托福作文之前介紹過要有一個(gè)好的文筆，但是這里提醒大家的是新托福寫作不要過度賣弄自己的句子，今天小編給大家?guī)硗懈Ｗ魑膶懽饕莆蘸枚取?，希望能夠幫助到大家，下面小編就和大家分享，來欣賞一下吧。

托福作文寫作要掌握好度

當(dāng)我們說到托福寫作技巧中句式多樣性的時(shí)候，我們最常想到的就是兩點(diǎn)，第一點(diǎn)，這是好像一直都與我絕緣，我們最常寫的就只有定語從句和賓語從句，第二點(diǎn)，所謂句式的多樣性，貌似只要把句子寫長(zhǎng)了，句子就有多樣性了。如果我們喜歡賣弄文字的話，其實(shí)大可以說短句不見得句子多樣性就不好，長(zhǎng)句不見得句子多樣性就好。但是托福作文句子長(zhǎng)本身就是更有空間來承載更多的可能性，這里自然也就包括句子的多樣性。如果句子短的話，可用空間就少，想增加多樣性難度就會(huì)偏高，這是不可否認(rèn)的。

但是，這并不意味著句子單純的長(zhǎng)就是好事，其實(shí)簡(jiǎn)單來說，新托福寫作中我們會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)高分作文句子的長(zhǎng)度大多是會(huì)控制在2行以內(nèi)，換句話說，如果一篇托福作文之中有1-2句超過了2行，是可以的，但是如果有5句以上都超過了2行，在別人看的時(shí)候，有可能就會(huì)覺得過于復(fù)雜難懂了，這個(gè)度是要把握好的。

接下來就是我們句式多樣性的主菜了，也就是到底哪些元素會(huì)增加句子的多樣性呢?這就要分為兩大塊，第一大塊是替換和改寫句子里面的某些詞來實(shí)現(xiàn)的，另外一部分，則是要重寫整個(gè)句子才能實(shí)現(xiàn)的。

當(dāng)然第一塊是最好做的，我們不妨先來看第一部分。其實(shí)第一部分，可以包括如下幾個(gè)部分，分別是：定語從句，非限定性定語從句，賓語從句，同位語，介賓結(jié)構(gòu)，并列結(jié)構(gòu)，固定搭配，以及地道的表達(dá)方式。我們可以看一下作文巨講堂里面的句子。

學(xué)生綜合英語素質(zhì)的提升，取決于自身的英語基本功底，從聽、說、讀、寫各方面全方位的提高。詞匯，語法，語言理解能力均衡發(fā)展，是將來考試測(cè)試的重點(diǎn)。綜合英語系列課程選用了當(dāng)前最優(yōu)秀的引進(jìn)教材，采用國(guó)際流行的教學(xué)模式，深度剖析英語作為第二語言學(xué)習(xí)的特點(diǎn)，選取當(dāng)下的熱點(diǎn)話題，讓學(xué)生在學(xué)習(xí)過程中也能豐富視野，為將來的留學(xué)做好充足的準(zhǔn)備。

聽說教程的教材選用了《朗文當(dāng)代聽說教程》，閱寫教程的教材選用了《積極英語閱讀教程》，兩套教程相輔相成，采用進(jìn)階式的編排方式，內(nèi)容詳實(shí)，題材豐富。對(duì)于那些沒有出國(guó)打算，只是想提升英語的同學(xué)來說，也是非常契合的。

綜合英語系列課程共分三個(gè)階段：綜合英語基礎(chǔ)階段;綜合英語提升階段以及綜合英語強(qiáng)化階段。通過系統(tǒng)的綜合英語課程學(xué)習(xí)，學(xué)生可以全面提升自己的英語水平，充分為將來的雅思，新托福以及SAT考試打下堅(jiān)實(shí)的基礎(chǔ)。教程里面的詞匯，語法訓(xùn)練以及文章體裁都充分迎合目前的各類考試，學(xué)生也可以提前熟悉各類的文章體裁，提前了解國(guó)外學(xué)習(xí)生活的模式。

各個(gè)階段學(xué)習(xí)結(jié)束都有相應(yīng)的階段測(cè)試，用來評(píng)估學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)的進(jìn)度及效果，方便制定后續(xù)的學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃。

定語從句的代表就是：The difference is very obvious, so the modern people who have high technol.y would easier to be successful.里面的who have high technol.y

非限定性定語從句的代表：The standard is very wide and abstract, which are against the standard of the students’ score’s narrowness and rigidity.里面的which are against the standard of the students’ score’s narrowness and rigidity.

