托福寫作考試中，我們要寫完兩篇文章，其中一篇是綜合寫作，另外一篇是獨立寫作。今天小編給大家?guī)砹送懈懽飨葮?gòu)思再寫作節(jié)省寫作時間,希望能夠幫助到大家，一起來學(xué)習(xí)吧。
托福寫作先構(gòu)思再寫作節(jié)省寫作時間
一.如何構(gòu)思文章
其實想必絕大多數(shù)上過輔導(dǎo)班的考友們都知道托福作文就是傳統(tǒng)的，龍頭鳳尾豬肚子，這樣的寫作方式。第一段表明自己的觀點，然后接下來每一段一開始給出分論點，最后一段進行總結(jié)，就這么簡單。但是實際上，這是我們想的方向不對，總是在向很宏觀的想。這里的訣竅就是向細(xì)分領(lǐng)域想!當(dāng)我們總是在想建筑對社會很好的時候，我們就是會很想象到理由以及例子，但是如果我們想得很細(xì)的時候，就發(fā)現(xiàn)好說了，比如我們可以說趙州橋，既有實用價值，也有觀賞價值。這就言之有物了!這是第一，減少構(gòu)思的過程的時間，靠細(xì)分領(lǐng)域。
二.如何具體地表達(dá)出來
在托福獨立寫作考試中，如果使用模板可以為你節(jié)約很多的時間。也能幫助你快速地展開表達(dá)文章。如果按照你的文章字?jǐn)?shù)是400字來算，那么你的文章中可能會有40-50個句子。如果你把這40-50個句子都排成編號，從第1個句子到40個句子，也就是從文章的第1句話到最后1句話，你都知道要寫什么，并且知道要怎么去寫，甚至是每個句子你都有很漂亮的句式，這樣寫出來的作文還怕得不到高分嗎?再比如，這40-50個句子有一半都是固定的句式 ，那么就形成了自己的寫作套路，那么就不用擔(dān)心文章寫不完了。
想要快速寫出文章，也可以靠多做中譯英的翻譯練習(xí)，也會有所改進。比如說，我們可以用一些網(wǎng)站上內(nèi)容將我們自己的作文按照對方地道的原文進行修改，這樣的方法，通過大量的進行中譯英的轉(zhuǎn)換，來增加我們的熟練度，這樣就可以逐步削減我們的思考怎樣表達(dá)的時間。
托福考試作文獨立寫作范文：小學(xué)生應(yīng)多學(xué)科技嗎
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: primary schools should spend more time on teaching young students (5-11years old) technology (like computer) than teaching music and art.
托福寫作范文參考:
The question of “ what is the most important subject or skill the elementary schools should teach? ” has never failed to attract attention from educators, school administrators and even politicians especially when it comes to subjects like technology, or music and art. Some argue that school should spend more time teaching technology than music and art. Personally, I am not in favor of this position based on the following reasons.
Admittedly, with the advent of internet and state-of-art gadgets like laptop, tablets, being able to use computers skillfully is being considered as a valuable quality. However, early exposure to computers and other kinds of technological products might bring lots of risks and problems to kids’ future development. Recently research by National Society of Psychiatrists shows that exposure to computers at an early age leads to addiction to computers when they grow older and obviously spending too much time in front of the computer can pose a threat to kids’ health, to be more specific, it leads to neck problems, nearsightedness, backache and even childhood obesity. Moreover, instead of getting addicted to playing on-line games and watching meaningless videos, kids should have spent more time focusing on their academic study, or even learning how to appreciate artwork or music. Indeed, spending more time learning art and music not only benefits the kids, but also it is conducive the community as whole.
First off, learning art and music at an early age helps to develop creativity and make the kids more imaginative. Actually, lots of scientific research in the psychological field shows that early exposure to art and music not only boosts academic achievement but also promotes creativity, self-confidence and school pride; kids who spend more time in learning art and music end up having higher analytical thinking and reasoning skills than kids who don’t.
Additionally, spending more time teaching kids music and art can can benefit the whole community. Music and art are a very important part of people’s lives. They are necessary for people to express their emotions, like happiness, sorrow, and even anger regardless of cultural background, ethnicity, age and even gentle. It is very urgent to spend more time teaching kids knowledge about art and music since they bring change, facilitate innovation and help to unite the community. They are the reminder of the past and maker of tomorrow, they also help to convey ideas and different perspectives. More importantly, art and music have great cultural significance, by learning art and music kids will have a strong sense of cultural identity and sense of belonging to community, eventually the traditional values and culture can be passed down to the younger generation.
