往往在托福寫作考試中，很多學(xué)生都會經(jīng)常性的犯一些小錯誤，今天小編給大家?guī)硗懈懽骺荚囍谐７稿e誤有哪些，希望能夠幫助到大家，下面小編就和大家分享，來欣賞一下吧。

托福寫作考試中常犯錯誤有哪些

1、不一致(Disagreements)

所謂不一致不光指主謂不一致，它還包括了數(shù)的不一致時態(tài)不一致及代詞不一致等。

例1. When one have money，he can do what he want to。

(人一旦有了錢，他就能想干什么就干什么。) 剖析：one是單數(shù)第三人稱，因而本句的have應(yīng)改為has; 同理，want應(yīng)改為wants。本句是典型的主謂不一致。

改為：Once one has money，he can do what he wants (to do)。

2、 修飾語錯位(Misplaced Modifiers)

英語與漢語不同，同一個修飾語置于句子不同的位置，句子的含義可能引起變化。對于這一點(diǎn)中國學(xué)生往往沒有引起足夠的重視，因而造成了 不必要的誤解。

例1. I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus。

剖析：better位置不當(dāng)，應(yīng)置于句末。

3、 句子不完整(Sentence Fragments)

在口語中，交際雙方可借助手勢語氣上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解?？墒菚嬲Z就不同了，句子結(jié)構(gòu)不完整會令意思表達(dá)不清，這種情況常常發(fā)生在主句寫完以后，筆者又想加些補(bǔ)充說明時發(fā)生。

例1. There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV，radio，newspaper and so on。

剖析：本句后半部分“for example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on”不是一個完整的句子，僅為一些不連貫的詞語，不能獨(dú)立成句。

改為：There are many ways to know society，for example，by TV，radio，and newspaper。

4、 懸垂修飾語(Dangling Modifiers)

所謂懸垂修飾語是指句首的短語與后面句子的邏輯關(guān)系混亂不清。例如：At the age of ten，my grandfather died. 這句中“at the age of ten” 只點(diǎn)出十歲時，但沒有說明“ 誰”十歲時。按一般推理不可能是my grandfather， 如果我們把這個懸垂修飾語改明確一點(diǎn)，全句就不那么費(fèi)解了。

改為：When I was ten，my grandfather died。

例1. To do well in college，good grades are essential。

剖析：句中不定式短語 “to do well in college” 的邏輯主語不清楚。

改為：To do well in college， a student needs good grades。

5、詞性誤用(Misuse of Parts of Speech)

“詞性誤用”常表現(xiàn)為：介詞當(dāng)動詞用;形容詞當(dāng)副詞用;名詞當(dāng)動詞用等。

例1. None can negative the importance of money。

剖析：negative 系形容詞，誤作動詞。

改為：None can deny the importance of money。

6、指代不清(Ambiguous Reference of Pronouns)

指代不清主要講的是代詞與被指代的人或物關(guān)系不清，或者先后所用的代詞不一致。試看下面這一句：

Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid。

(瑪麗和我姐姐很要好，因?yàn)樗鏊陌槟铩?讀完上面這一句話，讀者無法明確地判斷兩位姑娘中誰將結(jié)婚，誰將當(dāng)伴娘。如果我們把易于引起誤解的代詞的所指對象加以明確，意思就一目了然了。這個句子可改為：

Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid。

例1. And we can also know the society by serving it yourself。

剖析：句中人稱代詞we 和反身代詞yourself指代不一致。

改為：We can also know society by serving it ourselves。

7、不間斷句子(Run-on Sentences)

什么叫run-on sentence?請看下面的例句。

例1. There are many ways we get to know the outside world。

剖析：這個句子包含了兩層完整的意思：“There are many ways?！?以及“We get to know the outside world?！薄：唵蔚匕阉鼈冞B在一起就不妥當(dāng)了。

改為：There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world。

或：There are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world。

8、措詞毛病(Troubles in Diction)

Diction 是指在特定的句子中如何適當(dāng)?shù)剡x用詞語的問題，囿于教學(xué)時間緊迫，教師平時在這方面花的時間往往極其有限，影響了學(xué)生在寫作中沒有養(yǎng)成良好的推敲，斟酌的 習(xí)慣。他們往往隨心所欲，拿來就用。所以作文中用詞不當(dāng)?shù)腻e誤比比皆是。

例1. The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution。

(農(nóng)業(yè)方面化學(xué)物質(zhì)使用的不斷增加也造成了污染。)剖析：顯然，考生把obstacles“障礙”，“障礙物”誤作substance“物質(zhì)”了。另外“the increasing use (不斷增加的使用)” 應(yīng)改為“abusive use (濫用)”。

改為：The abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution。

9、累贅(Redundancy)

言以簡潔為貴。寫句子沒有一個多余的詞;寫段落沒有一個無必要的句子。能用單詞的不用詞組;能用詞組的不用從句或句子。如：

In spite of the fact that he is lazy，I like him。

本句的“the fact that he is lazy”系同謂語從句，我們按照上述“能用詞組的不用從句”

可以改為：In spite of his laziness，I like him。

例1. For the people who are diligent and kind， money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need。

剖析：整個句子可以大大簡化。

改為：Diligent，caring people use money only to buy what they need。

10、 不連貫(Incoherence)

不連貫是指一個句子前言不對后語，或是結(jié)構(gòu)上不暢通。這也是考生常犯的毛病。

例1. The fresh water，it is the most important things of the earth。

剖析：The fresh water 與逗號后的it 不連貫。It 與things 在數(shù)方面不一致。

改為：Fresh water is the most important thing in the world。

托福寫作解析 寫作中這7個語法錯誤要避免

1、中式英語

原：Thus, one is easier to draw bosses’ attention and gain appreciation.

