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雅思作文如何結(jié)尾?--絕學(xué)之作，烤鴨必讀!

就雅思寫作3大出題類型/寫作思路，暫時歸納3種結(jié)尾方式，并試圖一一說明。

(1)一邊倒型：完全同意/反對題目中的一方觀點

結(jié)尾：再次重述觀點，并總結(jié)前文給出的理由。(30-50字即可)

(2)雙邊討論型：對雙方觀點的優(yōu)劣進(jìn)行討論

結(jié)尾：總結(jié)雙方觀點，提出自己的判斷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)和結(jié)論：即傾向于更贊同某一方，還是認(rèn)為雙方應(yīng)互補，或者認(rèn)為雙方都有缺陷，因此應(yīng)該提出一個更合理的觀點。(一般需要50-80字左右)

(3)問題解決型：分析問題/現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因，提出解決辦法

結(jié)尾：問題/現(xiàn)象的解決辦法(無需再總結(jié)原因)。(一般需要100字以上)

舉例1：一邊倒型

Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants and canteens. Do you agree or disagree?

Everyone has to eat. The question is, where to eat? You may cook and eat at home, or just eat out in restaurants or canteens. My personal opinion is that eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out.

First, it has no doubt that cooking and eating at home can save a lot of money. Generally, the cost of eating in restaurants is much higher than eating at home. By cooking at home, you don’t have to pay the labor fee for the chef, and don’t have to pay tips to the waiter. What you have to do is just a little hand operation and a little time. From supermarkets, you can buy cheap vegetables and meat, which may cost only 10 percent of the same food in a restaurant. Sometimes, you can get cheaper food in discount time. Especially, a big family may enjoy the method, as the monthly cost would be less.

Second, you can freely select your favorite food to cook. A restaurant cannot always provide you with delicious food. The taste of food in restrurants is usually designed for the public, which is not suitable for a particular guest. If you miss the taste of your mum’s soup, it’s not likely to find the same one in a restraurant. In this case, the best choice is to cook by yourself, to reproduce your mum’s food to the best you can.

Finally, it’s obvious that eating at home is more healthy and clean. You don’t know whether it’s dirty in the restaurants, and also you don’t know whether the food is fresh. But by cooking at home, you can know everything about the cooking materials. Moreover, it’s easy to control the usage of fat and oil, unless you don’t care to become too fat.

In brief, I believe that eating at home is healthy and clean. If people want to save money, eating at home is also a good choice. In addition, people can cook what they like as well. So I personally prefer eating at home.

Band： 7 (難度較低完成質(zhì)量高的動作)

評析：

本習(xí)作采用的是一邊倒結(jié)構(gòu)。開頭段即表明自己的觀點：在家吃飯更好。接下來三段從三個方面論述在家吃飯的好處：(1)在家吃飯省錢;(2)在家吃飯可吃自己最喜歡的飯菜;(3)在家吃飯更健康衛(wèi)生。最后一段為結(jié)尾段。各位烤鴨注意，這三個原因的先后順序安排符合老雅一直試圖告訴你們的三個層次哦：從物質(zhì)層次(錢)- 心理層次(喜歡)- 社會層次(健康衛(wèi)生)。[若對老雅的三大層次理論仍不清楚，請回讀本公眾號!]

結(jié)尾段里，作者用三句話總結(jié)前面講的三大原因：eating at home is healthy and clean; eating at home also saves money; people can cook what they like if they eat at home. 最后一句結(jié)論：我寧愿在家吃飯。

本結(jié)尾雖然結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，但的確沒有什么難度，甚至過于簡單了，就像體操中下杠前的動作與前面動作是一模一樣的重復(fù)，讓看客都很無聊了。若是老雅來寫，可能會玩點花(這得根據(jù)你自己的情況，不要從杠上掉下來最重要!)：

In brief, I personally prefer eating at home. Besides saving money and being more healthy and clean, eating at home also gives me the freedom to cook whatever I like, and I like this feeling.

舉例 2： 雙邊討論型

In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school. The trend is not restricted to rich students who have the money to travel, but is also evident among poorer students who choose to work and become economically independent for a period of time.

The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world. By contrast, those who have spent some time earning a living or travelling to other places, have a broader view of life and better personal resources to draw on. They tend to be more independent, which is a very important factor in academic study and research, as well as giving them an advantage in terms of coping with the challenges of student life.

However, there are certainly dangers in taking time off at that important age. Young adults may end up never returning to their studies or finding it difficult to readapt to an academic environment. They may think that it is better to continue in a particular job or to do something completely different from a university course. But overall I think this is less likely today, when academic qualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career.

