好的開始是成功的一半,一個漂亮的開頭,往往是托福寫作成功的一半。今天小編給大家?guī)硗懈懽魅绾螌懞瞄_頭,希望能夠幫助到大家,下面小編就和大家分享,來欣賞一下吧。
托福寫作如何寫好開頭呢?
如何才能做到開門見山?我們可以采用以下幾種方式:
1. 采用統(tǒng)計數(shù)字引出話題,把問題呈現(xiàn)在讀者面前;
2. 提出有爭議性的問題,激發(fā)讀者興趣,使其積極參與討論;
3. 以新穎的觀點,吸引讀者注意力;
4. 呈現(xiàn)該話題正反方的觀點;
5. 引用名人名言、諺語等作為文章的開頭;
6. 對將要討論的話題進(jìn)行定義。
其次,要善于運用復(fù)合句,從而使引言段簡潔明了,開宗明義。下面我們將探討雅思與新托福各種題材和體裁文章引言段的寫作方法。 引用數(shù)據(jù)呈現(xiàn)討論的話題,說明問題的嚴(yán)重性或者重要性,引起讀者的關(guān)注。下面我們結(jié)合幾道雅思和新托福作文話題進(jìn)行實戰(zhàn)演練。
我們在寫關(guān)于體罰的話題文章時,可以這樣開頭:It is reported that a boy in Zhuhai was beaten to death by his father on Father“ Day. Ample evidence also shows that children who are frequently abused by their parents or teachers tend to be introverted, pessimistic, indifferent and even world-weary. Recently, there has arisen a fierce argument on whether corporal punishment should be abolished. Teachers, parents and experts take diverse attitudes towards this issue.(據(jù)報道,在父親節(jié)那天,珠海有個小男孩被老爸揍死了。充分的證據(jù)也顯示,經(jīng)常遭父母或老師虐待的小孩往往比較內(nèi)向、悲觀、冷漠甚至厭世。近來,關(guān)于是否應(yīng)該廢除體罰出現(xiàn)了一場激烈的爭論,老師、家長和專家各執(zhí)一詞。)
而我們在寫關(guān)于該不該禁煙的話題時,可以這樣開頭:A recent study conducted by Zhongshan University has found that the number of smokers has been increasing sharply over the past five years. Research findings also reveal that the incidence of smoking-related conditions has soared. As a result, the ban on smoking has been in the spotlight. (中山大學(xué)最近做的一個研究表明,在過去五年里,吸煙者人數(shù)急劇上升。研究結(jié)果同時顯示,吸煙導(dǎo)致的疾病發(fā)病率也急劇增長。因此,禁煙成了個熱點話題。
上述即寫出漂亮的托福寫作開頭段的方式,相信通過介紹多少打開同學(xué)的一些寫作思路,在平時的托福寫作練習(xí)中,可以嘗試一下上述的開頭方式,能給你帶來意想不到的效果,同時在練習(xí)中也可以尋找自己擅長的托福寫作開頭方式并堅持練習(xí)下去,已達(dá)到熟練。
托福寫作解析 必備的寫作技能
第一:掌握一定的語法基礎(chǔ)。新托福寫作對于學(xué)生的語法要求不會很高,在懂得主謂賓正常的構(gòu)句規(guī)則的基礎(chǔ)上,加上對各種從句以及幾個特殊句式(強(qiáng)調(diào)句、倒裝句)的運用,就足以應(yīng)付托福寫作。很多基礎(chǔ)相對來說薄弱的考生經(jīng)常會遇到的困境是:對英語的語法產(chǎn)生恐懼,因為不寫不錯,一寫就錯。這部分考生克服這個困難的辦法是:多去動筆寫,寫完了讓老師或者是身邊英語比較好的同學(xué)幫忙改,弄懂每一個托福寫作語法錯誤是為什么,切不可消極怠工,意志沉淪。
第二,理清完整的文章結(jié)構(gòu)。托福寫作通常是魚骨頭(Fish Bone)式結(jié)構(gòu)。開頭段+中間三段+結(jié)尾段。千萬不要小看這樣的結(jié)構(gòu),以為這樣的結(jié)構(gòu)過于簡單,過于八股。其實,新托福寫作考查的也就是考生是否會熟練運用這樣的結(jié)構(gòu)去表達(dá)自己對一個觀點的看法。
第三,需要多樣的語言語句。語言多樣性分為句式的多樣性和詞匯的多樣性。新托??荚囌f到底,還是在考查學(xué)生的語言能力。文章結(jié)構(gòu)就是一個人的骨架,那么剩下來的工作就是需要往這具空空的骨架中添加進(jìn)生動的血肉,這就是我們的語言了。新托福寫作考試對于考生的語言水平最基本的要求是沒有太多的語法錯誤,也就是考生所犯的語法錯誤不會影響到文章的理解。
托福寫作解析:高分需要注意的三個問題
一.英語基本功
在托福獨立寫作中,并沒有相關(guān)的閱讀和聽力內(nèi)容可以幫助考生組織自己的語言,考生在答題的時候能憑借的僅僅是自己的英語基本功。在考試中,很多考生因為對于詞匯和語法不熟悉,所以不能恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂迷~匯來表達(dá)自己的觀點,文章中的句子和句子之間邏輯的關(guān)系混亂。
建議:考生在備考托福寫作的過程中,首先要重視托福詞匯的備考,對于基礎(chǔ)比較薄弱的考生來說,要從四級詞匯開始背起,然后逐步過渡到六級詞匯和托福詞匯的備考。建議考生在備考詞匯的時候要制定一些背詞匯的計劃表,有步驟的去背誦。其次,考生要重視語法的積累,要重點掌握被動語態(tài),強(qiáng)調(diào)句型,非謂語動詞,從句的使用方法。
二.中式翻譯
英語畢竟不是我們的母語,很多考生在學(xué)習(xí)英語的時候習(xí)慣性的用中式思維來表達(dá)自己的觀點,比如很多考生用black society來表達(dá)黑社會的含義,用eight hang來表達(dá)八卦的意思。但是判卷的考官并不是中國人,考官并不明白考生真正想要表達(dá)的意思是什么,考生在托福寫作考試中,很容易因為這樣而出現(xiàn)低分的現(xiàn)象。
建議:針對有這種情況的考生,小編認(rèn)為,如果想要改變這種現(xiàn)狀,就一定要多聽多看。建議考生通過一些經(jīng)典的美劇比如《生活大爆炸》,《老友記》,或者是一些經(jīng)典的美國大片比如《阿凡達(dá)》,《風(fēng)月俏佳人》等等來增強(qiáng)對于英語中語境的熟悉程度,提升語感。
三.套路化明顯
很多考生在寫托福寫作的時候會背誦模板,在考試的時候,不管遇到了什么題目都生搬硬套的使用模板,這樣在考官判卷的時候,很多作文框架千篇一律,如出一轍,極大的降低了考生的分?jǐn)?shù)。
建議:建議考生在備考托福閱讀的時候,每天進(jìn)行英文寫作練習(xí),用英文來寫日記,在寫作的過程中增強(qiáng)自己的寫作能力。
托福寫作模板:擁有多項技能的人更成功
2016年托福寫作真題題目:
