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寫作老師經(jīng)驗(yàn)長談 如何提升雅思寫作水平及如何自測之綜述篇

寫作老師背景介紹：

中國農(nóng)大的本科，荷蘭ISS or EUR的學(xué)費(fèi)全免研究生(ISS屬于EUR的學(xué)院，但在發(fā)展學(xué)的領(lǐng)域完全可以單獨(dú)拿出來說話)，到2016年教授且只教授寫作4年，包括雅思和托福(有機(jī)會(huì)我們可以再說說雅思和托福在寫作的區(qū)別和槽點(diǎn)= =)，教出來的學(xué)生寫作7分的少一些，6.5的一大堆，應(yīng)該是可以作為一名小小的教師代表進(jìn)行發(fā)言~

好，每次下課之后，來問問題的每個(gè)同學(xué)都免不了以下的對(duì)話：

“老師!你看我還有一個(gè)星期/兩個(gè)星期/一個(gè)月的時(shí)間了，我能不能拿到作文6分/6.5分/7分!”

然后，基本上我可以一句話給他們打回去：

“要比較穩(wěn)定的拿到6分/6.5分，你的大小作文加起來寫夠了20篇/30篇了么?”

“老師，并沒有~”

“那就乖乖回去寫夠了再來問我問題=。=”

好的，那么可能各位要問，寫夠了20篇真能上6分么?從整體(而不是個(gè)例)的角度來看，一般情況下能乖乖的寫20篇的同學(xué)，對(duì)于寫作的態(tài)度就還算是可以的，而20篇到底花了各位多少時(shí)間呢?一共10小時(shí)而已。連完整的10小時(shí)都不肯給寫作還想拿6/6.5/7分，親你是要上天么~(語法且思維好的同學(xué)除外，比如我當(dāng)年還是學(xué)生的時(shí)候第一次裸考寫作就是6.5，靠的就是語法少錯(cuò)誤和比較強(qiáng)的撕逼能力= =)

雅思寫作的核心組成元素

從整體來看，整個(gè)雅思寫作其實(shí)一共注重三個(gè)大部分，一個(gè)是語法，一個(gè)是同義改寫，一個(gè)是邏輯，并且提升難度確實(shí)也是語法<同義改寫<邏輯。以下詳細(xì)講解三大元素的提升之道。點(diǎn)擊標(biāo)題進(jìn)入。

提升雅思寫作水平第一境界--語法篇

提升雅思寫作水平第二境界--同義轉(zhuǎn)換篇

提升雅思寫作水平第三境界--邏輯篇

雅思寫作水平提升之路總結(jié)

我們說了這么多東西，其實(shí)目的就是一個(gè)，你可以看看你距離6.5分的要求還有多遠(yuǎn)，以及，三個(gè)部分，你最缺失的是哪一個(gè)部分。從整體(我都是拿大部分的學(xué)生為例，因?yàn)槲易约阂彩莻€(gè)例外= =)來看，各個(gè)分?jǐn)?shù)段差不多是以下的情況組合：

5.5分：

1. 語法比較爛，brainstorming也不太好

2. 用了太多的理由，導(dǎo)致沒有拓展

6分：

1. 語法比較爛，但是brainstorming不錯(cuò)

2. 有一定的細(xì)節(jié)拓展(就例如software你可以舉例是office suite里面的word)

6.5分：

1. 語法不錯(cuò)，brainstorming也不錯(cuò)

2. 有一定的細(xì)節(jié)拓展

7分及以上：

1. 基本不要出語法錯(cuò)誤，brainstorming也不錯(cuò)

2. 每個(gè)理由都有細(xì)節(jié)拓展

這是我教這幾年來遇到的絕大部分學(xué)生的情況總結(jié)，還請(qǐng)各位同學(xué)看看自己是屬于哪一個(gè)情況~

接下來我們說說具體的復(fù)習(xí)情況：

小作文：

乖乖的先抄幾遍劍橋小作文的考官范文，動(dòng)態(tài)圖推薦范文有劍7T2T1(p53)和劍9T4T1(p101)，前面一篇很簡單，后面一篇很黃很暴力，如果你可以成功的把后面一篇給研究透，那么所有的動(dòng)態(tài)圖你都可以大笑著甩掉它們~

靜態(tài)圖并沒有太好的考官范文，大部分正好都趕上是學(xué)生寫的= =所以推薦一個(gè)混合類的靜態(tài)圖是劍8T1T1(p30)，好好學(xué)習(xí)考官是怎么做的~