My view is that young people should be encouraged to broaden their horizons. That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they are hoping to do with their lives and why. Students with such a perspective are usually the most effective and motivated ones and taking a year off may be the best way to gain this.

Band：8 (難度適中完成質(zhì)量較高的動作)

評析：

本習(xí)作采用的雙邊討論型結(jié)構(gòu)。第一段提出現(xiàn)象，但不表明自己觀點;第二段討論上大學(xué)前休假或工作一年的好處：拓寬視野、積累資源、學(xué)會獨立;第三段講此舉可能帶來的壞處：很多人就再也難以適應(yīng)大學(xué)生活了(順便表明自己不太贊同這個觀點);最后一段結(jié)論段。內(nèi)容并無驚艷之處。

雙邊討論的結(jié)尾段需要表明自己的觀點，并簡要說明原因(也就是說到底是什么標(biāo)準(zhǔn)讓你選擇支持某個觀點，或者兩個觀點都支持，甚或兩個觀點都反對)。本作文對學(xué)生上大學(xué)前工作或休假1年表示贊同，原因是可以拓寬視野，接下來用 “自然接續(xù)”法講為什么拓寬視野很重要：拓寬視野就可以幫助他們清楚地知道生活需要什么，而知道了生活需要什么后他們就會變得非常有效率，有動力(如果還不知道“自然接續(xù)”是什么，你已經(jīng)OUT啦!沒關(guān)系，請回看老雅公眾號，馬上補課!)。這個結(jié)尾段顯得非常有效：觀點明確，支持觀點的理由充分。值得注意的是：在雙邊討論作文中，由于前面討論雙方觀點已經(jīng)占據(jù)了很多篇幅，因此，在結(jié)尾段，一般不再對自己的結(jié)論過多展開論述，而是在前文討論基礎(chǔ)上表明立場，并用1-2句話適當(dāng)說出自己的理由。在這樣的結(jié)尾段中，最重要的就是要寫出：(1)自己的觀點;(2)自己觀點的判斷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)或者依據(jù)(不需詳細(xì)展開)。

舉例3：問題分析/解決型

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

What other measures do you think might be effective?

There is no doubt that traffic and pollution from vehicles have become huge problems, both in cities and on motorways everywhere. Solving these problems is likely to need more than a simple rise in the price of petrol.

While it is undeniable that private car use is one of the main causes of increasing in traffic and pollution, higher fuel costs are unlikely to limit the number of drivers for long. As this policy would also affect the cost of public transport, it would be very unpopular with everyone who needs to travel on the roads. But there are various other measures that could be implemented that would have a huge effect on these problems.

I think to tackle the problem of pollution, cleaner fuels need to be developed. The technology is already available to produce electric cars that would be both quieter and cleaner to use. Persuading manufacturers and travelers to adopt this new technology would be a more effective strategy for improving the air quality, especially in cities.

However, traffic congestion will not be solved by changing the type of private vehicle people can use. To do this, we need to improve the choice of public transport services available to travelers. For example, if sufficient sky train and underground train system were built and effectively maintained in our major society, then traffic on the roads would be dramatically reduced.Long-distance train and coach services should be made attractive and affordable alternatives to driving your own cars for long journeys.

Band：8.5 (難度較大完成質(zhì)量較高的動作)

本題是一個類似討論+問題解決綜合類題型，很少見，但萬變不離其宗。第一段提出問題，然后馬上就題目觀點提出自己意見：上漲油價可能不是解決污染和交通問題的最好辦法。第二段論述為什么上漲油價解決不了問題：(1)上漲油價并不能很長久地限制私人開車;(2)上漲油價會影響公共交通。本段最后一句提出還有其他辦法來解決這個問題。第三段論述另外一個辦法，即開發(fā)新型汽車來降低污染問題。第四段提出，為解決交通問題，需要提供更多交通選擇(包括空中火車，地下鐵路，長途火車和汽車等)。因此，這篇寫作的結(jié)構(gòu)就是：引入段+否定題目觀點段+問題解決1段+問題解決2段。當(dāng)然，本文的第三段和第四段可以合并起來，但可能會顯得太長，因此分開還是最好的選擇，畢竟兩段提出的是不同問題的解決辦法。注意：本題中有兩個問題需要解決，因此需要提出不同的解決辦法。

大家若有興趣，可以進(jìn)一步學(xué)習(xí)本文在提出解決辦法時，使用的不同句型：

1)I think to tackle the problem of pollution, cleaner fuels need to be developed. (need to do...引導(dǎo)建議)

2)...if sufficient sky train and underground train system were built and effectively maintained in our major society, then traffic on the roads would be dramatically reduced.(虛擬語氣引導(dǎo)建議)

3)Long-distance train and coach services should be made attractive and affordable alternatives to driving your own cars for long journeys. (should 引導(dǎo)建議)

相比而言，我們的同學(xué)好像通篇只會用should來引導(dǎo)建議和問題解決方法，做人做文的差距怎么那么大呢!

