在雅思寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中的第一點(diǎn)，寫作任務(wù)回應(yīng)情況要求考生對于就寫作任務(wù)中的問題提出充分展開的觀點(diǎn)，并提出相關(guān)的、得以充分延伸的以及論據(jù)充分的論點(diǎn)。下面小編就和大家分享助力提升雅思寫作邏輯思維，希望能夠幫助到大家，來欣賞一下吧。

做到這三點(diǎn) 助力提升雅思寫作邏輯思維

雅思寫作邏輯思維能力1. 事情的區(qū)分和類似 (differences and similarity)

論述一個(gè)事情的時(shí)候，要考慮幾個(gè)觀點(diǎn)是否有區(qū)分度，還是類似的，可以合并?

譬如說：容貌和性格是不同的觀點(diǎn);對于人的特點(diǎn)來說，脾氣和性格這兩個(gè)其實(shí)是類似的，只是說法不同，就可以合并。

描述一個(gè)事情的時(shí)候，如果信息表達(dá)出現(xiàn)很大的差異，這就不符合邏輯思維。譬如說：你在描述一個(gè)人的容貌，卻突然說他脾氣不好，這就是不合邏輯。

如果信息出現(xiàn)重復(fù)，也不符合邏輯。譬如說：“她很漂亮，眼睛很大，她非常漂亮，吸引很多人”，這句話里就出現(xiàn)了很多重復(fù)的信息。

雅思寫作邏輯思維能力2. 事情發(fā)生的前后順序(chronological order)

一般來說，我們描述事情習(xí)慣有先后順序，譬如說小時(shí)候，小學(xué)，中學(xué)，大學(xué)，成年等。

雅思寫作邏輯思維能力3. 事情的因果關(guān)系(cause and effect relationship)

不同事情中間可能有因果關(guān)系，并列關(guān)系，或者是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。譬如：

1. 我讀書，可以增加知識(shí)(因果關(guān)系)

2. 我讀管理的書，可以增加管理團(tuán)隊(duì)的知識(shí)，也可以增加管理項(xiàng)目的知識(shí)(并列關(guān)系)

3. 我讀書，但是很多知識(shí)在現(xiàn)實(shí)中不知道怎么使用(轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系)

當(dāng)你去認(rèn)識(shí)一件事情或者閱讀一篇文章的時(shí)候，你要帶著以上這些意識(shí)去梳理你所接收到的信息。

譬如說下面這段話：

馬云的成功和他的商業(yè)觸覺和個(gè)人的堅(jiān)持有很大關(guān)系。他在2016年中國財(cái)富榜上排名第二，是中國非常成功的商人。他的互聯(lián)網(wǎng)公司非常成功，富可敵國。他以前只是一個(gè)很窮的老師。很多人剛開始都覺得網(wǎng)絡(luò)是不可能成功的，網(wǎng)絡(luò)就是分享信息，怎么可能賺錢呢?馬云在2001年美國網(wǎng)絡(luò)泡沫爆炸的時(shí)候，融資很難，公司一直在倒閉的邊緣。最后，他不斷堅(jiān)持，公司獲得資金，一直生存下來。他發(fā)現(xiàn)美國的網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物很盛行，而中國的消費(fèi)者也會(huì)接受網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物。他的公司在競爭中脫穎而出，收入迅速提升。他自己工作中非常努力，聽說公司員工晚上加班到11點(diǎn)是常事。公司在很小的情況下，完成了很多工作，最終成功。

很多人閱讀這段話都不會(huì)有太大問題，大概清楚里面?zhèn)鬟f的信息。然而，從雅思作文的角度來說，這段話有很多問題。如果將這段話轉(zhuǎn)化成英文，讀者基本上看不懂?，F(xiàn)在我們將這段話重新進(jìn)行梳理。

1. 事情的區(qū)分和類似：

整段話事實(shí)上說了馬云成功的3個(gè)因素，包括中心句的商業(yè)觸覺，個(gè)人的堅(jiān)持，最后兩句話描述的勤奮。

事實(shí)上，這三個(gè)事情是不同的。觸覺是天生的敏感，堅(jiān)持是遇到了挫折繼續(xù)堅(jiān)持，而勤奮是不管遇到不遇到挫折，每天都勤奮工作。

2. 事情發(fā)生的前后順序：

這段話描述了四個(gè)時(shí)間，順序分別是：先是2016年，然后再說馬云的以前，然后說到2001年，最后是公司很小的時(shí)候。

這四個(gè)時(shí)間的順序并不符合我們的邏輯順序(也就是從以前到最近)。

3.文章的前后因果關(guān)系：

文章中有一句話，說馬云以前很窮，很多人覺得網(wǎng)絡(luò)不可能成功。這兩句話是沒有邏輯關(guān)系的。個(gè)人貧窮，不代表網(wǎng)絡(luò)不可能成功。

我們現(xiàn)在將這段話按照上面這三點(diǎn)進(jìn)行重新整理(reorganised & logically organised)

每一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)只討論和其相關(guān)的事情，描述過程中按照時(shí)間的發(fā)展順序，句子之前有因果關(guān)系：

