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　　IELTS Writing Task 2: the problem with 'difficult' language

　　A.雅思大作文：關(guān)于“高級(jí)”語(yǔ)言的問(wèn)題

　　One of the main messages that I try to communicate in my lessons is that 'difficult' words and grammar are not the secret to a high score. You don't need to be Shakespeare to get band 7, 8 or 9!

　　In fact, 'difficult' language often has a negative effect on people's scores. Instead of impressing the examiner, the 'difficult' language may be unnatural, inappropriate, or just incorrect.

　　【翻譯并解讀】simon反復(fù)重申，高級(jí)詞匯語(yǔ)法并不是雅思作文高分的秘訣。不是只有到了莎士比亞級(jí)別的用詞水平才能拿下7分，8分乃至9分。不是說(shuō)高級(jí)詞匯語(yǔ)法用在寫(xiě)作上不好，問(wèn)題是高回報(bào)意味著高風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。很多人的作文中的這些所謂的高級(jí)用法往往用得別扭，不當(dāng)甚至錯(cuò)誤，所以不但對(duì)拿下高分沒(méi)有幫助，反而是禍害了整個(gè)文章。

　　Look at these examples from Sunday's lesson. I've underlined the words that I think the students hoped would impress the examiner.

　　看看下面2句得不償失的炫技表達(dá)

　　1. If schools administered with any teachers, disorder and lawlessness would arise.

　　2. If uncensored commercials had been banned, the crime rate would be seized from rising.

　　All of the underlined 'difficult' words are either used wrongly or they seem strange in these contexts. It would be better to write the following versions:

　　這些詞匯要么使用錯(cuò)誤，要么與語(yǔ)境不搭!看看如果修改。

　　1. If schools were run without teachers, the behaviour of pupils would be much worse.

　　2. If violent commercials were banned, the crime rate would fall.

　　IELTS Writing Task 2: advice for different scores

　　B：對(duì)雅思寫(xiě)作不同目標(biāo)分?jǐn)?shù)的建議

　　Depending on what scores my students are aiming for, I give different advice.

　　If you are aiming for band 5, 5.5 or 6:

　　對(duì)目標(biāo)是band 5, 5.5 or 6的烤鴨

　　You can reach band 6 with fairly 'easy' language if your essay structure is good, your ideas are relevant to the question topic, and you write at least 250 words. Look through the writing task 2 lessons on this website to learn how to write introductions, main paragraphs and conclusions, and work on writing short, simple sentences to express your ideas.

　　When people get band 5 or below, it is often because they don't finish their essays, they go off-topic, they have no idea about good essay structure, or they try to use 'difficult' language and therefore make lots of mistakes. For bands 5 to 6, keep your essays simple and clear.

　　【翻譯并解讀】想到6，只要使用相對(duì)簡(jiǎn)明的語(yǔ)言，合理的文章結(jié)構(gòu)，觀點(diǎn)不要跑題，字?jǐn)?shù)復(fù)合要求。要學(xué)會(huì)基本的導(dǎo)入，主體，結(jié)論的寫(xiě)法，要學(xué)會(huì)盡量用簡(jiǎn)短明了的句子表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)。

　　If you are aiming for band 7 or higher:

　　對(duì)目標(biāo)是7+的烤鴨來(lái)說(shuō)

　　First, you need to do everything that I mentioned above: you need relevant ideas, a good essay structure, and you must write at least 250 words.

　　But to reach the higher scores, your essays need more 'depth'. You need to explain your ideas in more detail, using a wider range of vocabulary. At this level,good essay structure is not enough, and memorised linking phrases won't help either. Your focus should be on real content.

