敘利奧讀小學(xué)五年級(jí)，12歲。他的父親在鐵路工作，還有幾個(gè)比敘利奧小的兒女。父親最愛(ài)敘利奧，一家人過(guò)著清苦的生活。

Sulio is a 12-year-old in the fifth grade of primary school. His father worked on the railway and had a few younger children. My father loves sulio most, and my family lives a miserable life.

最近，父親接了一些簽條來(lái)抄寫。敘利奧想替父親抄寫，父親不答應(yīng)。敘利奧不再請(qǐng)求父親，等父親休息后起來(lái)替父親工作，由于睡眠不足，白天經(jīng)常打盹兒。父親卻一而再再二三地誤解敘利奧。敘利奧被誤解后，總是下決心要停止工作，但是為了父親為了家庭他又繼續(xù)工作。父親到最后竟然不管他，他的身體也越來(lái)越弱。終于有一天，父親知道真相，請(qǐng)求敘利奧原諒，也更愛(ài)敘利奧。

Recently, my father received some autographs to copy. Sulio wanted to copy for his father, but his father refused. Shulio no longer asked his father to work for him after he had a rest. Due to lack of sleep, he often dozed off during the day. His father misunderstood him again and again. After being misunderstood, he always made up his mind to stop working, but he continued to work for his father and his family. At the end of the day, my father didn't care about him, and he was getting weaker and weaker. Finally one day, my father knew the truth and asked for his forgiveness and love.

點(diǎn)評(píng)：

Comment:

1.文章主旨明確，內(nèi)容完整，描述了小主人公偷偷幫父親抄簽條被誤解，最終父親明白了事實(shí)真相的整個(gè)事件的核心內(nèi)容。

1. The main idea of the article is clear and the content is complete. It describes that the little hero secretly helped his father copy the signature slip, which was misunderstood. Finally, the father understood the core content of the whole event.

2.語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔明了，邏輯性強(qiáng)，如保留對(duì)家庭成員的介紹、父親對(duì)敘利奧原本耳朵愛(ài)及生活的清苦，就為身為長(zhǎng)子的敘利奧為何引發(fā)“抄簽條事件”，承受著的巨大心理壓力埋好了伏筆。將父親的多次誤解及種種表現(xiàn)用“一而再再二三”來(lái)體現(xiàn)，可謂精妙準(zhǔn)確。文章結(jié)尾更是簡(jiǎn)明扼要。

2. The language is concise and logical. For example, keeping the introduction of family members, the father's original love for sulio's ears and the hardships of life, it foreshadows why sulio, as the eldest son, caused the "scribing event" and the huge psychological pressure he was under. It can be said that it is exquisite and accurate to use "one after another, two or three" to reflect the father's many misunderstandings and various performances. The end of the article is more concise.