賓語從句的代表是：We have to admit that grandparents would not be able to give suggestions when we are in trouble with these new technol.ies or when we are in problems with specific characteristics of this generation.之中的that grandparents would not be able to give suggestions when we are in trouble with these new technol.ies or when we are in problems with specific characteristics of this generation.

同位語：Thomas Jefferson，the third president of the United States，may be less fa- mous than George Washington and Abraham Lincoln.里面的the third president of the United States，(本句話不取材于作文巨講堂)

介賓結(jié)構(gòu)的代表是： Also, in political negotiations, possessing of a solid oral expression would give the government more lead in negotiation and prevent possible misunderstandings when discussing specific details.這里的in political negotiations

并列結(jié)構(gòu)很重要，他的代表是：Internet, smart phones and computers are filled in every corner of our daily lives.他們的Internet, smart phones and computers。顯然并列結(jié)構(gòu)會(huì)讓人感覺論證很充分，很令人信服。

固定搭配的代表就是：For instance, the computer plays an important role in our life in terms of efficiency.里面的plays an important role。

地道的表達(dá)的代表則是Given the past, I had to go to the library and bury me a couple of days looking for the information on nuclear energy without the assistance of computers.里面的Given the past

前面這是第一部分，不過說實(shí)話，這還是簡(jiǎn)單易學(xué)的。但是有一些其實(shí)是要改變我們整體的思維方式，由此來改變我們的寫作或者說表達(dá)方式，其實(shí)這一點(diǎn)上是難度很高的。比如說這句話The extreme seriousness of desertification results from the vast areas of land and the tremendous numbers of people affected, as well as from the great difficulty of reversing or even slowing the process.

其實(shí)我們想一下就會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)，我們自己寫，很多時(shí)候不會(huì)這么寫，我們寫的很有可能是The desertification is extremely seriousness. Because the vast areas of land and the tremendous numbers of people was affected, as well as reversing or even slowing the process is very difficulty.這其實(shí)是難度很高的。但往往也就是因?yàn)檫@個(gè)核心部分，而決定了一個(gè)分?jǐn)?shù)段上的差別。

可以看出新托福寫作中關(guān)于托福寫作技巧的介紹比較重要的便是句式的運(yùn)用，一個(gè)漂亮的句子往往能讓你的托福作文上一個(gè)檔次，希望大家在這方面多下一下功夫

托?？荚噺?fù)習(xí)攻略：地道美式作文必備60詞

新托?？荚囎魑母叻衷u(píng)判標(biāo)準(zhǔn)之一，就是看你對(duì)于詞匯的駕馭能力，這里的“駕馭”指的不光指你的單詞量有多大，還包括你的詞匯用的有多么的準(zhǔn)確。這種準(zhǔn)確就像是東北人聽到了“俺們”，北京人聽到了“有范”，上海人聽到了“曉得伐?”，廣東人聽到了”點(diǎn)解“。換句話說，就是“地道”。

