我們總站在富足的地方憫惜貧窮，總躺在安全的地方怒斥邪惡，總在五十步笑百步后呼喚遠(yuǎn)離冷漠，總在血痕淡去后才忙著計(jì)算生命的價(jià)值。

We always stand in the rich place to pity the poor, always lie in the safe place to denounce the evil, always call to stay away from indifference after 50 steps of laughing, always busy calculating the value of life after the blood trace is gone.

于是，我們俯身憐憫的姿態(tài)傷害了別人的自尊。

As a result, our pitying posture hurts other people's self-esteem.

每次災(zāi)難過后，都有太多的人爭先領(lǐng)養(yǎng)孤兒；當(dāng)這片熱潮過去，又有太多的孤兒陷入苦難。據(jù)心理學(xué)家分析，領(lǐng)養(yǎng)孤兒要考慮自己的經(jīng)濟(jì)狀況，家庭氛圍要與孩子原先的家庭相似，教育方式、家長性格都要與孤兒相適宜。但是，太多的人僅憑自己一腔熱血，用熱心換回的卻是家庭的分裂。孩子們再次面臨家園破碎的痛苦，傷害再次打擊無辜孩子柔弱的心靈，善良由甜蜜變?yōu)榭酀?/p>

After every disaster, there are too many people competing to adopt orphans first; when this upsurge passes, there are too many orphans in distress. According to the analysis of psychologists, the adoption of orphans should consider their own economic situation, the family atmosphere should be similar to the original family of children, and the education mode and parents' personality should be suitable for orphans. However, too many people only rely on their own cavity of blood, with enthusiasm in exchange for the division of the family. The children once again face the pain of the broken home, the hurt strikes the weak heart of the innocent children again, and the kindness changes from sweet to bitter.

于是，我們用沸騰的熱血燙傷了他人的肉體。

So, we scalded others' bodies with boiling blood.

2008年奧運(yùn)會是我們中國人的奧運(yùn)，舉國歡慶，氣氛火熱，圣火傳遞，同一世界，同一夢想。但是，不和諧的色彩也玷污了奧運(yùn)火紅的火炬和綠色的橄欖枝。據(jù)報(bào)道，8歲孩童用55天時(shí)間完成抵京“馬拉松式”的賽跑；10歲孩子捆綁雙臂在激流中前行；8歲女孩在父親陪同下步行3000多千米到達(dá)首都北京……這些行為引起中國甚至世界媒體的關(guān)注，其中不乏外國媒體以此對中國奧運(yùn)的詆毀。不實(shí)評論須全力抵制，但也不可否認(rèn)，這是“畸形奧運(yùn)熱”。我們要舉辦一個理性的奧運(yùn)，就需要以理性的行為作為支撐。我們的熱情不該由火熱的激情變得瘋狂。

The 2008 Olympic Games is our Chinese Olympic Games. The whole country celebrates, the atmosphere is hot, the torch is delivered, the same world, the same dream. However, the disharmonious color also defiled the Olympic red torch and the green olive branch. It is reported that 8-year-old children spent 55 days to complete the "marathon" race to Beijing; 10-year-old children bound their arms and walked in the torrent; 8-year-old girls walked more than 3000 kilometers to the capital Beijing accompanied by their father These behaviors have attracted the attention of Chinese and even the world media, among which there are many foreign media to slander the Chinese Olympic Games. False comments must be resisted, but it is undeniable that this is "abnormal Olympic fever". If we want to hold a rational Olympic Games, we need to support it with rational behaviors. Our enthusiasm shouldn't go crazy from hot passion.

甚至，我們在用熱血燙傷他人肉體時(shí)，也燙傷他人的心靈。

Even when we burn someone's body with hot blood, we also burn someone's mind.

2008年5月12日汶川大地震發(fā)生后，我們以最迅速、最團(tuán)結(jié)的行動援救了太多的生命，我們贏得了世界的尊重。無數(shù)的閃光燈聚焦四川，閃爍著無數(shù)動人感人的故事，但也刺傷了災(zāi)區(qū)人們的瞳眸。被成功救援的孩子本是幸運(yùn)的，但有記者為了采訪，一遍遍喚起他們沉痛的回憶，孩子失聲痛哭，大人們也泣不成聲；有些熱心的志愿者毫無救災(zāi)意識卻前往災(zāi)區(qū)，雖懷有一顆熾熱之心實(shí)際卻是給災(zāi)區(qū)添亂。不正確的救援動作，不完善的服務(wù)行為，不合理的安慰幫助，帶給災(zāi)區(qū)人民的是“二次傷害”。我們發(fā)現(xiàn)，善良由本意的撫慰變成了利劍。

After the Wenchuan earthquake on May 12, 2008, we rescued too many lives with the quickest and most united action, and we won the respect of the world. Countless flash lights focused on Sichuan, flashing countless touching stories, but also stabbed the eyes of people in the disaster area. The children who were successfully rescued were lucky, but some reporters, in order to interview them, recalled their painful memories over and over again. The children cried and the adults cried. Some enthusiastic volunteers went to the disaster area without any awareness of disaster relief, although they had a fervent heart, they actually caused chaos to the disaster area. Incorrect rescue actions, imperfect service behaviors and unreasonable comfort and help bring "secondary injury" to the people in the disaster area. We find that kindness has changed from comfort to sword.

