GRE寫作開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾有哪些技巧呢??今天小編給大家?guī)?lái)GRE寫作開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾的具體技巧，希望能夠幫助到大家，下面小編就和大家分享，來(lái)欣賞一下吧。
GRE寫作：開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾的具體技巧
新GRE作文Argue寫作開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾：
新GRE作文Argue和issue不一樣，開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾都有跡可循，這個(gè)也許是唯一能搞出模板的東西?？荚嚨臅r(shí)候我都是一邊寫開(kāi)頭一邊想錯(cuò)誤。等開(kāi)頭寫完了，錯(cuò)誤也找全了。開(kāi)頭一般說(shuō)，這文章標(biāo)明，因?yàn)?照抄原文)，所以(原文)，作者于是得出結(jié)論(原文)。但是，作者論證的時(shí)候犯了一些錯(cuò)誤(可以隨便列舉一個(gè)，比如證據(jù)不足)，如果能夠注意以下幾點(diǎn)，那么這篇文章能夠更有說(shuō)服力。
寫到這兒都不用動(dòng)腦子的。
結(jié)尾呢，也跟新GRE作文issue不一樣。我們不一定要力求升華，畢竟不是立論文。就大概總結(jié)說(shuō)，因?yàn)樽髡叻噶隋e(cuò)誤一錯(cuò)誤二和錯(cuò)誤三，所以文章沒(méi)有吸引力。如果作者能做到改進(jìn)一，改進(jìn)二和改進(jìn)三，那么這篇文章就會(huì)更好了。(錯(cuò)誤和改進(jìn)都是之前寫過(guò)的。所以無(wú)腦照抄，或者適當(dāng)變臉，寫上去就行了，字?jǐn)?shù)也是大大的有。)
新GRE作文Argue寫作挑錯(cuò)：
挑錯(cuò)怎么挑呢?反正我感覺(jué)，除了事實(shí)說(shuō)明，比如有個(gè)城市叫A市，旁邊有個(gè)B市這樣的句子，基本每個(gè)句子都有錯(cuò)。這個(gè)我因?yàn)檗q論的原因，難以傳授什么秘訣。大家可能看幾道題找找感覺(jué)就好了。本著質(zhì)疑的態(tài)度，每句話都懷疑一下就可以了。再不行就幻想自己在網(wǎng)上和人對(duì)噴。對(duì)噴的時(shí)候，對(duì)方說(shuō)的每句話你都恨不得直接拍桌子反對(duì)。有這樣的氣勢(shì)就可以了。注意，每當(dāng)出現(xiàn)樣本調(diào)查，一定要抓住猛罵。質(zhì)疑樣本，質(zhì)疑容量，質(zhì)疑可信度，什么都能質(zhì)疑。另外，每當(dāng)出現(xiàn)類比和因果關(guān)系，也要質(zhì)疑。這個(gè)只能大家隨機(jī)應(yīng)變了。要說(shuō)邏輯培養(yǎng)也不是一天兩天，GRE作文考的邏輯也很直白，一般找三個(gè)不是問(wèn)題，實(shí)在不行看幾篇范文就明白了。
新GRE作文Argue寫作文段：
中間三段怎么放?我感覺(jué)，第二段一定要說(shuō)個(gè)最大的問(wèn)題。這個(gè)不一定要是全文最大的問(wèn)題，而是各位感覺(jué)最大的。絕大多數(shù)情況下，最明顯那個(gè)錯(cuò)，也是各位覺(jué)得最大的錯(cuò)，也就是全文最大的錯(cuò)。不是也沒(méi)關(guān)系。因?yàn)楦魑桓杏X(jué)最大的錯(cuò)，各位有話說(shuō)，那么第二段一定會(huì)很豐滿，也基本不會(huì)出錯(cuò)，字?jǐn)?shù)也拉上來(lái)了，妥了一半。
有人說(shuō)這三段也能寫出遞進(jìn)或者并列，我感覺(jué)寫遞進(jìn)有點(diǎn)困難，因?yàn)殄e(cuò)都差不多，還要花心思論證哪個(gè)錯(cuò)的多哪個(gè)錯(cuò)的少。我的習(xí)慣，大家可能借鑒一下。先寫一個(gè)最大的錯(cuò)，然后再抓一個(gè)我覺(jué)得能論證好幾句的錯(cuò)。剩下來(lái)的基本都是一兩句可以提一提的錯(cuò)，比如證據(jù)不足啊，其他可能情況啊，那就都并到第三段，開(kāi)頭就說(shuō)，除了上述兩點(diǎn)，還有一些細(xì)節(jié)問(wèn)題可以注意。然后隨便抓兩三個(gè)說(shuō)一說(shuō)，湊成一段。
最后結(jié)尾也說(shuō)，作者有錯(cuò)誤一，錯(cuò)誤二，以及上文提到的細(xì)節(jié)(problematic details mentioned above)，如果能有改進(jìn)一改進(jìn)二點(diǎn)點(diǎn)點(diǎn)，就點(diǎn)點(diǎn)點(diǎn)了。
具體每段論證，我的習(xí)慣是先說(shuō)錯(cuò)誤，然后說(shuō)為什么錯(cuò)，最后說(shuō)如何改進(jìn)。這就成了邏輯嚴(yán)密的一段。
GRE寫作滿分范文賞析
