雅思寫作是一項(xiàng)比較難以提高的的項(xiàng)目，主要是由于詞匯語法和邏輯思維都有所差異，那么有哪些寫作方式是比較常見的錯(cuò)誤呢?下面小編就和大家分享雅思寫作常見錯(cuò)誤分析,希望能夠幫助到大家，來欣賞一下吧。

雅思寫作常見錯(cuò)誤分析

中式英文

Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life

In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

Topic 2- The population problem

The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?

I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……

Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”.

觀點(diǎn)模糊態(tài)度曖昧

Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little,only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

偏離主題

Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真題)

I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English,music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

語法錯(cuò)誤慘不忍睹

Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished? (雅思真題)

About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should.

過分簡單沒有重點(diǎn)

Topic-The importance of environmental protection

This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

用詞不當(dāng) 表達(dá)不準(zhǔn)

Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.

意思重復(fù)原地踏步

Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.

中國俗語胡亂翻譯

Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?

I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……

正確說法：Happiness lies in having many children

Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?

We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know,don’t know is don’t know”……

Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix,rat’s son can make hole……

Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”.

觀點(diǎn)武斷 態(tài)度強(qiáng)硬

Topic1-The importance of confidence

In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.

Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem

I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obeythe traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’msure there will be no traffic problem any more.

雅思寫作需注意的10個(gè)核心準(zhǔn)則

Elementary principles of composition

1. Make the paragraph the unit of composition: one paragraph to each topic

不同的段落構(gòu)成文章，每個(gè)段落僅傳遞一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)

2. As a rule, begin each paragraph with a topic sentence; end it in conformity with the beginning

規(guī)則：每個(gè)段落均以主題句開頭，并且首尾呼應(yīng)。

A. the topic sentence comes at or near the beginning;

主題句前置

B. the succeeding sentences explain or establish or develop the statement made in the topic sentence;

段落圍繞主題句展開，后面的句子對主題句進(jìn)行展開解釋

C. the final sentence either emphasizes the thought of the topic sentence or states some important consequence.

末尾句或者對主題句進(jìn)行強(qiáng)調(diào)，或者闡述主題句帶來的結(jié)果。

3. Use the active voice

主動句永遠(yuǎn)比被動句直接有力

Eg: There were a great number of dead leaves lying on the ground

= Dead leaves covered the ground. (清晰生動)

Eg: The reason that he left college was that his health became impaired.

= Failing health compelled him to leave college. (簡潔有力)

Eg: It was not long before he was very sorry that he had said what he had.

= He soon repented his words. (簡潔有力)

4. Put statements in positive form

以肯定的形式表達(dá)否定的意思, 避免使用平淡、毫無色彩，猶豫不決和含糊其辭的語言。

Eg：He was not very often on time.

= He usually came late.

Eg: He did not think that studying Latin was much use.

= He thought the study of Latin useless.

Eg: The taming of the Shrew is rather weak in spots. Shakespeare does not portray Katharine as a very admirable character, nor does Bianca remain long in memory as an important character in Shakespeare’s works.

= The women in The Taming of the Shrew are unattractive. Katharine is disagreeable, Bianca insignificant.

5. Omit needless words

刪除冗詞

Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts. This requires not that the writer make all his sentences short, or that he avoid all detail and treat his subjects only in outline, but that every word tell.

有力的寫作一定簡潔。

Owing to the fact that

=Since (because)

In spite of the fact that

=Though (although)

Call your attention to the fact that

=Remind you (notify you)

The fact that he had not succeeded

=His failure

6. Avoid a succession of loose sentences

別寫流水賬，找找語言的邏輯關(guān)系，通過who, which, when, where, and while 這些詞把句子串起來。

7. Express co-ordinate ideas in similar form

Parallel structure 平行結(jié)構(gòu)講究對稱美：內(nèi)容對等，結(jié)構(gòu)一致。

Eg: Formerly, science was taught by the textbook method, while now the laboratory method is employed.

Parallel structure: Formerly, science was taught by the textbook method; now it is taught by the laboratory method.

8. Keep related words together

詞的位置決定詞的關(guān)系，所以遵循‘物以類聚’，意思關(guān)聯(lián)緊密的詞放在一塊。

A: 主謂之間不分割，補(bǔ)充信息需前置

Eg: Wordsworth, in the fifth book of The Excursion, gives a minute description of this church.

Eg: In the fifth book of the Excursion, Wordsworth gives a minute description of this church. (狀語前置，主謂毗鄰)

B：關(guān)系代詞緊隨先行詞出現(xiàn)

Eg: There was a look in his eye that boded mischief.

Eg: In his eye was a look that boded mischief. (名詞look先行，關(guān)系詞that緊隨)

9. In summaries, keep to one tense

總結(jié)通常使用現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，如果使用過去時(shí)，請保持時(shí)態(tài)一致。

10. Place the emphatic words of a sentence at the end

欲擒故縱的圓周句(periodic sentence)中，強(qiáng)調(diào)信息后置。

Eg: Four centuries ago, Christopher Columbus, one of the Italian mariners whom the decline of their own republics had put at the service of the world and of adventure, seeking for Spain a westward passage to the Indies as setoff against the achievements of Portuguese discoverers, lighted on America.