中華民族是堅(jiān)毅、熱情、善良的民族。當(dāng)我們挺過洪水、挺過“非典”，挺過不法分子對祖國的分裂和對奧運(yùn)的褻瀆，我們也必將挺過慘烈的汶川大地震，成功地舉辦一屆奧運(yùn)盛會。

The Chinese nation is a nation of perseverance, enthusiasm and kindness. When we survive the floods, the SARS, the split of the motherland and the desecration of the Olympic Games by lawbreakers, we will also survive the devastating Wenchuan earthquake and successfully hold an Olympic Games.

但我們需要更多的思索和行動，需要站在別人的角度理性而全面地看問題。讓“愛人之心”深入我們的血液，讓我們永葆善良的甜蜜，為善良保鮮，使它不褪色，不變質(zhì)，不變味。

But we need more thinking and action, and we need to see things rationally and comprehensively from the perspective of others. Let "the heart of love" go deep into our blood, let us keep the good sweet forever, keep the good fresh, make it not fade, not go bad, not change the taste.

【名師點(diǎn)評】

[comments on famous teachers]

這是一篇很有見地的思想評論，充分體現(xiàn)出作者對社會生活的關(guān)注與可貴的理性思維。從結(jié)構(gòu)上看，全文呈“總—分—總”式，主體部分的層次劃分雖未必嚴(yán)密(更好的處理可能是把第一層放到最后)，但它緊扣了三大熱點(diǎn)——僅憑一腔熱血領(lǐng)養(yǎng)孤兒、“畸形奧運(yùn)熱”以及汶川地震后某些“燙傷他人肉體”甚至“燙傷他人的心靈”的“善舉”。這些事件多為人們所關(guān)心、所熟悉的最“熱”的時(shí)事，讀者很容易將作者的論述與自己的認(rèn)識進(jìn)行對比、印證和分析，從而獲得有益的啟迪。這樣一來，文章的針對性和現(xiàn)實(shí)意義就特別強(qiáng)。?文中的剖析冷靜、沉穩(wěn)而不乏鋒芒(比如“雖懷有一顆熾熱之心實(shí)際卻是給災(zāi)區(qū)添亂”)，遣詞造句洗練、樸實(shí)而富于辯證色彩(比如“不實(shí)評論須全力抵制，但也不可否認(rèn)，這是‘畸形奧運(yùn)熱’”)，讀來既有很強(qiáng)的說服力，又能激起讀者的共鳴。?把握事物的外部聯(lián)系和表面特征，是認(rèn)識的開始，但是，認(rèn)識不能僅僅停留在表面現(xiàn)象上。要想把認(rèn)識導(dǎo)向深入，還需要進(jìn)一步探求事物的內(nèi)在特征、本質(zhì)屬性，由感性認(rèn)識上升到理性認(rèn)識。為此，動筆寫作前需仔細(xì)審度，深入探究，不可貿(mào)然作出判斷。

This is a very insightful ideological review, which fully reflects the author's attention to social life and valuable rational thinking. In terms of structure, the whole paper is in the form of "total score total". Although the level division of the main part may not be strict (better treatment may be to put the first level to the last), it closely follows the three hot spots - adoption of orphans with only one cavity of blood, "abnormal Olympic fever" and some "good deeds" of "scalding others' bodies" or even "scalding others' hearts" after Wenchuan earthquake. Most of these events are the most "hot" current events that people are concerned about and familiar with. Readers can easily compare, confirm and analyze the author's statements with their own understanding, so as to obtain useful enlightenment. In this way, the pertinence and practical significance of the article is particularly strong. "The analysis in the article is calm, steady and sharp (for example," although holding a hot heart, it actually adds chaos to the disaster area "), the words and sentences are concise, simple and full of dialectical color (for example," false comments must be fully resisted, but it is also undeniable that this is "abnormal Olympic fever"). The reading is not only persuasive, but also can arouse readers' resonance. ". It is the beginning of cognition to grasp the external relations and surface features of things, but cognition cannot only stay on the surface phenomenon. In order to deepen the direction of knowledge, we need to further explore the internal characteristics and essential attributes of things, from perceptual knowledge to rational knowledge. For this reason, before writing, you need to carefully examine and deeply explore, and you can't make a rash judgment.