改：Thus, it’s easier for you to draw bosses’ attention and gain appreciation.

評：中文習(xí)慣說“人們可以更容易地吸引老板的注意力”，而英語則習(xí)慣說“It’s easier for sb. to…”同學(xué)們要注意中英表述習(xí)慣的區(qū)別哦!

2、 用詞不當(dāng)

原：The absence of groupwork is a disaster for teenagers in modern society.

改：The absence of teamwork is a disaster for teenagers in modern society.

評：groupwork是“分組”或者“小組集體任務(wù)”的意思。這位同學(xué)原本想說teamwork“團(tuán)隊(duì)合作”，卻用了一個看起來很像，但實(shí)際完全不同的詞，表達(dá)出來的意思就風(fēng)馬牛不相及了。

原：You will be dangerous if you keep moving without a clear view of the whole picture.

改：You will be in danger if you keep moving without a clear view of the whole picture.

評：dangerous表示所修飾的對象是“帶來危險的，有危險性的”，而be in danger才是“身處險境”的意思。到底誰才是威脅呢?

原：Firstly, the job, providing the opportunity for students to utilize what they learned in class, might effect their further development.

改：Firstly, the job, providing the opportunity for students to utilize what they learned in class, might affect their further development.

評：模樣長得像，意思可不同了。這里想用動詞affect表示“影響”，卻誤寫為名詞effect“效果”，一字千里啊!

3、搭配錯誤

原：Nowadays, people are crazy pursuing to be excellent.

改：Nowadays, people are crazy about excellence.

評：這位同學(xué)顯然記錯了be crazy about sth. 這個用法，寫出來的句子自然會出問題啦。

原：Besides, public speech can effectively increase your communication skills, which facilitate your salesman career.

改：Besides, public speech can effectively improve your communication skills, which facilitate your salesman career.

評：此處是一個明顯的動賓搭配錯誤?！疤岣摺记伞睉?yīng)該是improve the skills，而不是increase the skills.

4、詞性錯位

原：I will forget my sad and pressure from the work and the study.

改：I will forget my sadness and pressure from work and study.

評：sad是形容詞，而這里明顯需要一個名詞，應(yīng)該是sadness。

原：Although making money is a priority for most people, spending time with the family is equal significant.

改：…, spending time with the family is equally significant.

評：形容詞significant前需要用副詞來修飾，所以equal應(yīng)該改成equally。

5、時態(tài)混亂

原：Although I have no work experience when I was a teenager, I always dreamed about having a job.

改：Although I had no work experience when I was a teenager, I always dreamed about having a job.

評：過去時的句子中冒出了現(xiàn)在時，同學(xué)你太粗心了，要仔細(xì)檢查哦~

原：I would explain my view in the following paragraphs.

改：I’d like to explain… / I will explain…

評：可能是兩種說法記混了吧，結(jié)果把時態(tài)搞錯了……

6、主謂不一致

原：The way we deal with the environmental problems are crucial to the prosperity of human-being.

改：The way we deal with the environmental problems is crucial to the prosperity of human-being.

評：謂語之前有兩個名詞時，主謂搭配的問題就常常出現(xiàn)了。這里真正的主語應(yīng)該是單數(shù)名詞the way，所以與之搭配的謂語也應(yīng)該是單數(shù)的is。

7、重復(fù)累贅

原：From my point of view, I think this argument is quite limited since many other ways can also help learning a foreign country.

改：From my point of view, this argument is quite limited since many other ways can also help us learn a foreign country.

評：from my point of view和I think重復(fù)啦，保留一個就好。當(dāng)然這里建議留下更“高級”的from my point of view.

原：There are the majority of people who deem that they like to spend money on things which can bring them long memory.

改：Majority of the people like to spend money on things that can be memorized for long.

評：中文句式說的“有很多人……”，但別一看到“有”就非要用there be句型不可哦，直接擺出主謂賓就行了。

“things that can be memorized for long”，被動語態(tài)明顯更地道。

托福寫作解析：電影和電視的利弊

托福寫作題目：

A/D Movies and televisions have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.