另外提一句，我們的同學(xué)只要一寫到問題解決，好像就必須要寫“提高......的意識”、“政府要加強(qiáng)教育” 這樣假大空的詞句，真是夠了!看看本段人家的具體建議，記?。涸谘潘甲魑闹芯芙^假大空，多點具體實際、貼近生活的內(nèi)容!

雅思圖表作文中的優(yōu)秀作文梳理

1.我們可以從圖表上看出：托雅的女生比例遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)高于男生所占比例。

As can be seen from the chart, the percentage of female students was far higher than that of male students at Toya.

2.從圖表反映的情況來看：讀雅思的人數(shù)遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)超過讀托福的，同時，讀托福的人數(shù)一直呈現(xiàn)平穩(wěn)上升趨勢。

As can be seen from the chart, those who chose to study for IELTS far outnumbered those choosing to study for TOEFL. Meanwhile, the number of those who chose to study for TOEFL was on a steady rise.

3.從圖表反映的情況來看：托雅學(xué)生在飯店用餐的頻率在不同的月份呈現(xiàn)出了相應(yīng)的波動趨勢。

As can be seen from the diagram, the frequency of Toya students eating at restaurants revealed a trend of fluctuations in different months.

4.從圖表反映的情況來看：托雅男教師所承擔(dān)的每周工作量要高于女教師的。

As can be seen from the charts, the weekly workload borne by male teachers outweighed that of female teachers at Toya.

5.從整個圖表反映的情況來看：托雅總部以及五個分校的營業(yè)收入都呈現(xiàn)出了快速的增長趨勢。

As can be seen from the chart, the sales of Toya Headquarter and the five branch schools all revealed a trend of fast increase across the board.

6.從整個圖表反映的情況來看：托雅教師的收入狀況呈現(xiàn)出了穩(wěn)步增長的總態(tài)勢。

As can be seen from the chart, the income of Toya teachers revealed a general trend of steady rise.

7.圖表顯示：托雅廣告投入呈現(xiàn)出逐漸下降的趨勢，然而有趣的是，營業(yè)收入?yún)s呈現(xiàn)出大幅度的攀升。

As can be seen from the chart, the advertising investment of Toya revealed a trend of gradual decrease, but interestingly, its sales witnessed a trend of increase by leaps and bounds.

8.餅圖反映出托雅女生的比例遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)高于男生;曲線圖則表明在雅思考試成績方面，女生的表現(xiàn)也遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)好于男生。

The pie chart shows that the percentage of female students was much higher than that of male students while the graph indicates that in terms of students’ performance on IELTS, female students did a much better job than male ones.

9.餅圖表明：托雅雅思比托福所占份額要高出很多;曲線圖則顯示出：兩個項目每月的招生情況呈現(xiàn)出了總的波動趨勢。

The pie chart indicates that IELTS accounted for a much larger percentage than TOEFL at Toya while the graph shows that student enrollment on the two programs on a monthly basis revealed a general trend of fluctuations.

10.圖表反映出：托雅上半年與下班年的營業(yè)收入總體呈現(xiàn)出快速的上升趨勢，成本與支出表現(xiàn)出了較大的波動。

The graph indicates that the sales of Toya both in the first half and the second half of the year revealed a general trend of fast increase while costs and expenses fluctuated greatly.

11.根據(jù)圖表所示，托雅行政人員中男性員工的比例要高于女性。

As is indicated in the graph, male employees working in executive positions accounted for a much higher percentage than females.

12.根據(jù)圖表所示，所有群體的收入都呈現(xiàn)了上升趨勢，雖然上升的幅度有所差異。

As is indicated in the graph, the income of all the groups revealed a general trend of increase across the board though the margins of the rises varied.

13.根據(jù)圖表所示，人們的教育程度越高，收入便越高。

As is indicated in the graph, the higher one’s education level was, the higher his income.

