如果你隨便找一個(gè)中學(xué)生，問他什么是對(duì)數(shù)，什么是洛侖茲定律，什么是原子核式結(jié)構(gòu)，他一定可以把這些東西給你講得頭頭是道，讓你驚嘆當(dāng)今青少年個(gè)個(gè)都是科學(xué)家的料。但是，你找個(gè)尖子生，問他在野外被蛇咬了怎么辦，他也許會(huì)搔搔腦袋瓜，苦想各類化學(xué)反應(yīng)式，然后淡茫地對(duì)你說聲“不知道”。那么，“青菜多少錢一斤？”“不知道！”“被子怎么疊”“不知道！”“為什么啥都不知道？”“也不知道！”

If you ask any middle school student what is logarithm, Lorentz's law and nuclear structure, he can tell you all these things, and let you wonder that all the young people are scientists. However, you find a top student and ask him what to do if he is bitten by a snake in the wild. He may scratch his head and think about all kinds of chemical reactions, and then say "I don't know" to you. So, "how much is a jin of green vegetables?" "I don't know!" "How to fold the quilt" "I don't know!" "Why don't you know anything?" "I don't know!"

這就是中國教育的一個(gè)現(xiàn)狀：對(duì)科學(xué)知識(shí)抓得狠，也把各類奧賽搞得紅紅火火，但卻似乎對(duì)常識(shí)的教育力度不夠。學(xué)校的課程包羅萬象，可以獨(dú)缺“常識(shí)”。學(xué)生們便因此被擱在高高在上的“象牙之塔”，只搞著高端學(xué)問。當(dāng)今中國要強(qiáng)國，靠的是飛機(jī)、大炮、火箭這些高科技，似乎就應(yīng)該給學(xué)生“喂飽”科技知識(shí)?！俺ＷR(shí)那些小事兒，何足掛齒，成大事者不拘小節(jié)嘛?！泵慨?dāng)看到這些言論，我真想拍案而起，高呼一句：“此言謬矣，別拿常識(shí)不當(dāng)干糧！”

This is the current situation of China's education: we should pay close attention to scientific knowledge and make all kinds of Olympic Games popular, but it seems that the education of common sense is not enough. The school's courses are all inclusive and can be short of "common sense". Therefore, students are placed in the tower of elephant's teeth, only engaged in high-end knowledge. Nowadays, China is going to be a strong country, relying on such high-tech technologies as airplanes, artillery and rockets. It seems that we should "feed" our students with scientific and technological knowledge. "Common sense, those little things, don't care. Those who become big don't care about small things." When I see these remarks, I really want to take action and shout, "this is a fallacy. Don't take common sense as food!"

常識(shí)是一門指導(dǎo)我們生活得更好的藝術(shù)。衣、食、住、行等日常行為，無一不需要常識(shí)的引導(dǎo)。我們現(xiàn)在洗衣煮飯等家務(wù)活可以由父母包辦，各種事宜可以由父母操勞，儼然一個(gè)個(gè)不問政事的小皇帝。但父母不能照料我們一輩子，長大后還是要靠自理。倘若不懂常識(shí)，將來豈不是要處處碰壁？難道還事事都找個(gè)電話問父母？而連自己都照料不好，生活一塌糊涂，又怎有心思搞學(xué)問？

Common sense is an art that guides us to live better. Common sense is needed to guide daily behaviors such as clothing, food, shelter and transportation. Now we can do housework such as washing, cooking and so on by our parents. We can do all kinds of things by our parents. We are like little emperors who don't care about politics. But our parents can't take care of us all our lives. We still have to take care of ourselves when we grow up. If you don't know common sense, will you run into trouble everywhere in the future? Do you still have to find a phone to ask your parents about everything? And even if you can't take good care of yourself and your life is in a mess, how can you be interested in learning?