下面，為您提供托福作文高分詞匯60個(gè)，請(qǐng)注意，等號(hào)前面的是實(shí)際使用的，等號(hào)后面的是中國(guó)學(xué)生經(jīng)常使用的單詞。

aid=assist(幫助，援助)

alter=change or modify(改變)

ask=inquire(詢問)

assail=denounce(譴責(zé))

axe=dismissreduce(解雇，減少)

balk=impede(阻礙)

ban=prohibit or forbid(禁止)

bar=prevent(防止，阻止)

bare=expose or reveal(暴露，揭露)

blast=explode(爆炸)

begin=commence(開始)

bid=attempt(努力)

bilk=cheat(欺騙)

bolt=desert or abandon(放棄)

boost=increase(增加，提高)

check=examine(檢查)

claim=ause the death of…(奪去……的生命)

clash=disagree strong1y(發(fā)生分歧，爭(zhēng)議)

curb=control or restrict(控制)

dip=decIlne or decrease(下降)

ease=lessen(減輕，緩和)

end=terminate(結(jié)束，中止)

flay=criticize(批評(píng))

flout=insult(侮辱)

foil=prevent from(阻止，防止)

grill = investigate(調(diào)查)

gut=destroy(摧毀)

head=direct(率領(lǐng))

hold=arrest(逮捕)

laud=praise(贊揚(yáng))

lop=diminish(下降，減少)

map=work out(制訂)

mark=celebrate(慶祝)

name=appointnominate(命名，提名)

moot=discuss(討論)

mull=consider(考慮)

nab=arrest(逮捕)

nip=defeat(擊敗)

ease=lessen(減輕，緩和)

end=terminate(結(jié)束，中止)

flay=criticize(批評(píng))

flout=insult(侮辱)

foil=prevent from(阻止，防止)

grill = investigate(調(diào)查)

gut=destroy(摧毀)

head=direct(率領(lǐng))

hold=arrest(逮捕)

laud=praise(贊揚(yáng))

lop=diminish(下降，減少)

map=work out(制訂)

mark=celebrate(慶祝)

name=appointnominate(命名，提名)

moot=discuss(討論)

mull=consider(考慮)

nab=arrest(逮捕)

nip=defeat(擊敗)

slay=murder(謀殺)

soar=skyrocket(急劇上升)

spur=encourage(激勵(lì)，鞭策)

swap=exchange(交流，交換)

sway=influence(影響)

trim=reduce(削減)

vie=compete(競(jìng)爭(zhēng))

vow=determine(決心，發(fā)誓)

weigh=consider(考慮)

你想要的托福寫作模板都在這里

托福寫作模板一

A or B

將 原題復(fù)述___________________.When faced with the decision of A of B, quite a few would deem that______________________, but others, in contrast, believe A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence -A/-B, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity of _________is that_______.

The second reason can be seen by every person that________.In addition, these reason are also usable when we consider that_________.

There are some disadvantages in____________________另一種觀點(diǎn)的缺點(diǎn)__________.

In a word, _____________重復(fù)觀點(diǎn)句并縮寫理由__________________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that________.

托福寫作模板二

A or B

Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the idea of A meanwhile others prefer to B, from my point of view, it is more advisable to chose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

The main reason for my propensity for A is that___________________________. 就理由進(jìn)行解釋_____________________. For instance,____________________ .

Another reason can be seen by every one is that____________________________. 就理由進(jìn)行解釋___________________. For example,_____________.The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because_____________________________.Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of B, I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious. Such as________________.

In a word, ________________________________________________.So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to A.

托福寫作模板三

單一命題式

The answer of this statement depends on your own experience and life style. In my point view, buying computers is as important as, if not more important than, buying books. So it is sagacious to ____________.Among countless factors which influence the choice, these are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity for __________is that____________.

Another reason can be seen by every person is that________________.

Furthermore, ______________.In short,_________________復(fù)述前文中的理由______________.

托福寫作模板四

agree or disagree

Some people argue as if it is a general truth that a _____________________.But to be frank, I cannot agree with them. There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.The main problem with this argument is that it is ignoran to the basic fact that______________解釋本段中心___________.

Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe that______________.

What is more, some students are interested in__________.In a word, ________________.

托福寫作模板五

A or B

Some people prefer to A. others believe B. When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that______________, but others, in contrast , deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. There are numerous reasons why___________, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here.　　The main reason why I agree with the above statement, however, is that________________. Take ___________as example, ______________.

There is another factor that deserves some words here. Such as________________.

Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that______________. (examples:___________).

From the above you might got idea that I agree______________.(repeat the above three reason____________).So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to _______________.

托福寫作模板六

Agree or disagree

Some people prefer to A, others believe B, Nowadays some may hold the opinion that ________________, but others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree/disagree that_______________. MY arguments for this point are listed as follows.

One of the primary causes is that_______________________.

Examples_______________.But there is a further more subtle point we must consider. Examples.

What is more_______________. Examples___________.

General speaking, __________. Recognizing the fact that _______________should drive us to conclude that______________.

托福寫作模板七

A or B

In my point of view, A is as important as, if not more important than B. So it is sagacious to choose A. Among count less factors which influence A. there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.

The above point is certainly true if A is considered. For example,___________________.

Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that A is better than B. For instance,_______________.

It would probably not be too kindly disposed to the idea that B is not important . B________也好_________.

In a word, to choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of B, and neglect hte genuinely good aspects of A. For the reasons presented above, I strongly commit to the notion that A, but not B.

托福寫作模板八

A or B

When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that A, but others, in contrast, deem B as the premier choice and that is also my point. This quite different view is based on the propensity of following points.

We may look into every possible reason, however, fore most reason for B is ____________________. For example, ______________.

Also, ________________________.

This is arbitray to judge B according only to the excuse I mentioned in the above paragraph.

Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that________________.

Admittedly, __________________A也有好的地方______________.By he same token, however, ______________B更好____________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that_____________.

托福寫作模板九

A or B

When it comes to______________, Nevertheless, in my part, I prefer A rather than B as my inclination. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

I agree with the statement that _________without reservation since___________.

Naturally ___________.It can be given a concrete example__________.

A more essential factor why I advocate the argument of __________is that. Obviously ________________.Take the case of a thing that____________.

Furthermore, what is worth noticing fact is that ________________. This demonstrates the undeniable fact that__________________.

Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent,_______________此處論述B的1-2優(yōu)點(diǎn)___________.But if all these factors are contemplated, the advantages of A carry more weight than those of B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that_____________.

托福寫作模板十

A or B

____________ 改寫并復(fù)述題目____________. There may be by one or two disadvantages to ___________________; however, I believe that there are far more advantages. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

First of all, perhaps one disadvantages to ____________is that ______________.For instance, ____________. Another drawback to _____________involves the possibility that____________. For example, ____________.

Even though there may be one or two disadvantages to____________, the advantages far outweigh them. The main reason for my propensity for __________is that _________. For example_____________.

Another reason for my inclination for _____________ is that _________________. For example, _________________.

In a word, in spite of the fact that there may be a couple of disadvantages to _____________, I feel that the advantages are more obvious___________.重復(fù)優(yōu)點(diǎn)__________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that _____________.

托福寫作模板十一

A or B

____________ 改寫并復(fù)述題目____________.The advantages of B carry more weight than those of A. There are numerous reasons why __________, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here

One of the primary cause is that_______________________.

What is also worth noticing fact is that_____________________.

Furthermore, ________________________.

Although I agree that there may be couple of disadvantages to _________________.I fell that the advantages are more obvious_____________.

_______________, Given the factors I have just outlined, I can only say that___________________.

托福寫作模板十二

A or B

____________ 改寫并復(fù)述題目____________.When faced withe decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that ___________, but others, in contrast, deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence _________, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.

The main reason for my propensity for ________________ is that _____________.

Another reason can be seen by every person is that___________________.

The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because ________________________.

In a word, ___________________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that ____________________.

托福寫作模板十三

agree or disagree

Nowadays, some may hold the opinion that ____________________. But others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree that ____________. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.I agree with the statement that ______________________without reservation since ________________.

Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that________________.

In a word,_________________________. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that__________.

托福寫作模板十四

A or B

From my point of view, it is advisable to choose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

The main reason for my propensity for ____________________ is that ________________.

There is another factor that deserves some words here.In a word, ________________________. While it is true that the argument, I disagree hold a little bit of water, I think_______________.