馬云成功的第一要素是：商業(yè)觸覺。他發(fā)現(xiàn)美國的網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物很盛行，而他推斷中國的消費(fèi)者也會(huì)接受網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物。他的公司因此設(shè)計(jì)出網(wǎng)絡(luò)消費(fèi)的平臺(tái)，最終在競爭中脫穎而出，公司的收入迅速提升。

馬云成功的第二要素是堅(jiān)持：他以前只是一個(gè)很窮的老師。他創(chuàng)業(yè)的時(shí)候，很多人剛開始都覺得網(wǎng)絡(luò)是不可能成功的，網(wǎng)絡(luò)就是分享信息，怎么可能賺錢呢?他雖然資金很少，但是不斷堅(jiān)持。在2001年美國網(wǎng)絡(luò)泡沫爆炸的時(shí)候，融資很難，公司一直在倒閉的邊緣。他不斷尋找投資者，最終公司獲得資金，一直生存下來，并且成功。

馬云成功的第三要素是勤奮：他自己工作中非常努力，聽說公司員工晚上加班到11點(diǎn)是常事。公司在很小的情況下，完成了很多工作，最終成功。他在2016年中國財(cái)富榜上排名第二，是中國非常成功的商人。他的互聯(lián)網(wǎng)公司非常成功，富可敵國。

假如你寫一篇essay，題目是What contributes to the success of an Internet firm?

你將上面的3點(diǎn)一個(gè)個(gè)寫出來，就是很有邏輯的文章:

One factor contributing to the success of Jack Ma’s company is his exceptional business acumen. He noted the prevalence of online shopping in the US as early as 2005 and foresaw the upcoming E-commerce explosion in China. His company thus designed online shopping platforms, which eventually stand out from its competitors and earn considerable profits.

Perseverance is another factor. He used to be an English teacher who scratched a living, and when he set up a business, many people had no confidence in the Internet business’s future in China. He persisted with his course of action, despite having limited seed money. When the dotcom bubble burst in 2001, the company was on the verge of bankruptcy due to the lack of capital. The company secured external funding and survived, because of his ongoing search for investment. It was his persistence that kept the company alive until it could thrive and rise to prominence.

The third factor is the commitment to work. Jack Ma is well-known as a hardworking entrepreneur, and it has been said that employees of his company have beecn accustomed to working until late at night. This explains why the company could achieve more than its competitors when it was small in size. In 2016, he is the second richest man in China, and the wealth created by his business empire can overshadow that of a country.

從上面的例子可以看出，提升雅思作文的邏輯思維要基于：1. 提升閱讀的邏輯思維 ;2. 提升信息梳理和整理的邏輯思維。

雅思寫作Task2社會(huì)類考官范文

Write about the following topic:

In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old peoples where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care.

Who should be responsible for our old people?

Model Answer:

Many old people in Britain, after a lifetime of hard work and the toil of bringing up children, are put into homes for the elderly by their families. There, they are looked after by professional nurses, and this is sometimes at the expense of the government. However, this situation has raised controversy about whether we extend to our elders the care and respect they deserve.

The critics of this system say that it is the duty of the family to look after its senior members in the years when they are no longer able to work. They point out that in retirement homes old people tend to feel useless and unwanted by their family members, who seldom come to see them. In addition, there is evidence that younger people benefit from the experience and wisdom of older people who live with them on a daily basis.

On the other had, those who support the system say that retired parents can be a burden to young families. Not only is it expensive to support old people who have little or no income, but the fact that old people are often ill and need a great deal of looking after can be too much for their busy children.

In my opinion, neither side is completely right. Old people in good health and with enough finances to support themselves can be a great help to their children. For instance, they can look after their grandchildren while children are out at work. On the other had, sick and penniless old people are better off being looked after in retirement homes at government expense.

雅思寫作Task2社會(huì)類考官范文

Write about the following topic:

Children who are brought up in the family that do not have a lot of money are better prepared to deal with problems when they become adults than children who are brought up by wealthy parent.

Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Model Answer:

Over the past few decades, along with growing interest in child education, people's attention to the family environment where a child is brought up has also significantly increased. Some people have begun to feel that a child who has grown up in a poor family tend to be better prepared to deal with problems. In my opinion, however, family environment alone does not much influence a child's ability to solve problems.

A child who was born into a poor family would have had more situations where they had to solve a problem or make a decision on their own. This is because in most unfortunate families, both parents are usually working and children are put into situations where they have to take care of themselves. By contrast, due to their wealth, rich children can experience and learn things that unfortunate children cannot. For example, they usually go to the best schools and receive a higher education there, which prepares them better for solving problems in their life.

However, few would disagree with the fact that each individual is different. That is, problem solving skills come more from life experience. That is, the more a person experiences in life, the more they can use these experiences to adjust, to adapt and to solve problems they encounter. Personality also can be a factor in dealing with problems. A person who is optimistic, outgoing, confident and open-minded can look at and solve problems more effectively.

As discussed above, nature and nurture have an equal influence on a child's ability to face challenges. Parents should spare no effort to figure out how they can help their children to be independent. I hope that in the future the next generation will grow up as mature citizens.