　　【翻譯并解讀】首先，你需要做到上述所提到的一切，這是基礎(chǔ)。之外，你的文章需要“深度”，你需要更詳實(shí)地解釋你的觀點(diǎn)，使用更為豐富的詞匯。在這個(gè)7+層面上，好的文章結(jié)構(gòu)遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)不夠，記再多的連接詞也是無(wú)濟(jì)于事。你的著重點(diǎn)應(yīng)該在于“有料”。

　　綜上，如果把雅思寫(xiě)作看成是練武。那么像模板，高分詞句等等一切外在的形式都是招式，而詳實(shí)有見(jiàn)地的觀點(diǎn)和邏輯周全的論證才是內(nèi)功。祝雅思寫(xiě)作早日學(xué)有所成，祝早日與雅思分手。

　　雅思寫(xiě)作解題思路之資歷重要還是社交技能重要

　　Some employers are giving more importance to people of good social skills, while others think good qualifications are more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.現(xiàn)提供本篇雅思寫(xiě)作解題思路供大家參考。

　　雅思寫(xiě)作解題思路之支持前者

　　Qualification equals ability to a large extent, and expertise generally determines the quality of service, e.g. doctors, programmers, engineers, etc.

　　Some may say a few people without qualification can also become useful talents. But to ensure the efficiency of recruitment, e.g. those held by large scale enterprises, conducting employment based on the qualifications of candidates is proven advisable, especially in the first round.

　　雅思寫(xiě)作解題思路之支持后者

　　In achieving many objectives, qualification cannot promise anything at all. For example, all managers have to be effective in communication and persuasion, which has little to do with their qualifications. Also, many job positions require excellent interpersonal skills, e.g. marketing, sales, business negotiation, etc. In those cases, degrees are virtually useless while experience bear much more weight.

　　Modern projects are often so complicated and challenging that instead of individual talents, excellent teamwork is more crucial. Therefore, knowing how to cooperate, i.e. a strong sense of cooperation is more helpful to both employees and companies.

　　雅思寫(xiě)作解題思路之更看重老人還是更看重年輕人

　　In some cultures elderly people are highly valued, while in some other cultures youth are more valued. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

　　支持前者

　　Old people are boasted of their experience and wisdom in handling complex situation. 公 司是否應(yīng)該讓老年員工退休以給年輕人機(jī)會(huì) ;政府重要職位是否由年輕人擔(dān)當(dāng)好 不好 ; 老齡化社會(huì)利弊; 年輕人失業(yè)(老年人的優(yōu)點(diǎn)就是年輕人的缺點(diǎn) ); 政府 資助年輕人

　　Old employees perform more proficiently in many professions (e.g. bank clerk, lawyer and doctor) which means they are more reliable. 公司是否應(yīng)該讓老年員工退休以給年輕 人機(jī)會(huì) ;政府重要職位是否由年輕人擔(dān)當(dāng)好不好 ;老齡化社會(huì)利弊 ;年輕人失業(yè)

　　(老年人的優(yōu)點(diǎn)就是年輕人的缺點(diǎn) ); 政府資助年輕人

　　Old people have encountered the twists and turns of life, and are hence more responsible and even--‐tempered (穩(wěn)重的). Whereas, the younger generation is normally considered immature. 公司是否應(yīng)該讓老年員工退休以給年輕人機(jī)會(huì);政府重要職位是否由 年輕人擔(dān)當(dāng)好不好 ;老齡化社會(huì)利弊 ;年輕人失 業(yè)(老年人的優(yōu)點(diǎn)就是年輕人的 缺點(diǎn) ); 政府資助年輕人

　　In many countries, the well--‐rounded welfare system has spoiled young people: the absence of living pressure leads to the immaturity of the youth (lack social responsibilities), resulting to prevalent adolescent misbehaviour, e.g. hatred to school, inadequate work skills, drinking under legal age, taking drugs, passive life attitude, and even anti--‐social behaviors such as

　　the riot in England last year. 公司是否應(yīng)該讓老年員工退休以給年輕人機(jī)會(huì) ;年輕人

　　厭學(xué); 年輕人失業(yè)(老年人的優(yōu)點(diǎn)就是年輕人的缺點(diǎn) ); 年輕人犯罪; 政府資助 年輕人;反社會(huì)行為

　　支持后者

　　Young people are more energetic and efficient, being able to take painstaking works of the society. In fact, the sound development of the younger generation can guarantee (確保) a

　　promising prospect (前景) of a country. 公司是否應(yīng)該讓老年員工退休以給年輕人機(jī) 會(huì);政府重要職位是否由年輕人擔(dān)當(dāng)好不好; 政府資助年輕人

