jīng)驗分享 獨立綜合作文結(jié)構(gòu)講解
托福綜合寫作文章結(jié)構(gòu)分析
綜合寫作因為有個reading 可以參考所以很好寫，只要記下了listening里的要點，再依次呈現(xiàn)即可。
開篇：一句話，說明reading 和listening是有明顯不同的。
中間段：每一段一個點，論述reading 和listening的不同。
結(jié)尾段：不用寫。
托福獨立寫作寫法結(jié)構(gòu)講解
獨立寫作的結(jié)構(gòu)較為復(fù)雜，我們從第一段開始。
開頭段，請分為三句話。background statement描述背景，opinions描述兩邊的觀點。topic 表達(dá)我自身的觀點。我個人喜歡用一邊倒的方式寫托福作文，當(dāng)然中立觀點也能寫。在topic段落中，除了表達(dá)觀點，我建議把接下來會使用的論點全都用一兩個詞概括出來，總領(lǐng)全文。這樣寫下來，大概是80個字。
接下來就是中間段了。對于一邊倒式的文章，建議寫三個中間段，每一段70個字。第一個中間段贊頌反方論點，說它怎么怎么好，隨后一個轉(zhuǎn)折，后兩個中間段各闡述一個自己的觀點。一段只講一個論點，一個論點必須在一段話中完成。對于持中立型的文章，建議分成兩段，各100字。在每一個段落中，闡述兩個支撐論點。這樣一來，無論是一邊倒還是持中立，我們都要完成200字左右的闡述，并且正反兼顧。
結(jié)尾段，20到40字，用一句固定的話可以直接完成。
我們的目標(biāo)是在獨立寫作時，拿到題目立刻開始寫開頭段，在無腦寫作開頭段的過程中想出論點，并在開頭段結(jié)尾處概括出來，接下來用中間段給予論述。最后無腦寫結(jié)尾段。
托福寫作解析:Eat out or eat at home
托福寫作題目：
Topic：Eat out or eat at home?
Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
參考分析：
不要急于做出選擇，先進(jìn)行比較，然后根據(jù)情況選擇：
去餐館或者吃快餐的優(yōu)缺點：方便、快捷、多種口味;昂貴、衛(wèi)生可能得不到保障、快餐使人發(fā)胖;
在家吃飯的優(yōu)缺點：干凈、可以做出自己喜歡的口味、節(jié)省、與家人和朋友共同準(zhǔn)備實物很開心;花費時間、可能做的沒有餐館那么好吃;
在不同的情況下會有不同的選擇。周末休息應(yīng)該跟家人在家里吃飯。與老朋友久別重逢應(yīng)該找一家安靜的餐館……
范文：
選擇在飯館吃飯：
(1)節(jié)省時間，自己做飯很麻煩;
(2)能夠品嘗各種各樣的美食;
(3)能夠促進(jìn)和朋友的感情。
Nowadays, some people like to eat at home and prepare food by themselves, but others prefer to eat outside in restaurants or at food stands. As far as I am concerned, I prefer to eat at home.(標(biāo)準(zhǔn)式開頭，先闡述現(xiàn)今社會狀況，再表達(dá)個人觀點，開門見山)
Of course there are some advantages to eat out. Firstly, restaurants offer a more comfortable environment to eat and the food there tastes more delicious than home-cooked meals. In addition, eating at restaurants is a good way of getting together with friends. People also do not need to worry about washing dishes and cleaning. For people who are too busy to cook, eating out is certainly an ideal(理想的)choice. Furthermore, for people do not know how to cook and do not have someone to cook for them, eat out seems to be the only choice.(本段是讓步段，先講在外吃的好處一個是舒適的環(huán)境美味的食物，另一個是給不會做飯和不知做飯給誰的人提供吃飯的條件)
However, I prefer to cook and eat and home. The main reason is that at home, family members can prepare their meals and enjoying their food together, which can enhance their relationships. Family members can talk, make jokes and exchange feelings on current affairs with each other while preparing a meal. Parents have a chance to communicate with their kids and keep track of what they are thinking and doing; while children can learn to help with some household tasks and develop intimacy(與父母增進(jìn)感情)with their parents. Image that you and your brothers and sisters help your mother to cook on a weekend, and enjoy the food later on(稍后), and you feel everything is so nice.(這是第一段論述在家吃好處是可以與家人增進(jìn)感情種.種，以自己為例子顯得生動可信)
Another reason is that eating at home can save money. The same amount of money that you spend on a meal in a restaurant can buy a lot more foods from a supermarket. You can use the money saved to buy a new cloth, or attend a concert.(本段是從經(jīng)濟(jì)方面來論述在家吃確實可行)
General speaking, eating out side is comfortable and convenient but eating at home has more benefits. I prefer to eat at home.(這篇文章是標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的議論文結(jié)構(gòu)，沒有特別華麗的語言，但是結(jié)構(gòu)清晰論述完整，沒有語法錯誤，這也是保分的必要條件)
托福作文：深度分析高分寫作的關(guān)鍵要素
獨立作文題目
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Students now are more interested in politics than those in the past.
With the globalization of the whole world(萬能開頭稍顯弱，還有whole world這種畫蛇添足的詞匯，難道后面要分part world寫?), politics are playing a more important role nowadays, both domestically and internationally. Thus, I agree that students have more interests in this area than those in the past for two reasons.