14.根據(jù)圖表所示，該公司的凈銷售與成本支出皆呈現(xiàn)了快速提高的總趨勢，而其利潤則呈現(xiàn)了波動。

As can be seen from the table, net sales and costs and expenses of the designated company both showed a general trend of fast increase while its profit fluctuated.

15.從圖表我們可以看出：女性吸煙者的百分比呈現(xiàn)穩(wěn)步增長，而男性則處于波動狀態(tài)。

As we can see from the first chart, the percentage of female smokers was on a steady rise across the board while the number of male smokers showed a trend of fluctuations.

16.從圖表可以看出：選擇數(shù)學(xué)的人們的百分比穩(wěn)步下降，而選擇商務(wù)管理者則呈現(xiàn)出上升的總趨勢。

As can be seen from the chart, the percentage of those who chose math declined steadily　while those who studied business management revealed a general upward trend.

17.從圖表可以看出：在所界定的時段里，路上總的交通事故顯示了波動的總趨勢。

As can be seen from the table, the total road accidents over the designated period revealed a general trend of fluctuations.

18.根據(jù)圖表顯示：中國在汽車生產(chǎn)與銷售方面皆呈現(xiàn)出了迅猛的增長態(tài)勢。

As is indicated in the graph, China’s auto manufacturing and sales both revealed a general trend of dramatic increase.

19.如圖所示：上海私家車保有量連續(xù)10年呈現(xiàn)出迅猛增長的趨勢，而空氣質(zhì)量則顯現(xiàn)出截然相反的態(tài)勢。

As is indicated in the graph, private car ownership revealed a trend of dramatic increase for 10 years in a row while air quality showed an obviously opposite trend.

20.如圖所示，托雅學(xué)生開車前來上課的人數(shù)呈現(xiàn)大幅攀升態(tài)勢，而停車?yán)щy指數(shù)也同步大幅提升。

As can be seen from the chart, the number of Toya students who drove to school showed a trend of substantial increase and the index of difficulty for parking increased accordingly.

21.圖表顯示：不管他們有幾個孩子，已婚婦女都要比已婚男士做的家務(wù)活多得多。

As we can see from the graph, married women did far more household work than married men did no matter how many children they had.

22.總體而言，昂立托雅學(xué)院男女生注冊學(xué)雅思的人數(shù)比學(xué)托福的人數(shù)多。

Generally speaking, there were more students of both genders getting enrolled in IELTS than in TOEFL at Onlytoya College.

23.根據(jù)圖表顯示：男性在管理和專業(yè)類崗位上工作的百分比要高于女性，而女性在文書及其相關(guān)崗位上占的百分比要高于男性。

As we can see from the charts, a much higher percentage of men worked on managerial and professional jobs than women did while women took up a much larger percentage in terms of clerical and its related jobs than men.

24.總體而言，涵蓋更多工作門類的服務(wù)業(yè)雇傭了較低百分比的勞動力隊伍，卻產(chǎn)出了這個國家較大百分比的GDP價值。

Generally speaking, the service sector, which covered a much wider range of job varieties,　employed a much lower percentage of the workforce but produced a much higher proportion of the GDP value in the designated country.

25.總體而言，求與供皆呈現(xiàn)了總的波動趨勢，以2003年后供大于求為主要趨勢。

In general both demand and supply revealed a general trend of fluctuations across the board　with supply surpassing demand as the main trend after the year 2003.

26.柱狀圖顯示：收入越高者去飯店吃飯的頻率和每次的消費額越高。

As is indicated in the bar chart, the higher people’s income was, the more frequently they dined at restaurants and the more they spent each time.

27.根據(jù)圖表顯示：參加雅思考試的考生年齡呈現(xiàn)年輕化趨勢。

As is indicated in the diagram, the age of IELTS candidates showed a trend of getting younger over the designated period of time.

28.從圖表中我們可以看到：雅思考生的家庭經(jīng)濟(jì)狀況總體而言要比托?？忌募彝顩r好得多。

As can be seen from the chart, the family financial statuses of IELTS candidates were much better than that of TOEFL candidates.

29.圖表顯示，前往美國和加拿大留學(xué)的人數(shù)呈現(xiàn)出下降趨勢，而前往英國和澳大利亞的留學(xué)人數(shù)則呈現(xiàn)穩(wěn)步增加趨勢。

As is indicated in the graph, the number of students who chose to go to U.S.A. and Canada showed a trend of decline while that of those who went to the U.K. and Australia revealed a trend of steady rise.