至于流程圖or地圖題，沒有必要先去復(fù)習(xí)，例如我3月5號(hào)考試，那么等2月27號(hào)考試結(jié)束之后你再去決定要不要看就可以，總的來看幾率是25%，也就是說平均一個(gè)月一次地圖or流程，2015年的分配是8次地圖+4次流程，各位可以心里有個(gè)數(shù)~然后，至于預(yù)測小作文類型這東西，基本上是人品+概率的事情，主要還是看各位的真實(shí)水平。(rp好的一些同學(xué)從來不知道什么叫做地圖and流程圖。。。)

簡單來說一句話：小作文好好搞劍橋考官范文

大作文：

情況比較復(fù)雜，可以參照剛才的自測試試看自己最缺失的是哪一個(gè)部分然后對(duì)癥下藥。

如果是語法部分不太行，請(qǐng)參照剛才的9個(gè)句子，先保證自己不會(huì)犯這9個(gè)問題。

如果是同義改寫部分，請(qǐng)把剛才的5個(gè)簡單句全部用到你的大作文之中，同時(shí)保證前后兩句話不要使用相同的主語;短語的部分，可以參照任何老師所給的“同義改寫必備詞組”or“必備詞伙”，但更重要的是，請(qǐng)你在練習(xí)作文的時(shí)候真的嘗試用進(jìn)去，而不是背完就算了~

邏輯的部分，請(qǐng)認(rèn)真拿出來14年or15年之中任意一整年的題目進(jìn)行brainstorming練習(xí)，每個(gè)題目不超過4分鐘即可，一年一共48道題目，所耗費(fèi)的時(shí)間不會(huì)太長，但這是大有裨益的~(至于正確答案什么的，我才不會(huì)告訴你我正準(zhǔn)備再重新整理一下14~15年所有題目的所有能想到且能寫出來整體段落的idea~)

至于作文的批改，要看各位的作文欠缺的是什么，如果僅僅是語法不太好，那么上有的是各種外教可以進(jìn)行語法修改，因?yàn)橹挥姓Z法修改，所以還是可以保證質(zhì)量的，但如果你欠缺的是行文邏輯，那么還是請(qǐng)你找一位你覺得靠譜的老師，發(fā)一篇你覺得你寫的不錯(cuò)的文章給他/她看，看看人家有什么意見。如果你給老師發(fā)的篇數(shù)超過3篇，請(qǐng)記得要給老師紅包，因?yàn)榭醋魑?，特別是仔細(xì)看作文，并不是一件輕松的事情......

關(guān)于市面上任何一本寫作書，每本書都有其各自的優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)，(雖然我心里都有數(shù))但是我不太方便對(duì)每本書進(jìn)行評(píng)價(jià)(~)，只能說只要是公開出版物，就不要背其中的大作文范文，可以多記記短語，看看別人的brainstorming有哪些想法，但是不要背誦成品作文，除非是老師私下自己寫的，沒有做成書出版的，那么你可以放心去模仿甚至是去背~

最后，重要的事情說三遍：

乖乖去寫作文

乖乖去寫作文

乖乖去寫作文

雅思寫作解題思路之科技與傳統(tǒng)的沖突

2014年8月雅思寫作預(yù)測題目：科技與傳統(tǒng)的沖突。When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

支持正方

Modern technology is efficient, whereas traditional ways have low productivity, e.g. cultivating crops

Technological progress is a social trend which is inevitable, e.g. from pigeon mail (飛鴿傳書)to telephones to smart--‐phones, people have kept moving on from old ways of doing things.

支持反方

?? Traditions embody the culture, and the continuation of civilisation highly depends on it. If traditions were abandoned, the corresponding culture disappeared as well, and the world would become a boring whole, e.g. it is hard to imagine a Chinese that does not celebrate Spring Festival, so does an American who forget about Thanks Giving. 政府資助語言保護(hù)

(語言中體現(xiàn)傳統(tǒng) ，很多傳統(tǒng)電機(jī)都是由語言作為載體進(jìn)行傳承的 ，無論是文字的還是口頭的 。);政治家與科學(xué)家，孰重孰輕(政治家制定政策保護(hù)傳統(tǒng)文化)

Tradition is the origin of literally all technological innovation, e.g. from rope knot count (結(jié) 繩計(jì)數(shù)) to math to calculation to modern computing science. In other words, technology is merely the other facet (另一面) of tradition.