First, the advanced technology, such as high-speed Internet, multi-media and smart mobile phone(什么是smart mobile phone，難道有smart phone不能mobile嗎?), allows more students access to the politics events. The technology lay an essential foundament(是foundation吧) for students to keep in touch with those activities. For example, the presidency competition between Hiliton and Trump is getting more dramatic. Lots students(Lots是敗筆) would watch the TV argument between them by phone, portable computer(什么是portable computer，專業(yè)一點就是laptop和ipad吧) and so on(等等等等……考官看中國考生文章會出現(xiàn)無數(shù)so on，審美疲勞有沒有). They could even(上下句之間有even的遞進(jìn)關(guān)系嗎，不明顯) watch the live program as they are waiting for a bus, share their opinions on the internet while they are in the washroom and hear the speech in their car driving home. Therefore, the convincing efficiency and entertainment attract more and more(這篇作文good肯定是沒戲了) students to focus on this politic event. However, students in the past even don't know how to watch the program(神轉(zhuǎn)折，腦子里想的和表達(dá)出來的完全不是一個意思，過去的孩子怎么就不知道看電視節(jié)目了!他們又不是弱智!是沒電視節(jié)目看!是沒方便的途徑!是However, students in the past lack the plentiful sources to approach politics compared with their counterparts nowadays的意思對伐).
Moreover, the more open, transparent and friendly(堆這么多形容詞……哎!請注意言之有物!) politic atmosphere provide a great chance for modern students to got involved(時態(tài)錯了) in these politic activities. Take China for an example(有這種慣用表達(dá)嗎，我們不是莎士比亞), students beyond 18 years old have the right to vote for political members, like chairman of the students union, which were used to be nominated by school in the past without permitting students to decide who they support and are supposed to be chairman(親，這么長一句話知道自己在寫什么嗎?扣分句). This right just inspire the student to choose their own president(這么草草收尾，這論證有點意識流啊!).
In a conclusion, the advanced equipments and the openess to ordinary studentsthe bring more students to join in the politic events(這什么意思?什么叫openess to ordinary students?難道還有special students?是不是想說More students are willing to talk about even participate in political events by the help of advanced technologies and increasing civic attitudes toward politics.).
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這篇習(xí)作拿到托?？荚囍校茈y達(dá)到GOOD要求，通俗講就是 " 親，不談?wù)撟C邏輯，不扯思維深度，就是語言，哥讀的有點累啊，有地方要腦補啊，很多句子連不上啊!"
那么一篇good標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的獨立文章長什么樣?還是以該題目為例，不改變上文的立場，不顛覆上文邏輯，盡量保持思維角度的一致性，僅從語言和論證嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)度來修改一下，計時創(chuàng)作一篇。
An intriguing phenomenon occurring on and around campus nowadays is that students are more interested in politics than ever before. It is frequent to hear students talking about Obama Care or the latest Presidential Campaign in the United States when dinning in the cafeteria ,say like, Havard or MIT nowadays.
To elaborate, technological advancements improve the readiness of politic access. In the past, society communicates in the form of letters, newspapers and radios with comparatively low efficiency and little convenience. For example, huge political events in China like the escape of once vice-president Lin Biao would not have gotten the attention of American students until many days even weeks later after VOA or CNN have broadcasted it. Even those American students have noticed the incredible political event from newspaper or radio, they have no source to check all the details from Chinese students or friends due to the information barrier between the two countries. In addition, students in the past only shape their perspectives on a political event through authority publications, causing bias in viewing the issue. However, students today can capture every piece of information, political and non-political, just at the time it goes on even on the other side of the globe and receive multiply sources of opinions from government perspective to public statements by the help of the internet, the invention of smart phones and other mobile devices, thanks to the advancement of multi-media technology. These new equipments connecting by the internet makes a strong and close relationship -- "Information Globalization"-- which shattered info barriers and make even the tiniest voice matter. For example, recently in China there is a breaking news that the wife of ChongQing city's mayor, Bo Gukailai, has been prosecuted for causing the death of a British businessman in Beijing. In the past, these "higher class" news will be soon concealed by authorities. But now, students from all over the country can learn about the event only a few hours after "rumors" spread quickly through Wechat or Weibo which left no room for public authority to "hide" any truth but to make a formal announcement and explain the situation.
Also, the spirit of democracy is indeed growing its power not only in developed countries like US but also in developing countries like China even in undeveloped areas. Chinese students are under great supervision and monitoring in the past. As a result, college students are not permitted to talk about political figures or discuss central government policies. Of course, you can "whisper" in the dark, but you know the influence for that. But now, students are free to claim their thoughts about anything and everything even expressing very extreme ideas about politics on the internet just by click a "send" button in Wechat or any similar social APP. At least from what I know, nobody is getting arrested by talking or discussing politics which is so called "the forbidden zone" in the past.
Admittedly, students in schools have little social experiences and usually come up with unrealistic conclusions or solutions about social problems or political events. But it doesn't hurt much to allow students to show bigger interest about it. After all, who rules the next century is always an issue of time, so encouraging students to enroll and learn politics is probably a question of "sooner rather than later" which might be a better way to look at it.
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當(dāng)我們回頭去思考托福寫作如何獲得高分滿分的時候?
Is it about the template you would use in test? Is it about fancy words you paraphrase in article? Or is it about something meaningful with correct vocabulary and precise expression throughout the writing? In a word, make sure what you've written MAKES SENSE and let the scorer feel EFFORTLESSwhen glimpsing it through!
高分寫作不完全靠背模板，也不完全是抄范文(當(dāng)然這些都有幫助)，真正的高分滿分托福作文要 " 多讀書多看報少吃零食多睡覺 "。
寫作和口語不能閉門造車瞎逼練，否則會永遠(yuǎn)犯同樣的錯誤，建議各位考生要么背誦地道的英文詞句表達(dá)，要么找托福口語寫作老師陪練(主要是修改習(xí)作)，這些反饋可能比寫多少“機經(jīng)”都重要，至少節(jié)省鉆進(jìn)死胡同重復(fù)犯錯的時間!