2016年7月3日托福獨立寫作題目:
People who develop different skills are more successful than people who develop one skill only.
托福寫作模板及參考答案:
托福寫作范文參考:
2016年7月3日托福獨立寫作范文
When it comes to the qualities of successful people, people varying in education background and experience tend to give distinctive answers. Some would argue that those who are successful should be versatile and excel in lots of skills like communication skills, leadership skills and even organizational skills while others believe that one who is exceptional in one area is more likely to be successful. I personally believe that a versatile person with various skill sets can be more successful.
Admittedly, as the saying goes Jack of all trades and master of none and there are rare cases where some people who are expert in only one field stand out. However, it is more common for versatile people with multiple skills to be successful because of the following reasons.
First off, people who are talented and versatile are more competitive and competent in their career, and they enjoy a better change to be promoted in a professional setting. Actually, a lot of positions require a combination of skill sets, such as paying attention to details, knowledge in a specific field and communication skills, etc. Indeed, more skills will give someone more chance to get promoted. For instance, if a computer programmer just knows how to write program and focuses only on the technical side of the job, chances are that he would never get promoted. On the other hand, if not only does the computer programmer have programming skills but also he is a genius people-wise, he might get a better shot to be promoted as a manager in charge of a team of computer programmers. Thus, he can enjoy more opportunities in his career.
Additionally, it is much easier for a versatile person with various skill sets to build rapport with people and make friends. It is self-evident that people with all kinds of skills will be very attractive and charismatic. A person who not only has professional knowledge in one specific field but also has people skills and leadership skills will be very popular and standing out among his or her peers. For instance, my friend Alex, a bright young professional working in the financial industrial. He was awarded the most valuable banker in his company because of his professionalism and dedication to serving the customers and clients. Not only is he successful in his professional life, but also he is an amateur violinist. Actually, he plays for a city choir to represent the community and go against other cities' choir. Such skills can be very useful when building up connections with people and thus he can expand his social network easily. Furthermore, he can use these skills to entertain his clients and customers on certain occasions and have their trust on him.
In conclusion, a versatile person with various skill sets can be more competitive and outstrip others in the workplace, eventually they enjoy better chance to be promoted. Another advantage of having multiples skills is that it can be much easier and readily for them to network and expand their social connections.(新東方 孟炎)
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