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寫作老師經(jīng)驗(yàn)分享 如何從根本上提升雅思寫作水平之邏輯篇
我們來拿一個真題和一個類似于真題的題進(jìn)行說明:
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Some people say that communication by using computers and phones will have side effects on young people’s writing and reading skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
改編題:
Some people say that the use of using computers and phones will have side effects on young people’s communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
請各位同學(xué)想一想,這兩個問題是一樣的么?勞煩各位思考個3分鐘,然后繼續(xù)往下翻~如果你覺得并沒有很大差別,那估計真的碰到這個題目的話,6.5分是很勉強(qiáng)的。
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我們先來說改編題:
side effects:
1. face-to-face communication減少,感情可能變淡
positive effects:
1. be able to contact people without geographical limitation; in the past, it may be impossible to say Hi to a foreign friend.
2. be able to contact friends or partners quickly, no need to wait for responses; in the past, writing letters really wastes a lot of time and sometimes letters may be lost.
我們再來說真題:
side effects:
1. writing abilities會下降,因?yàn)閷懶诺念l率降低了,handwriting當(dāng)然變差
2. reading和writing都會下降,因?yàn)閕nformal abbreviation on the Internet取代了正式的單詞,例如LOL=laugh,或者btw=by the way
3. writing abilities會下降,因?yàn)槿藗兊膕pelling會變差,源于一些軟件的自動糾錯功能
positive effects:
恕我沒想到
你會發(fā)現(xiàn),僅僅是把communication具體成了writing and reading abilities,整個題目的思考方向都變化了,那么這種變化你適應(yīng)的過來么?可能很多同學(xué)并沒有這種能力,而且這種能力也不會出現(xiàn)在絕大部分老師的課堂上,一個原因是很多老師自己也沒想明白這之中的區(qū)別(因?yàn)榻逃⒄Z和教邏輯其實(shí)是不相關(guān)的事),另一個是因?yàn)楹芏嗤瑢W(xué)表示聽完之后似懂非懂,下次碰到了還是會繼續(xù)無視一些關(guān)鍵詞or限定詞,所以一般我也不太會講這個,大部分同學(xué)也難以在短時間內(nèi)消化這個東西,但是,它很重要,特別是雅思每年還是會有幾道題比較惡心人的,這個題目在惡心程度里面的排名算是中上等~
雅思備考:15個高難度雅思寫作題目整理匯總
1.Some people think that universities should provide knowledge and skills related to future career. Others think the true function of the university is to give access to knowledge for its own sake. What is your opinion?
2.The unpaid community service should be a necessary part in high college programs (such as helping your neighbor or teaching the children sports or working for the charity).To what extent do you agree or disagree?
3.Nowadays, some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works by using computer. Do you agree or disagree?
4.Some experts say that children’s studying English at primary school is better than their studying English at secondary school. Do you think its advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
5.At present, science is developing at a high speed, but people still have a high opinion of artists. What’s your opinion?
6.More and more measures to improve the security in the urban area have been introduced because of the increased crime. Do the benefits of the measures outweigh the drawbacks?
7.Some people believe that history is little or nothing to people. Others think that people must study history to understand the present. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
8.Earlier technological development brought more benefits changes to the life of ordinary people than the recent technological development does. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
9.In order to learn a language well, we should also learn about the country as well as the cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
10.Some people think that increasing business and cultural contacts have positive influences on development; others think that they have negative effects on national identities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
11.Leisure is a growing industry. Nowadays, more modern technology is used in entertainment, which may lead people to be less creative. Do you agree or disagree?
12.Advertising encourages consumers to buy in quantity rather than in quality. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
13.The government thinks that education system should be up to date. Following are a list of the subjects taught in school. Which two do you think are the most important subjects and which one is the least important to the young people? literature, sports, mathematics, economics, physics, music, psychology, history, geography and foreign languages.
14.An American film actor once said, “Tomorrow is important and precious.” Some people think individuals and society should pay more attention to the future than to the present. Do you agree?
15.Old generations often hold some traditional ideas on the correct way of life, thinking and behavior. Most people argue that it is not helpful for the young generations to prepare for modern life in the future. What is your opinion?
雅思備考:大作文范文之空運(yùn)蔬菜水果的利弊分析
題目:
Air transport is increasingly used to export types of fruits and vegetables to countries where those plants can’t grow or out of season. Some say it is a good thing, but others consider this use of air transport can’t be justified. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
范文:
Air transport is commonly used to move fruits and vegetables to places where those farm products can’t grow or are out of season. The benefits of such business are obvious, but air transport also creates a number of problems.
Transport of fruits and vegetables by air enables consumers to enjoy a wider variety of fresh and in-season farm products from all over the world. Not only is air transport good for consumers, it is also a blessing for farmers because the market is no longer restricted by regions. As a result, air transport increases the sale volume by selling more products in more places.
Moreover, air transport of food has now become a major resource of incomes for air companies. In the past, air companies’ business mainly came from serving passengers. However, facing an increasingly tough market, air companies need to expand their share of market to serve a wider range of customers in order to stay in the game and make a profit. With a booming economy and more money to spend, people create a great potential for food transport business and good margin for air companies.
In spite of such benefits, air transport is not free of problems. One major issue is high cost. Air transport is probably the most expensive way of transport. Higher costs entail high prices, which in turn deprive people with less money the opportunities to enjoy such privileges. So air transported food is now for the rich, a fact that is unfair for poor people.
In addition, it is not the best option to solve problems by transporting food from outside for places where certain kinds of fruits does not grow. The most optimal way, it seems to me, is that we should change the environment required by such plants using scientific and biological methods such as creating suitable soil and temperature. Such solutions will be proven to be ultimately cost-effective and fundamental.
More importantly, research indicates that air transport pollutes the environment. For example, Britain transports half its food by air. However one kilo New Zealand fruit emits five kilo warm house gas on its way to destination. Therefore, some environmental groups and books advocate people to distinguish local fruit and air-transported fruit in an effort to cut the pollution from food consumption.
In conclusion, air transport has many benefits for consumers and farmers, but it also has problems such as high cost and pollution. More effective and environmental friendly solution should be found to address such problems.