　　Young people are more creative and flexible. In contrast, the old tend to have fixated mindset. 公司是否應(yīng)該讓老年員工退休以給年輕人機(jī)會(huì);政府重要職位是否由年 輕人擔(dān)當(dāng)好不好; 政府資助年輕人

　　When it comes to the cost of employment, young people are more economical to companies, because to them, the opportunity of development far outweighs salaries. 公司 是否應(yīng)該讓老年員工退休以給年輕人機(jī)會(huì) ;政府重要職位是否由年輕人擔(dān)當(dāng)好不 好; 政府資助年輕人

　　The ageing of society is a sticky issue: many governments had to up the retirement age because of the limited budget for pension, and entered a vicious circle (惡性循環(huán)), in which old people are forced to compete with the younger generation for the few openings, inevitably causing unemployment. 公司是否應(yīng)該讓老年員工退休以給年輕人機(jī)會(huì); 老齡化社會(huì)利弊

　　論據(jù)共享題

　　公司是否應(yīng)該讓老年員工退休以給年輕人機(jī)會(huì)

　　Companies should encourage old employees (55 years old) to retire, in order to give oppor tunities to the new generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　In some countries, it is illegal for companies to reject job applicants because of their age. To what extent do you agree or disagree it is a positive development?

　　政府重要職位是否由年輕人擔(dān)當(dāng)好不好

　　More and more young people hold important positions in government. Some people think it is not suitable but others think otherwise. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

　　老齡化社會(huì)利弊

　　The trend of the proportion of older people is increasing steadily. Is it positive or negative to society?

　　The survey shows that in many countries, the people are living longer but increased life expectancy has many implications for the aging individuals and for society as a whole. What are the possible effects of longer living for individuals and society? How can we solve it?

　　年輕人厭學(xué)

　　Many young people leave school with a negative attitude. Why does this happen? What do you think can encourage young people to have a positive attitude?

　　年輕人失業(yè)

　　A large number of young people cannot find a job after leaving school. What problems will youth unemployment cause for individuals and society? what measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among young people?

　　年輕人犯罪

　　Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. Why is this happening? Please give some solutions.

　　政府資助年輕人

　　The best way for a country to prepare the future is to invest more resources on its young people. What is the best way to spend resources? To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

　　反社會(huì)行為

　　Today there is a great increase in anti--‐social behaviors and lack of respect to others. What are the causes of this? Please offer some solutions.

　　雅思寫(xiě)作解題思路之人們過(guò)度消費(fèi)對(duì)社會(huì)造成的影響

　　Nowadays, people like to throw away damaged things and buy new ones while people in the past would always reuse them by repair. To what extent do you agree or disagree that this is a negative trend?

　　支持正方 人們過(guò)度消費(fèi)對(duì)社會(huì)造成的影響

　　The behaviour of throwing exhausts resources and triggers all sorts of pollution.

　　People with such habit are leading a wasteful life, which will result into unhealthy trend of life.

　　Those who keep buying will form a psychology of comparison and will even become shopping maniac.

　　The habit of reuse is environmentally friendly, and goes along with the idea of low carbon life.

　　As well as saving money, repairing improves people’s surviving skills.

　　A healthy mood of satisfaction can be maintained when one repairs a lot and makes only necessary purchase.

　　The habit of repeating consumption will probably attract sizeable social resources to production. If this became true, we would find ourselves in great difficulty, because repair

　　work would then be in short supply, and poor people would not be able to afford it, which would further induce an instable society.

　　論據(jù)共享題

　　人們過(guò)度消費(fèi)對(duì)社會(huì)造成的影響

　　Now people are consuming more and more products. Is it good or bad for the economy and the society?

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