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gre考試滿分作文怎么搞定?

"Scholars and researchers should not be concerned with whether their work makes a contribution to the larger society. It is more important that they pursue their individual interests, however unusual or idiosyncratic those interests may seem."

這個gre考試題目分析起來是說學術目的的。作為一個scholar/researcher應該考慮的是自己的感興趣的領域所在而不是考慮是不是他們的研究成果是對整個大社會大環(huán)境有貢獻的。這個題目第一眼看起來好象似乎是有理的，但是想到很多時候很多科學家的成果實際是無意義的。美國不是有一個搞笑諾貝爾獎嗎?就是獎勵類似的研究的。雖然也是科學成果但是根本就沒有實際操作的價值或者對人類或者對社會根本就沒有意義的。

但是這個contribution在某些時候也可以引申到名利方面。從這個方面來講，這個題目是可以成立的。

對這個gre寫作考試題目進行進一步的分析，可以看出來題目里面有一個比較，非常明顯的比較，more來帶出來的，所以我們可以說這個speaker的觀點是很明顯的表明了自己是支持哪個方面的。

Should academic scholars and researchers be free to pursue whatever avenues of inquiry and research that interest them, no matter how unusual or idiosyncratic, as the speaker asserts? Or should they strive instead to focus on those areas that are most likely to benefit society?

拿問句來起頭，來質疑。脫離出了一般的解釋題目的開頭。雖然不是特別特別，但是還是讓人感覺比較的attractive。l strongly agree with the speaker, for three reasons.非常直白的陳述自己的觀點，同意speaker的觀點。

First of all,典型的連接詞，開始陳述觀點了。Who is to decide which areas of academic inquiry are worth while?又是一個問句，但是這個問句的作用和開篇的問句不同了，是引出來自己論證的第一個方面。Scholars cannot be left to decide.自問自答。

Given a choice they will pursue their own idiosyncratic areas of interest, and it is highly unlikely that all scholars could reach a fully informed consensus as to what research areas would be most worthwhile. Nor can these decisions be left to regulators and legislators, who would bring to bear their own quirky notions about what would be worthwhile, and whose susceptibility to influence renders them untrustworthy in any event.

gre滿分作文兩個否定句非常干凈利索的說出作者的看法，沒人有能力來決定什么是應該worth researching的。

Secondly, by human nature we are motivated to pursue those activities in which we excel. To compel scholars to focus only on certain areas would be to force many to waste their true talents. For example, imagine relegating today's preeminent astrophysicist Stephen Hawking——霍金我想就不用介紹了吧—— to research the effectiveness of affirmative-action legislation in reducing workplace discrimination. Admittedly, this example borders on hyperbole(夸張法).Yet the aggregate effect of realistic cases would be to waste the intellectual talents of our world's scholars and researchers. Moreover, lacking genuine interest or motivation, a scholar would be unlikely to contribute meaningfully to his or her "assigned" field of study.

這個部分舉例說明了，如果把學者或者科學家局限于某個特定的領域內的話會也會局限其施展自己的talents，是資源的浪費。而缺少動力或者興趣，人也無法完全發(fā)揮自己的talents用辨證的方法說出interest和contribution二者的關系。

Thirdly, it is "idiosyncratic" and "unusual" avenues of inquiry that lead to the greatest contributions to society. Avenues of intellectual and scientific inquiry that break no new ground amount to wasted time, talent, and other resources. History is laden with unusual claims by scholars and researchers that turned out stunningly significant——that the sun lies at the center of our universe, that time and space are relative concepts, that matter consists of discrete particles, that humans evolved from other life forms, to name a few. One current area of unusual research is terraforming——creating biol.ical life and habitable atmospheres where none existed before. This unusual research area does not immediately address society's pressing social problems. Yet in the longer term it might be necessary to colonize other plan in order to ensure the survival of the human race; and after all, what could be a more significant contribution to society than preventing its extinction?

要想獲得新GRE滿分作文，考生在平時多加練習寫作之外，還可以借鑒優(yōu)秀的范文以及背誦模板與核心句型。此外，多加練習邏輯性也是非常重要的，中國考生寫作文往往會出現(xiàn)一些邏輯性錯誤，而GRE寫作最看重的也是邏輯思維能力。

高分GRE寫作提綱舉例指導

23"Contemporary technology makes available many small pieces of factual information. As a result, people have become so preoccupied with bits of fragmented information that they pay too little attention to the larger issues and overall perspectives."

