有這樣一個故事：

There is a story:

一位母親第一次參加家長會，幼兒園的老師說：“你兒子有多動癥，在板凳上3分鐘都坐不住?！被丶业穆飞?，兒子問她老師都說了些什么。她鼻子一酸，差點流下淚來。然而，她還是告訴兒子：“老師表揚了你，說寶寶原來在板凳上坐不了1分鐘，現(xiàn)在能坐3分鐘了。別的家長都非常羨慕媽媽，因為全班只有寶寶進步了?！蹦翘焱砩?，兒子破天荒地吃了一大碗米飯，而且沒讓她喂。

"Your son has ADHD and can't sit on the bench for three minutes," said a kindergarten teacher who attended a parents' meeting for the first time On the way home, her son asked her what her teacher had said. Her nose was so sore that she almost burst into tears. However, she told her son: "the teacher praised you and said that the baby could not sit on the bench for one minute, but now it can sit for three minutes. Other parents are very envious of their mother, because only the baby has improved in the class. " That night, for the first time, my son ate a bowl of rice and didn't let her feed it.

在第二次家長會上，老師說：“全班50名同學，這次數(shù)學考試，您的兒子排在第49名。我們懷疑他智力上有些障礙，你最好帶他去醫(yī)院檢查一下。”回去的路上，她流下了淚。然而，當回到家里，看到誠惶誠恐的兒子，她又振作起精神說：“老師對你充滿信心。她說了，你并不是一個笨孩子，只要能細心些、努力些，會超過你的同桌?！闭f這話時，她發(fā)現(xiàn)，兒子暗淡的眼神一下子舒展開來。第二天上學，兒子比平時哪天都要早。

At the second parents' meeting, the teacher said: "there are 50 students in the class. Your son is 49th in the math exam. We suspect that he has some mental disorders. You'd better take him to the hospital for examination. " On the way back, she shed tears. However, when she came back home and saw her frightened son, she perked up and said, "the teacher is full of confidence in you. She said that you are not a stupid child, as long as you can be careful and work harder, you will surpass your deskmate. " When she said this, she found that her son's dim eyes suddenly extended. The next day, my son went to school earlier than usual.

孩子上了初中，又一次家長會。老師告訴她：“按你兒子現(xiàn)在的成績，考重點中學有點危險?！彼首黧@喜地走出校門，告訴兒子：“班主任對你非常滿意，他說了，只要你刻苦努力，用功學習，很有希望考上重點中學。”

The child went to junior high school, another parents' meeting. The teacher told her, "according to your son's current performance, it's a little dangerous to take the key middle school exam." She pretended to be surprised and walked out of the school and told her son: "the head teacher is very satisfied with you. He said that as long as you work hard and study hard, you will have a good chance to enter the key middle school."

高中畢業(yè)，兒子把一封印有“清華大學招生辦公室”的特快專遞交到她的手里，邊哭邊說：“媽媽，我一直知道我不是一個聰明的孩子，是您……”這時，母親悲喜交加，再也按捺不住十幾年來凝聚在心中的淚水，任它打在手中的那只信封上。

After graduating from high school, her son handed over an express mail with the seal of "Admission Office of Tsinghua University" to her, crying and saying: "Mom, I always know that I am not a smart child, it is you..." At this time, the mother was sad and happy, and could not help but hold back the tears in her heart for more than ten years, letting it hit the envelope in her hand.

顯而易見，文中的母親是一位偉大的母親，是一位稱職的母親，如果沒有她一次次對兒子的表揚，沒有一次次對兒子的理解與信任，沒有一次次送給兒子信念，那么結果只能是兒子承受無言而苦痛的失敗。

Obviously, the mother in this article is a great mother and a competent mother. If she does not praise her son, understand and trust his son, and give him faith, the result can only be his son's failure to bear wordless and bitter pain.

可見，信念是人生的肩膀。這肩膀能夠擎起人生的大樹，在枝繁葉茂間，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)了肩膀創(chuàng)造的奇跡。

It can be seen that faith is the shoulder of life. This shoulder can hold up the tree of life. In the luxuriant foliage, we found the miracle created by shoulder.

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這是一篇感悟類的文章，作為一篇滿分作文。它有以下幾點值得稱道：

This is a sentiment article, as a full score composition. It has the following points to be praised:

一、立意不俗。作者能夠由一則故事來談“信念是人生的肩膀”，很不一般。

1、 A good idea. The author can talk about "faith is the shoulder of life" from a story, which is very unusual.

二、結構完整。故事是鋪墊，升華是議論部分，這個結構讓讀者一目了然。

2、 The structure is complete. The story is the foreshadowing, the sublimation is the discussion part, this structure lets the reader be clear at a glance.

三、材料新鮮。作者把一個小故事，演繹成與肩膀有關的話題，使得陳舊的材料變得新鮮。

3、 The material is fresh. The author turns a little story into a topic related to shoulders, which makes the old materials fresh.