The?following?is?taken?from?a?memo?from?the?advertising?director?of?the?Silver?Screen?Movie?Production?Company.??
"According?to?a?recent?report?from?our?marketing?department,?fewer?people?attended?movies?produced?by?Silver?Screen?during?the?past?year?than?in?any?other?year.??And?yet?the?percentage?of?generally?favorable?comments?by?movie?reviewers?about?specific?Silver?Screen?movies?actually?increased?during?this?period.??Clearly,?the?contents?of?these?reviews?are?not?reaching?enough?of?our?prospective?viewers;?so?the?problem?lies?not?with?the?quality?of?our?movies?but?with?the?public's?lack?of?awareness?that?movies?of?good?quality?are?available.??Silver?Screen?should?therefore?spend?more?of?its?budget?next?year?on?reaching?the?public?through?advertising?and?less?on?producing?new?movies."??
Americans?are?spending?millions?of?their?hard?earned?dollars?to?see?the?latest?theatrical?productions,?and?we?here?at?Silver?Screen?want?to?exploit?our?share?of?that?profit.??Surveys?have?proven?that?our?movies?are?better?than?ever,?but?yet?our?attendance?is?lower?than?ever.??This?finding?screams?one?shortcoming:??advertisement.??
Try?to?think?of?the?last?movie?you?remember.??The?movie?which?probably?leaps?into?everyone's?mind?is?Independence?Day.??Why???Certainly?not?because?of?the?actual?film,?but?because?of?all?the?'hype'?which?the?movie?received.??Furthermore,?this?grand?production?paid?off?big?for?the?production?company.??
Does?anyone?that?you?know?drive?by?the?theatre?just?to?see?what?is?playing?and?then?pick?a?film?based?on?the?catchiness?of?the?title???No.??Viewers?buy?tickets?for?movies?which?they?have?seen?effectively?advertised?on?television?and?radio.??
Not?only?must?Silver?Screen?advertise?more,?but?we?must?advertise?when?it?really?counts:?Monday?Night?Football,?the?evening?news,?awards?shows,?etc.??
Everyone?has?heard?the?saying,?"you?must?spend?money?to?make?money",?and?it?is?proven?true?in?this?industry.??
From?a?completely?economical?standpoint,?the?ad?is?actually?more?important?than?the?film?itself.??Consumers?are?compelled?by?the?preview?and?buy?a?ticket.??I?am?not?suggesting?that?we?compromise?the?integrity?of?our?films,?but?I?cannot?overstate?the?importance?of?this?decision.
Therefore,?I?submit?that?the?Silver?Screen?Production?Company?attempt?to?secure?30%?of?the?fiscal?budget?for?advertisement.??It?will?be?the?best?money?you?have?ever?spent.??