.同意

1、獲得更多信息后可以避免 being limited in thoughts

SARS 時期，全方位了解該事件的信息，virus; contagion; prevention; causes; risks

2、看到瑣碎信息后會引起興趣了解整體

Christmas; read the news about the prosperous holiday business; want to know more includig customs, origin, legends of Christmas;

3、為了避免被瑣碎信息 preoccupied，要學會區(qū)分和查找關鍵信息

學習新知識

23T "Contemporary technology makes available many small pieces of factual information. As a result, people have become so preoccupied with bits of fragmented information that they pay too little attention to the larger issues and overall perspectives."

現(xiàn)代技術使獲得大量細節(jié)信息成為可能。其結果是人們全神貫注于七零八碎的信息而很少去注意更大的問題和全局。

①access to great deal of information help people to get a wider view of an issue, thus help them prevent being limited in thoughts.

②in order to discrimitate between important information and trifle ones, people improve themselves in the ability to understand, analyse, compare and rationalize, which is very useful for them to get a better command of large issues ( need profound understanding and capability to deal with complicated cases)

③to prevent preoccupation by fragmented information, people should hold right view on information, not to assimulate all, but to percollate relevant ones from those needing only a glance.

高分GRE寫作提綱舉例指導

24"People in positions of power are most effective when they exercise caution and restraint in the use of that power."

.意

1、小心謹慎使用可以幫助更好理解權利，更有效使用權利

political leader 了解權利使用會帶來什么影響，制定有效計劃

increase taxation

2、沒有限制地使用權利容易 abuse power

Stalin Nixon

3、過于謹慎小心會難以發(fā)揮權利的作用，對管理和統(tǒng)治不利，降低效率

manager of a company; exercise power to fire incompetent or un disciplined employee

24T "People in positions of power are most effective when they exercise caution and restraint in the use of that power."

.者謹慎并有限度的使用他們權力的時候他們的工作才最有效力。

①絕對的權力會導致絕對的腐敗。如：Stalin.

②當當權者謹慎的考慮如何使用權力時，他們會更有效率。因為就如經濟學所說的，他們會在各種方案之中 trade off, 在有限的資源下選擇最優(yōu)方案。如：現(xiàn)在各種政府方案，甚至會引發(fā)商業(yè)等各界的參與，進行廣泛的競爭，對整個社會都是有益的

③但領袖們不可因為考慮審慎而被束縛了手腳。真正的政治家會因目標而選取自己的手段。如：Czar Peter, the blood-and- iron minister in Russia.反面例子：Sun yat-sen

2.1 people without caution and restraint tent to abuse the power they are granted

2.2 caution and restraint assist people to have better understand and make better use of the power

2.3 caution and restraint do not mean tying oneself up

高分GRE寫作提綱舉例指導

25"Anyone can make things bigger and more complex. What requires real effort and courage is to move in the opposite direction—in other words, to make things as simple as possible."

.意，但簡化之前也需要把事情先變復雜 deep understanding

1、當人們把事情弄得越來越復雜時，其實是沒有花工夫總結歸納

大家都可以把事情弄復雜，因為不需要歸納總結，許多事實、數(shù)據、資料堆在一起就顯得復雜了;這并不會對工作帶來好處，沒有效率、不清晰;需要 effort and courage把復雜的事情簡化，abstract the essence; make an outline; inform

市場調查，許多背景信息，調查結果關系復雜，重要的是把對公司有用的信息總結出來，如市場發(fā)展趨勢，消費者購買傾向

2、越是簡單明了的東西包含的智慧、努力、勇氣越多 簡單的東西背后包含了許多努力，把復雜的思想用簡單的方式呈現(xiàn)出來

excellent leader is one who can remain calm, seize the strategic point of the problem and give clear instructions when faced wi th complex alternatives. 計算機軟件的發(fā)展把復雜的事情變的簡單易處理，DOS需要許多命令調用程序，windows click the buttons

3、在簡化復雜事情之前需要花精力把事情弄得 bigger and complex

full-blown ;對復雜事物簡化后得到的事物可以包含主要內容，沒有經過充分深入分析某事物，直接用簡單的形式表現(xiàn)出來，其實是沒有經過思考

teaching; before present the knowledge in a clear way; easy to understand

analyze the relationship among all the knowledge objects, students' previous knowledge structure, ability in understanding; synthesize into a teaching plan which is somewhat complex but can be presented in an intelligible way