An interesting thought is that we can use technology to protect and even promote tradition,

e.g. the productions of shadow play (皮影戲) are too old to fascinate people nowadays, especially the younger generation. Instead of giving up this unique form of art and watching ‘Britain’s Got Talents’, some people have decided to revive it by employing modern script writing and filming techniques to make it popular again. 科技進(jìn)步的利弊;政治家與科 學(xué)家，孰重孰輕(科學(xué)家研發(fā)的科技有利于傳統(tǒng)的保護(hù))

論據(jù)共享題

政府資助語言保護(hù)

Some people believe governments should spend money in saving languages of few speakers from dying out. Others think it waste of financial resources. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

科技進(jìn)步的利弊

Technological progress in the past century has its negative effect, despite its remarkable contribution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

政治家與科學(xué)家，孰重孰輕

Some people think politicians have the greatest influence on the world. Other people, however, believe that scientists have the greatest influence. Discuss both of views and give your opinion.

雅思寫作思路之明天重要還是今天重要

2014年8月雅思寫作預(yù)測題目：明天重要還是今天重要。An American film actor John Wayne once said “Tomorrow is the most important thing in life”. How important it is for individual and government to think about the future rather than focus on the present?

支持正方

Tomorrow should not and must not be foregone. For example, The Chinese government is currently phasing out its manufacturing industries which are energy--‐consuming and inefficient. Instead, the government is carrying out a series of actions and sparing no effort to bring up promising industries, e.g. new energy source, so as to ensure its sustainable development.

Tomorrow is the designer of today. Take myself as an example, as a student whose life remains most in the blue print, I dream of becoming a useful person to my country one day. However, I find my current ability rather inadequate to realise such ambition. Thus I finally made my decision to live fully the present and to be hardworking on my admission to a prestigious oversea university, so that I may gain the chance of getting further education.

支持反方

There is no doubt today is a most precious moment of life, which is why it is called “the present”—the gift of life to us. It is the lesson we took today that makes the compass for tomorrow, and it is the painstaking work we carry out today that paves the way for tomorrow’s journey. In other words, the future ends in a deserted present.

雅思寫作辯證題解題思路之獨(dú)善其身

2014年8月雅思寫作預(yù)測題目：獨(dú)善其身。Individuals and countries cannot help everyone who needs help in the world, so we should be only concerned about our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?.現(xiàn)提供本篇雅思寫作解題思路供大家參考。

雅思寫作辯證題解題思路之支持反方

Some countries are trapped in domestic troubles, let alone lend a hand to other countries,

e.g. the civil war in Congo and starvation as well as water shortage in South Sudan.

A big proportion of international aids are abused by the government and authorities of many underdeveloped countries, causing hopeless corruption.

A good many international aids are devils in angel’s clothing (穿著天使外衣的惡魔), e.g. special funds are offered with strict strings attached (嚴(yán)苛的附加條件), such as taking charge of local resources & intervening domestic policy.

雅思寫作辯證題解題思路之支持正方

ive in the same world, therefore it is our responsibility to give a hand to those who need help.

Butterfly effect: deforestation in Amazon will eventually lead to the degrading of air quality of New York.

Mutual help enhances international friendship and even eliminate hostility, e.g. Turkey’s help when Greece suffered from earthquake, China’s aid after the Tsunami in Japan.

It cannot be overlooked that ubiquitous international mutual assistance is no better than a fine wish, and reality nevertheless does not allow the happening of it. Old saying has it that dreams are always fertile, but reality simply remains barren (老話說得好：理想都是

豐滿的，現(xiàn)實(shí)都是骨感的); it is the compromise of the two that makes who we are, human.

Thus, I would like to pin down on the realistic side of this issue; meanwhile it is crucial

_that only true aids are offered and countries develop themselves without harming others’ benefits .

論據(jù)共享題

經(jīng)濟(jì)援助還是行動(dòng)援助

Developing countries require international organization’s help. Some people think financial aids are better while others believe practical aid and advice make more sense. Discuss and give your opinion.

同套路題

動(dòng)物園

Zoos are useful to protect the rare animals. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

動(dòng)物實(shí)驗(yàn)

Some people think it is necessary to use animals for testing medicines intended for human use. Others, however, think it's not right to do that. Discuss both of these views and give you own opinion.

保護(hù)瀕危動(dòng)物還是救助地球人

There are many animal species extinct today. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human beings. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

特殊群體是否應(yīng)該在大學(xué)錄取時(shí)獲得特殊待遇

Some groups, such as poor people and people from rural areas, think universities should make it especially easy for them to get access to university education. To what extent do

you agree or disagree?

助健康的人還是救垂危的人

Some people think it is more important to spend public money on promoting healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment for people who are ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

環(huán)境與經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展的矛盾

Some people think pollution and damage of environment are resulted from a country developing and becoming richer, and this is hard to be avoided. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

雷同題

Some people believe charities should give aid to those in greatest need, wherever they live. Others think charities should better concentrate on helping people who live in their own countries. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.