Commentary??
The?writer?of?this?seriously?flawed?response?has?adopted?the?position?that?she?or?he?works?for?Silver?Screen?and?that?it?is?her?or?his?job?to?present?in?expanded?form?the?fallacious?reasoning?of?the?argument.??In?so?doing,?the?writer?turns?the?argument?task?into?an?issue-like?discussion.??The?writer?presents?no?analysis?of?the?argument.??
The?paper?is?characterized?by?a?series?of?undeveloped?paragraphs,?yet?there?is?some?variety?in?syntax?and?there?is?adequate?control?of?both?language?and?the?elements?of?writing.??However,?even?though?the?writing?may?be?typical?of?a?4?score?level,?the?absence?of?any?kind?of?critique?requires?a?score?of?2.
GRE寫作滿分范文賞析
The?following?is?taken?from?a?memo?from?the?advertising?director?of?the?Silver?Screen?Movie?Production?Company.??
"According?to?a?recent?report?from?our?marketing?department,?fewer?people?attended?movies?produced?by?Silver?Screen?during?the?past?year?than?in?any?other?year.??And?yet?the?percentage?of?generally?favorable?comments?by?movie?reviewers?about?specific?Silver?Screen?movies?actually?increased?during?this?period.??Clearly,?the?contents?of?these?reviews?are?not?reaching?enough?of?our?prospective?viewers;?so?the?problem?lies?not?with?the?quality?of?our?movies?but?with?the?public's?lack?of?awareness?that?movies?of?good?quality?are?available.??Silver?Screen?should?therefore?spend?more?of?its?budget?next?year?on?reaching?the?public?through?advertising?and?less?on?producing?new?movies."??
This?argument?states?the?problem?but?the?conclusion?is?not?compatible?to?the?rest?of?the?statement.??
Silver?Screen?recognized?that?fewer?people?attended?movies?in?the?studied?year.??I?would?recommend?that?they?find?out?if?this?was?happening?with?the?entire?movie?market.??It?might?of?have?been?a?poor?year?for?movies?for?all?movie?companies.??
Silver?Screen?recognized?that?of?the?movies?that?they?did,?they?received?favorable?reviews.??It?should?be?concluded?that?they?are?doing?well?with?the?movies?that?they?are?making.??Obviously,?they?are?on?track?with?the?consumer?in?what?they?are?producing.??
I?understand?the?conclusion?that?more?people?need?to?be?exposed?to?the?movies?available?for?viewing.??The?last?statement?focuses?on?the?fact?that?advertising?needs?to?be?increased,?but?does?it?by?cutting?production?costs.??This?is?wrong,?instead?of?continuing?what?is?working?the?company?plans?on?focusing?on?advertising?while?taking?away?from?producing.??The?consumers?like?the?movies?they?make.??If?Silver?Screen?focuses?their?funds?with?advertising,?producing?funds?will?suffer.??It?will?not?matter?how?much?advertising?is?done,?if?it?is?a?poorly?produced?movie,?nobody?will?want?to?go???Eventually,?Silver?Screen?will?get?the?reputation?of?producing?bad?movies.??There?has?to?be?some?compromise?which?doesn't?hurt?producing?costs.??
Commentary??
This?response?is?flawed.??It?makes?two?points,?the?first?of?which?is?undeveloped?(paragraph?2)?and?the?second?of?which?(the?remainder?of?the?essay)?is?mainly?discussion?rather?than?analysis,?although?some?meager?analysis?is?present.??The?author?also?offers?a?questionable?assumption?of?his?or?her?own?in stating?in?paragraph?4?that?"the?consumers?like?the?movies?they?make."??Overall,?there?is?nothing?incisive?or?convincing?in?this?paper.??It?is?loosely?organized?and?not?well?developed.??
The?response?is?clear;?what?errors?there?are?never?interfere?with?a?reader's?understanding,?but?there?are?frequent?minor?errors?in?language,?syntax,?and?punctuation.??
For?all?of?these?reasons,?the?response?is?clearly?limited?and?deserves?a?score?of?3.