常識(shí)也是科技的基礎(chǔ)?？茖W(xué)并不是“空中樓閣”，而是廣生于人們對(duì)身邊事物的實(shí)踐與探索。牛頓從蘋果落地的常識(shí)中總結(jié)出萬有引力定律；魯班從葉子會(huì)割傷手的常識(shí)中發(fā)明出鋸子。離開常識(shí)而空談高科技，就像蓋樓房不起地基，是靠不住的。

Common sense is also the foundation of science and technology. Science is not a castle in the air, but widely born in people's practice and exploration of things around them. Newton summed up the law of gravitation from the common sense of Apple landing; Luban invented the saw from the common sense that leaves can cut hands. Leaving common sense and talking about high technology is like building without foundation, which is unreliable.

由此觀之，在素質(zhì)教育制度中，增加常識(shí)的普及，是很有意義的。應(yīng)做到常識(shí)與科技知識(shí)兩手抓。但同時(shí)，我們還要培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的創(chuàng)新意識(shí)以及獨(dú)立思考能力，使他們能在平凡的常識(shí)中總結(jié)出科學(xué)規(guī)律，又或者讓他們大膽質(zhì)疑常識(shí)，不要囿于常識(shí)。當(dāng)年偉大的物理學(xué)家伽利略，正是在對(duì)常識(shí)的質(zhì)疑中提出了新的思想。歷史也證明了他的這一大膽質(zhì)疑是正確的。

Therefore, it is of great significance to increase the popularization of common sense in the quality education system. We should grasp both common sense and scientific knowledge. But at the same time, we should also cultivate students' innovative consciousness and independent thinking ability, so that they can summarize scientific laws in common sense, or let them dare to question common sense, not limited to common sense. Galileo, the great physicist of that year, put forward new ideas in the query of common sense. History also proves that his bold query is right.

常識(shí)是人們生存的基礎(chǔ)，是科技發(fā)展的基礎(chǔ)，其對(duì)于人的意義堪比干糧。別拿常識(shí)不當(dāng)干糧，用它來“填飽”學(xué)生的腦袋，用它來支起科學(xué)大廈的腰腹吧！

Common sense is the basis of people's survival and development of science and technology, and its significance to people is comparable to dry food. Don't take common sense as dry food. Use it to "fill" the brain of students. Use it to support the waist and abdomen of science building!

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點(diǎn)評(píng)人：鄧玉環(huán)華南師范大學(xué)文學(xué)院副教授

Reviewer: Deng Yuhuan, associate professor, School of Arts, South China Normal University

題目化用俗語，巧用比喻，生動(dòng)形象，吸引人。把“常識(shí)”比作“干糧”——基本的生存物質(zhì)，強(qiáng)調(diào)了“常識(shí)”的基本要義，題目與正文內(nèi)容相得益彰。

The topic turns to use the common saying, skillfully uses the metaphor, vivid image, attractive. Comparing "common sense" to "dry food" - the basic living material, this paper emphasizes the basic significance of "common sense", and the topic and the text complement each other.

全文圍繞“常識(shí)”作文，切合題意，中心突出，強(qiáng)調(diào)了普及生活常識(shí)的必要性。文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)，開頭針對(duì)教育界重“高端學(xué)問”的傳授，忽略普及生活常識(shí)的現(xiàn)象，呼吁社會(huì)不要輕視常識(shí)。然后從常識(shí)對(duì)日常生活的引導(dǎo)，常識(shí)是科技的基礎(chǔ)，以及需要質(zhì)疑常識(shí)三方面逐層論證，層層深入，文尾扣題，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。本文最突出的是語言表達(dá)具有形象性，生動(dòng)自然，有個(gè)人見解，感情真摯。

This paper focuses on "common sense" composition, which is suitable for the meaning of the topic, with a prominent center, and emphasizes the necessity of popularizing common sense of life. At the beginning of the article, it focuses on the teaching of "high-end knowledge" in education, neglects the phenomenon of popularizing common sense of life, and appeals to the society not to despise common sense. Then from the guidance of common sense to daily life, common sense is the basis of science and technology, as well as the need to question common sense, three aspects are demonstrated layer by layer, in-depth layer by layer, the end of the article is close to the topic, and the structure is rigorous. The most outstanding thing in this paper is that the language expression is vivid, natural, personal and sincere.

但本文的書寫不夠工整，對(duì)常識(shí)的表述還不夠精確，個(gè)別語句有瑕疵。

However, the writing of this paper is not neat enough, the expression of common sense is not accurate enough, and some sentences are flawed.