Eg: With these hopes and in this belief I would urge you, laying aside all hindrance, thrusting away all private aims, to devote yourselves unswervingly and unflinchingly to the vigorous and successful prosecution of this war.

雅思作文：常用來表達(dá)看法與立場的英式短語&句型

Functional Expressions:

Expressing Thoughts and opinions

have mixed views on

(人們)各持不同的看法

實(shí)戰(zhàn)例句

It has been around fifteen years since the Internet was first introduced into British households but people still have mixed views on whether it is a positive or negative influence on society.

從因特網(wǎng)第一次走進(jìn)英國家庭到現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)有將近十五年了，但人們至今關(guān)于網(wǎng)絡(luò)對社會產(chǎn)生的影響究竟是積極的還是消極的仍然意見不一。

常見的反義短語或句型

reach consensus on...

(人們) 對某事達(dá)成一致意見

例句

I will be difficult for people to reach a consensus on this issue.

要讓人們對這一事件達(dá)成統(tǒng)一的意見是十分困難的。

I take the view that..

我所持的看法是……

例句

I take the view that free education should be available to financially needy people.

我所持的看法是應(yīng)該時(shí)那些財(cái)務(wù)緊張的人們提供免費(fèi)的教育。

be of the opinion that...

(某人的) 個(gè)人意見是 (注意不能遺漏句型中的介詞of)

例句

They are of the opinion that morality cannot be legislated.他們的意見是道德是不能由法律來規(guī)定的。

be a highly charged issue

是一個(gè)引起激辯的話題

實(shí)戰(zhàn)例句

Euthanasia is a highly charged issue in many European countries.

安樂死在許多歐洲國家都是一個(gè)備受爭議的話題。

常見的近義短語或句型

ignite fierce debate

引發(fā)了激烈的爭論

例句

The song's lyrics ignited fierce debate last year.

這首歌的歌詞在去年引發(fā)了激烈的爭論。

be a well-established fact

(某事) 是為人們所共知的事實(shí)

例句

It is a well-established fact that very young children learn best by rote.

人們普遮公認(rèn)低齡兒童更適合通過機(jī)械記憶來學(xué)習(xí)。

The tide of opinion is now running steadily against...

目前的觀點(diǎn)普遍傾向于反對……

實(shí)戰(zhàn)例句

The tide of opinion is now running steadily against the new traffic law.

目前人們的觀點(diǎn)普遍傾向于反對新頒布的交通法。

常見近義短語或句型

The majority of people oppose…

多數(shù)人反對……

例句

The majority of people oppose the proposed tax reform.

對于提交上去的稅制改革方案，多數(shù)人持反對意見。

It stands to reason that...

(某現(xiàn)象) 是符合常理的

實(shí)戰(zhàn)例句

It stands to reason that a child who is constantly criticised will grow up to have no self-confidence.

一個(gè)在不斷被挑剔的環(huán)境中長大的孩子，在成年后會變得毫無自信，這是符合常理的邏輯。

常見近義短語或句型

The concerns that... are well-justified.

對于某事的擔(dān)心是完全合理的

例句

The concerns that the new law will curtail(削減)NGO (非政府組織)activities are well-justified.

人們關(guān)于新法規(guī)可能會減少非政府組織活動的擔(dān)心是完全合理的。

It is an inescapable fact that...

是一個(gè)無法回避的事實(shí)

實(shí)戰(zhàn)例句

It is an inescapable fact that some students behave badly and damage the learning environment.

有一些學(xué)生行為惡劣并且破壞學(xué)習(xí)氣氛的問題是一個(gè)無法回避的事實(shí)。

常見近義短語或句型

be unavoidable

是不可避免的

例句

Many people feared that war was unavoidable.

許多人害怕戰(zhàn)爭最終還是會無可避免地來臨。

... be noticeabie

(某種現(xiàn)象) 十分顯著

實(shí)戰(zhàn)例句

The differences between the British and American academic systems are noticeable.

英國和美國的學(xué)術(shù)體制差別十分顯著。

常見近義短語或句型

...be substantial differences

某種差異是本質(zhì)性的

例句

There were substantial differences in the proportion of men and women at various levels.

在不同的級別上，男女人數(shù)的比例有著本質(zhì)性的差異。

The underlying cause of sth. is…

某現(xiàn)象的深層原因是……

實(shí)戰(zhàn)例句

We should look into the underlying cause of this problem.

我們應(yīng)該從更深一層去剖析這個(gè)問題的原因。

常用聯(lián)想短語或句型

A fundamental mistake made by sb.is...

某人所犯的根本性錯(cuò)誤是...

例句

Their fundamental mistake is to rely too much on technology.

他們所犯的根本性錯(cuò)誤就是太過于依賴科技了

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