30.圖表顯示：雅思每月考試次數(shù)的增加對于雅思考生人數(shù)的迅速增長產(chǎn)生了非常大的影響。

As is shown in the chart, the increase in the number of IELTS per month had a significant impact on the rapid increase in the number of IELTS candidates.

雅思G類小作文寫作高分技巧

G類的小作文絕大多數(shù)都是以書信形式展開的，這一形式本身決定了它與A類小作文有著很大的區(qū)別。但仔細(xì)分析一下題目，基本萬變不離其宗，下面以劍9的一道題目為例來進(jìn)行題目分析。

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.

Write a letter to your manager. In your letter

Explain why you want to take time off work

Give details of the amount of time you need

Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

首先，作文題目會給出一個情境，也就是要寫這封信的事由和目的。緊接著，題目用小標(biāo)題的形式給出了三個要求，也就是書信必須要講清楚的三件事情，告訴大家要寫什么。這樣清晰的題目提出的方法，給審題降低了很大的難度，也為評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)之一的“人物完成”減輕了很大的負(fù)擔(dān)，因為大家只要就著這樣的要求一一回應(yīng)就可以，而非像A類圖表題一樣還要動很大腦筋去想該寫什么內(nèi)容才能最好地回應(yīng)任務(wù)。

一段答一條，就這么簡單!

條理清晰的問題提出方法，也為文章的結(jié)構(gòu)指出了一條明路。大家只需要為題目中的目的介紹和三個條目分別安排一段即可。在順序上，如果有進(jìn)行自我介紹的要求(如果有，一般出現(xiàn)在三個條目的第一條)，就將自我介紹和寫信目的寫在第一段，將剩下兩個條目分別寫一段。

信件結(jié)構(gòu)輕松搞定，現(xiàn)在來關(guān)心一下格式問題。首先，地址是不需要寫。開頭稱謂頂格寫，有時試卷會給出完整的稱謂，有時只給出“Dear…”。如果沒有給出稱謂，我們采取的方案就是以下兩種中的一種：根據(jù)情境的要求，如果完全不認(rèn)識收信人，寫上“Dear Sir/Madam”;如果認(rèn)識收信人，就來給收信人編一個名字吧，例如“Dear Jack”“Dear Mr Green”等。注意稱謂結(jié)束用一個逗號。主體段的各段都頂格寫，每段之間空一行。落款的祝福有很多種寫法，通用的方法是“Sincerely yours”頂格寫，后面接逗號。而后空一行留下名字，同樣，名字也給自己編一個，不要用真名，寫個“Mary”啊“Tom”啊都可以。

抽象類雅思寫作話題解析

1. 競爭與合作哪個好?

題目：應(yīng)當(dāng)教育兒童競爭還是合作?競爭如何影響個人的，是利是弊?從團(tuán)隊運動比單獨運動能學(xué)到更多的技能，同意與否?

2. 現(xiàn)在與未來哪個更重要?

母題：Many people are optimistic of the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the world. To what extent do you share their optimism? What changes would you like to see in the new century? (050521, 090723)

提示：這道貌似抽象的話題其實可以化身為具體的話題，與我們之前準(zhǔn)備過的環(huán)保、社會、犯罪類話題結(jié)合起來。比如新世紀(jì)我們會遇到環(huán)境污染、全球變暖、動物滅絕、資源短缺、人口過剩、犯罪率上升等多重問題。

子題：人們在哪些領(lǐng)域取得了進(jìn)步，哪些領(lǐng)域仍需進(jìn)步?為什么將來比現(xiàn)在更加重要?

3. 個人品質(zhì)

題目：與生俱來的性格和生活中的經(jīng)歷哪個更主要?要不要回到一個沒有貪婪與自私，而是尊重老人和傳統(tǒng)的美好世界去?體育中的成功僅僅取決于體能嗎，還是有心理因素?經(jīng)濟(jì)上的成就一定會帶來幸福嗎?老年人的觀念是否有幫助?年輕人要不要遵守社會傳統(tǒng)觀念，還是自由成長?

4. 社會觀念

題目：經(jīng)濟(jì)實力是衡量國家的成功的唯一因素嗎?人們挑衣服的時候越來越講究時尚，是好是壞?現(xiàn)在人們用東西用完就扔，為什么，會導(dǎo)致什么影響?(提示：原因部分是社會價值觀，影響部分與環(huán)保類話題中“一次性的文化”聯(lián)系)發(fā)展中國家的人要比發(fā)達(dá)國家更快樂，為什么?經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展會導(dǎo)致社會價值的丟失嗎?

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