30分作文也沒有那么難做到啦。這是一篇近期考出30分寫作的同學(xué)的考前習(xí)作。這個考試季很多同學(xué)反映寫作壓分，30分的作文單項(xiàng)分已經(jīng)很罕見。我們一起看看，在這個季節(jié)，什么樣的作文能穩(wěn)穩(wěn)拿下考場高分。

總結(jié)一下幾個要點(diǎn)

1. 清晰有力的論證邏輯

2. 準(zhǔn)確的用詞

3. 句式的適當(dāng)變化，如排比，虛擬，短句的偶爾出現(xiàn)。

4. 小錯誤多次出現(xiàn)可以容忍

托福寫作滿分作文：

Whenever I turn on TV, I see dark themes and plots of programs broadcast on it. Just calculate roughly, there are about 30 programs whose theme is pessimistic in every 40 programs. 【眼尖的同學(xué)一眼能看出來幾處語法錯誤，顯然ETS不那么介意;我們要學(xué)習(xí)的是作者用數(shù)字說明問題】And there are so many plots orienting adults that should not be seen by young people.【上面兩個句子點(diǎn)出電視節(jié)目的兩個問題，為論點(diǎn)的出現(xiàn)做充足鋪墊】So I strongly believe that movies and televisions have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave. 【出論點(diǎn)，論點(diǎn)句要穩(wěn)扎穩(wěn)打，千萬別此刻玩花的，花大了別人沒看懂就麻煩了】This is not only because young people will imitate the inappropriate behavior in the programs, but also because the dark theme of them will distort the way young people view the world.【預(yù)告自己的兩個分論點(diǎn)，老套的開頭結(jié)構(gòu)，勝在穩(wěn)重清晰】

Firstly, young people may imitate the bad behavior they saw on televisions and movies.【同樣，觀點(diǎn)句不許玩花的，老實(shí)點(diǎn)兒】 Young people, especially children, are not sophisticated enough to think about the consequences【用詞準(zhǔn)確】 or their behavior carefully, and they are often eager to try new things 【解釋論點(diǎn)句為什么成立--因?yàn)槟贻p人有這些特性】. Television programs and movies often include some violent behavior in them in order to make the plots more inviting【用詞準(zhǔn)確】 and attract more people to watch.【重申電視節(jié)目的特點(diǎn)，暴力鏡頭多，與上一句‘年輕人愛模仿’的信息合起來為下一句短句的力量制造必要條件】 So here is the problem【我們一再強(qiáng)調(diào)的短句的力量】. Young people will probably try those inappropriate【用詞準(zhǔn)確】 behaviors they saw on televisions, thinking they are normal or acceptable.【換個方式把論點(diǎn)句重新說了一遍，但并不讓人覺得重復(fù)，因?yàn)轫槼猩衔牡倪壿嬐评矶闪ⅰＨ螞]有一個例子，直接用純論證完成，功力可見】

Secondly, lots of pessimistic themes of television programs or movies will make young people feel sad about the world. 【雖然主語長了一些，但作為論點(diǎn)句，依然是經(jīng)典的主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)，簡潔明了】As mentioned in the former paragraph, there are violence in TV programs and movies, and young people may not only imitate those bad behaviors, but also affected by the sad view in these programs.【借力上一段的內(nèi)容，回點(diǎn)上段，增加文章內(nèi)部的粘結(jié)力，但是在上一段所討論信息的基礎(chǔ)上向前推進(jìn)一步，推出新論點(diǎn)，經(jīng)典的承上啟下結(jié)構(gòu)】 Because they are during a period when their ways of looking at the world are formed, seeing too much about the dark side of the society is no good for their growth.【解釋上一句為什么成立--因?yàn)槟贻p人世界觀正在成形,應(yīng)該用being formed 而不是are formed，但這種小錯誤不影響高分】It can create a false sense of reality【用詞準(zhǔn)確，來自平時的積累】, as if the only newsworthy events are those that are tragic or violent. They may form a bad habit of always looking at people or events from a dark point of view, feeling hopeless and despairing, even conducting some self-destructive behaviors.【這個列舉的句子如果從sat語法的角度來說也是錯誤多多的……不過從語義上來說，做了一個因勢利導(dǎo)夸大其詞的論證推斷，三個列舉層層遞進(jìn)互為因果，還是實(shí)現(xiàn)了列舉的修辭效果的】

Admittedly, there are some programs trying to convey optimistic view to viewers, but their plots are so unrealistic that they cannot convince young people. 【讓步段第一句話，先提出自己之前的論證沒有正視的情況，再明確指出這種情況的致命缺點(diǎn)】And they tell stories in a too exaggerating way, making stories more unconvincing. 【補(bǔ)刀】For example【全文都沒有舉例論證，到這里實(shí)在摒不住了，呵呵】, once I saw a TV program on the daily life of a couple. In order to convey【用詞準(zhǔn)確】 the view that ‘if you do good things, you will always get want you want’, the program told a story that the young man picks up 10000 dollars three times a week just because he always helps his neighbors and the god is touched by him! What a ridiculous story! If I were a child, I would have no desire to do good things, as I didn’t believe I would pick up so much money no matter how many good things I did.【這個虛擬語氣的使用信手拈來，適合各種假設(shè)狀況的探討】 So even if there are some programs with optimistic themes, I don’t think they will impact young people more than those with pessimistic themes. 【總結(jié)這個例子對于自己論點(diǎn)的意義，再次強(qiáng)化自己的立場】