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ISSUE25

把事情變得復雜誰都會，難的是如何把事情變得簡單

1 我們的個人生活正在變得復雜;比如現(xiàn)在的 Audio player 功能越來越復雜，因為 manufacture不用費太多的cost就可以給它們加上 functions of radio ，displaying lyrics and electronic books reader; 人們健康的生活也被賦予了極多的限制，比如很多 specialists甚至鄰居大媽都叮囑我們吃這個可以提高什么含量，進行什么手術可以排除什么的 potential danger。

2 我們的社會的關系太復雜，我們每天生活的太累。比如我們現(xiàn)在的圣誕節(jié)，甚至已經變成了一種負擔，而不是簡單的節(jié)日;比如現(xiàn)在盛大而復雜的婚禮，變成了一場鬧劇，新郎新娘是小丑一樣。我們多么向往過去那些簡簡單單的生活阿。

3 簡單的世界需要勇氣和能力，比如蘋果的 shuffle，比如reform of official system。

ISSUE196

相比科技帶給我們的好處，它帶來了更多問題，這些問題可能威脅或者毀掉我們的生活質量

1 科技的迅速發(fā)展和極度膨脹，給我們帶來了很多煩惱。個個領域都出現(xiàn)了各種各樣的問題，這使得我們的生活變得不好。比如，先進的科技使得先進的武器成為可能，同樣是一個炸彈，現(xiàn)在的能比原來的多炸死幾萬人，我們的生活隨時都會隨著一聲巨響而消失;比如，互聯(lián)網的 virus，每年都有 billion dollars 的損失，并且極大的威脅到了我們的隱私，這使的我們在生活中不得不安裝大量的殺毒軟件并提心吊膽害怕自己的數(shù)據被 stolen。從這兩個例子來看，我們的生活正在被科技毀掉。

2 然而科技帶給我們更多的是好處。盡管很多人都在說科技的不是，但是沒有幾個人愿意回到過去落后的時代去生活。人們現(xiàn)在的生活因為科技變得方便和豐富多彩。我們想聽到我們親愛的聲音看得到她的容貌，永遠不再需要騎馬狂奔幾公里，因為我們有電話，有網絡視頻;甚至我們可以一踩油門就到了愛人的家門口;因為有了發(fā)達的醫(yī)學，我們不在因為骨折 fracture of bone 而終生殘疾，我們也不會因為家人或者朋友感冒而過分擔心;因為發(fā)達的電視，我們可以坐在沙發(fā)上跟隨國家地理頻道的鏡頭去旅游……從這個意義上來說，科技大大提高了我們的生活質量，這些提高遠大于它們帶來的問題。

3 我們也不要因為科技帶來的問題過分 pessimistic， 因為各種政府正在致力于解決這些問題。我們很高興的看到越來越多的國家簽署了禁止使用核武器條約，我們也很高興的看到越來越多的立法來限制企業(yè)對環(huán)境污染;甚至，越來越多的人參與到保護野生動物的行列中來?？萍疾皇悄Ч恚俏覀儎?chuàng)造的工具，好好運用，我們的未來是美好的，

25T "Anyone can make things bigger and more complex. What requires real effort and courage is to move in the opposite direction—in other words, to make things as simple as possible."

.每個人都能把事情搞大搞復雜。而真正需要努力的卻是相反的—-------即要把事情越簡單化越好

① 事情確實是越變越復雜了。原因：全球化、通信工具都使得人們之間的距離拉近，要解決一個問題要牽扯到很多人。現(xiàn)狀：政府機構越來越龐雜 Lending even more credence to th e statement is the so-called “big government” phenomenon. 、學科分類越來越多。

② 人們的解決方法是：簡化復雜的事情。A 一部分工作由電腦取代，如復雜的計算、存儲和數(shù)據分析。B 對工作進行分類，每個人只做一部分，專攻。

③ 把事情簡單化從表面來說容易，實際很難，需要對整個事情有通盤的考慮，并能分清主次。to make things simple means to have profound understanding of the whole matter, to discriminate between essence and peripherals, and ulti mately to refine the big and complex body of knowledge into principles