To conclude, it is more advisable to spend more time teaching kids art and music than technology since not only can art and music benefit the individual kid but also it benefits the community as a whole.
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(A/D) The government should offer internet access to all of citizens at no cost.
點睛
題目大意：政府應(yīng)該為民眾免費提供互聯(lián)網(wǎng)服務(wù)。此題較為簡單，思路也有很多。建議選擇不同意，即認(rèn)為政府不應(yīng)該為民眾免費提供互聯(lián)網(wǎng)服務(wù)，因為一方面會加重政府的財政負(fù)擔(dān)，另一方面會讓更多人上網(wǎng)成癮，進一步疏遠(yuǎn)人際關(guān)系。
寫作參考一:
With the advent of internet, people in growing numbers are getting addicted to logging onto the internet out of various purposes, which has aroused deeply social concern. Therefore, the issue of whether the bills of using the Internet should be paid by the government or the users themselves has been open to debate. In my opinion, it is more reasonable to require the individuals to cover the fee of internet usage, with the reasons as follows.
To begin with, the users of the internets are supposed to pay the bills in order to relieve the financial burden of government. With the popularization of the internet, the number of people going online every day has increased to a lot, which means that the money spent on the internet is tremendous. Such a large sum of money can do nothing but occupy a great propotion of the governmental expenditure, thus cutting down on the investment of government on other more pressing fields like improving the public transportation and eradicating the poverty. By contrast, if the fee of internet usage comes from the wallet of the individual, the situation will become totally different. To illustrate, the abundant financial resources of government saved by this practice can better facilitate the economic development and render the life of the mass more convenient and comfortable.
In addition, requiring the individuals to pay for the bill of internet access will help to establish better social relationship between people. As is common sense, with the wide application of electronic devices boosted by easy access to the internet, people especially younsters are indulged in the cyber or virtual world created by the social network and various Apps on the cell phone. Consequently, it is not uncommon to observe that when a group of white collars sit at a table in a restaurant waiting for their meals, they watch the screen of their smart phones instead of interacting with the guys near them, which greatly alienates the bond between them. In this case, the free use of internet will aggravate this situation to a large extent. However, if the fee of the internet usage is covered by the individuals instead of the government, many people will be reduce their time spent in surfing the internet in order to save money. As a result, the face-to-face communication will become more frequent and thus the closer and more intimate relationship between people will be set up.
Factoring the above listed reasons, it is safe to conclude that the government should not offer internet access to all of citizens at no cost, in order to relieve financial burden of the government and to build a better rapport between people.
寫作參考二:
With the advent of the information age, internet and advanced technological gadgets are becoming more and more accessible, actually they are now as important as basic necessities in life like water supply and electricity. When it comes to the question of whether government should provide free internet access to all citizens, personally I am in favor of this initiative based on the following reasons.
Admittedly, providing free internet access to the public in schools, shopping malls, tourist spots and even households might incur some financial burden to the city since the government has to invest in the infrastructure and networks and even dedicate staff members to maintain the operation, however, it is well worth the effort and financial resource to provide such service.
First off, internet now is an indispensable part of people’s lives, and we simply cannot live and work without it. Providing free internet service can make people’s lives more convenient and bring efficiency to working places. For example, college students can utilize internet to send emails to inquire professors about certain issues in the academics, use different kinds of online service to assist their study. Internet makes it possible for professors to involve multimedia in the their classrooms, making the class more interactive and engaging. Also, businessmen can capitalize on the internet and monitor various data like management cost, profit, asset and liability, ultimately they can avoid certain financial loss and make more profit. Generally, internet makes lives more convenient, citizens can use location based apps to find restaurants, museums, sports centers, etc. Apart from that, internet brings a more connected community and facilitates interaction between citizens and businesses. More importantly, a city with free internet access in public places will see its popularity boosted and attract people to move in or visit.
Additionally, providing free wifi access to everyone is a very conducive tool for empowerment and social engagement, shortening the gap between the rich and the poor, the underprivileged and the privileged. Actually, internet access, cell phone contracts, and data plan can be very expensive and not very affordable to people with lower incomes. Providing free internet service to these people gives them life changing opportunities, like job hunting, on-line course, and even health advice. Consequently, providing free internet service can be a great tool for empowerment and social involvement.
To conclude, providing free internet service to citizens has lots of benefits since internet makes people’s lives more convenient and brings efficiency to working places, more importantly, providing free internet service can be a great tool for empowerment and social involvement.
